New mayur ff : Do you realize? part 15 pg.25 - Page 9

Awesome udpate... The dance, fight and argiment was very painful but amazing..

Oh God kash Rahul na sun lia ho plzs plz amnsi Rahul ka ears ko bohat big kar do tajka wo jaldi sub sun la.

ohk now dis is wht i hev been waiting for i wish rahul ne sb sun lia ho

hey

part 10 ws soo excitin ria..
luvd it.. & i hope rahul heard everythng!
thnx 4 d pm & do update soon!

HI guys this part 11 of the FF. I am pretty sure this part won't be upto your expectations, but i had to put it to actually explain mayank and nups feelings, i don't express them very well here, i know i am sorry about that. Also i know the dialogues between Rahul and Mayank are really that strong, but i coudn't figure out exactly how to make it strong and to the point. Overall this is not the best part of the FF, and I am really sorry about that.

Part 11

Rahul started clapping, Mayank looks at him, with no expression.

Rahul: "great bro I am proud of you, you have not gotten your habbit of giving me pain right'. first mom and now my future wife".

Mayank: "rahul aisi koi baat nahi hai, who actually nupur ro rahi thi aur main bas usse console".

Rahul: "oh please bro aap pershaan mat ho, aapko mujhe ustification dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, main janta hun ki aap Nupur se pyar karte hain". Mayank was shocked at this; he thought that maybe his mom had told Rahul.

Rahul: "likin mujhe iss baat ki koi parwaah nahi hai, infact main nupur se shaadi isliye hi toh kar raha hun, I want you to feel the same pain, that I went through jab mom ne mere badle aapko choose kiya tha". Mayank was more shocked here he was sacrificing his life andgiving nupur so much for his brother, and his brother was taking revenge for something that happened in the past.

Rahul: "aapki wajah se mujhe mom se door rehena pada, mom ne hamesha aapko zyada pyar kiya, likin ab meri baari hai aapko ehsaas dilnae ki, main nupur se shaadi karunga".

Mayank: "Rahul tum jaante bhi ho tum kya keh rahe ho, mom ne agar muhe chose kiya isme meri kya galti hai, tum apni is revenge main nupur ko kyun le aaye akhir isme uski kya galti hai".

Rahul: "you are right bro, isme nupur ki koi fault nahi hai sivai iske ki usne aapse pyaar kiya hai". Rahul left Mayank who was shocked. He couldn't belive that his brother would be hard as a stone, he was angry at himself for leaving nupur, he couldn't leave without her.

Mayank: "ab main kya karo, nupur meri baat kabhi nahi sunegi, kya kahunga main usse ki who yeh shaadi tod de, god kyun mere saath hi aisa kyun, akhir meri life inti complicated kyun hai. For the first time in my life I feel helpless, mere saamne problems hai, questions, likin koi solution nahi hai". He hits his fist on the wall and goes to the party hall he tries to look for nupur, but couldn't find her. Then he asked suhani who told him that she has left the party. Mayank also leaves.

Mayank is walk to his car in the parking lot; he opens his car door and then slams it shut. He didn't know what he was doing, the pain, anger, was filling his emotions. He started walking on road, where he didn't know. All he could think right now was the tears he had given nupur, the time he had spent with her memories of their love flood through his mind.

Mayank's Feelings:

Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda, Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar, Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar. (Mayank walks on the mpty road lost in nupur's thoughts, he takes out his wallet which has nups pic, he looks at it her innocence, her shyness was shown, a lone tears escape down his eyes and fell on the picture).

Duniya ke sab aashiqon ki todi hai sab maine rasme Beche hai sab apne vaade, bechi hai sab apni kasme, Bechi hai sab apni kasme (He remembers the time he told nupur the truth about his family, and when nupur gave him her hand to go tell the truth to their family and how he refused).

Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda, Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar, Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar (He slightly kisses nups pics, whishpering I am sorry).
Yeh pyaar ishq aur mohabbat kya hai yeh ab maine jaana Vaapas magar kaise aaye guzra hua voh zamaana, Guzra hua voh zamaana (he remember what Rahul told, him and how Mayank had told nupur he would not marry her even if she refused Rahul's proposal).
Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda, Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar, Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar.

On the other hand Nupur was in her room standing byher balcony door, supported by the wall. She was holding her and Mayank's photo. Nups: "Akhir kyun Mayank, jab bhi main tumse door jaane ki khoshish karti hoon tum utne hi mere pass aajate ho, kyun Mayank".

Zindagi Mein Koyi Kabhi Aaye Na Rabba,Aaye Jo Koyi Toh Phir Jaaye Na, Rabba,Dene Ho Gar Mujhe Baad Mein Aansoo'Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba ( Nupur looks at Mayank' and her picture, touches her finger lightly on it, a tear escapes from her eyes and fells on the photo) Jaate Jaate Koyi Meri Khushiyon Ko Le Gaya,Suni Suni Akhiyon Ko Gham, Koyi De Gaya)

Aas Jo Lagaayi Hai, Aankh Bhar Aayi Hai, Itna Bhi Koyi, Sataaye Na Rabba, (wind blows nups hair, she tries to put them behind her ear, as she remembers how Mayank used to put her layer of hair behind the ear whenever he got the chance, to make her blush)

Zindagi Mein Koyi Kabhi Aaye Na Rabba,Aaye Jo Koyi Toh Phir Jaaye Na Rabb,Dene Ho Gar Mujhe Baad Mein Aansoo'Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba (Then she remembers how he told her to marry someone else)

Dil Lene Waale Pe Zor Nahin Chalta, Pyaar Ka Ye Sikka, Kahin Aur Nahin Chalta) Yaad Teri Aayi Hai, Tu Harjaai Hai, Itna Bhi Koyi Tadpaaye Na Rabba, (She remembers the closeness between Mayank and her during the party and how mad he was when Rv tried to harm her).

Zindagi Mein Koyi Kabhi Aaye Na Rabba ,Aaye Jo Koyi Toh Phir Jaaye Na Rabba,Dene Ho Gar Mujhe Baad Mein Aansoo'Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba (Nupur slowly sits down on the floor, tears rolling down her eyes).

Promo:
Sam was flaring with anger, Nupur and gunjan were both shocked, they had never seen the angry side of Samrat.
Sam: "Nupur agar tumne ye shaadi ki, toh main tumse kabhi baat nahi karunga, it will be the end of our relationship".
Nups: "Sam please meri baat toh suno, i have already lost my love now i don't want to lose a friend".
Sam: "Nupur tumhara love apne aap gaya hai, but hamare relationship ko bachane ka faisla tumhara hai".

Not a really good part, but please do give some reviews😊. Also the dialogues for the next part might not be exactly same as the Promo.

that was a heartwrenching update dear..rahul is such a jerk....hope mayu will save nupzi from the "so called marriage".......

hi
it was very sad and shocking update
i felt sad for both mayank and nupur
rahul- the stupid jerk - i want to kill him

i just hope mayank will save nups frm this revenge marriage.
very good update .
loved it so much
do cont it.

oh gosh.. dis is a shocker..
rahul..is doin all dis 4 revenge!!
aww.. my poor nups... i'm feelin really bad 4 her!!
mayu.. kuch karo.. bacho nups ko..
wt a twist ria... i really luvd it!