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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
oh its soo terrible seeing mayur in soo much pain....wish mayank had taken a step forward in front of both da families...bt i guess both r in equal pain....oh GOD da promo luks gud plzzz update n continue it n plzz cn u plzzz plzz pm me whenever does i really lyked it n had already missed 3 parts bt now hav read it all n its amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
hi
how r u?
We all r waiting for ur update
plz plz update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Thank you everyone for supporting me so much, with my ff, i really appreciate all of your comments. 😊
@Princez_94: oh they will not be having a nice ending just yet, maybe in few more parts you will have to wait for the twist, i am not sure if you would call it a twist or not, but i hope you guys like it.
I will be updating this ff soon......😊
Edited by lopli - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: lopli

Thank you everyone for supporting me so much, with my ff, i really appreciate all of your comments. 😊
@Princez_94: oh they will not be having a nice ending just yet, maybe in few more parts you will have to wait for the twist, i am not sure if you would call it a twist or not, but i hope you guys like it.
I will be updating this ff soon......😊

Oh that's okay... even thoguh it's a sad track I'm loving it... 😳
Laiba
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Hi guys thanks all of you for supporting me, and liking this ff so much. This part is dedicated to all my ff readers, i know you have been waiting for the update.
Here it is.

Part 10

Nupur and Rahul were walking into the college party, nupur was wearing pink color frok suit, while Rohan was wearing a formal suit. Both were at an entrance gate there was bowl, and suhani was standing beside it. Suhani came and huggesd nupur.

Suhani: "here pick a chit". Holding the bowl towards rahul and nups.

Nupur: "yeh kis liye hai".

Suhani: "yeh party planning hai, jonsa number tumhare paas ayega aur who same number jiske paas ho ga who tum hara dancing partner hoga". Nups smiled and picked a chit.

Nups: "18".

Rahul: "oh shoot ek number se reh gaya 19".

Suhani: "really well I am number 19". Nups thanked her luck she has been trying to avoid talks with Rahul, it was really awkward for her.

Three of them walked into the party. Nupur looked around and saw Mayank who was standing with Sam and Gun, They walked over to them, nupur kept her eyes down. She didn't have the courage to look at Mayank.

Gun: "hi nups, hi rahul, finally tum log aa hi gaye, we have been waiting for so long".

Rahul: "sorry ab meri koi galti nahi hai aapki behen hi itna time lagati hai tyaar hone ke lie". He winks at nupur, which Mayank notices, he feels pain, but tries his best to cover his emotions.

Sam: "hi nups tumhara token number kya hai".

Nups: "jij mera 18 hai aapka kya hai".

Sam: " 20".

Nups: "crap aapka bhi nahi hai, yeh 18 number kiska hai".

Mayank: "mera token number 18 hai". He showed his token, nupur looked at him there eyes met, passing the pain to each other. Just then an announcement was made.

Announcer: " Couples from number 10-18 please step on the dance floor. Mayank and Nupur stayed still, feeling awkward, not knowing what to do.

Suhani: "arre tum dono yahan khare kyun ho jao na". Suhani pushed nups and Mayank onto the dance floor. They both looked into each others eyes, the lights in the room go dim.

Mayank took a step closer to nupur and lightly put his hand around her waist, nupur felt his touch it has been almost 3 weeks since they had been this close to each other. Nupur moves her hand to his shoulder, Mayank takes her other hand they both start slow dancing on the song dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se. Mayank and nupur are really close to each other they feel each others present. Both can't get their eyes off of each other. They can see through those eyes the pain of separation. As Mayank pulls her more closer for the dance, nupur feels a tear rolling down her eyes. She felt so incomplete without him. He also felt the same, as if a part of him has been missing. The closeness was hurting nupur so bad, she couldn't take the pain anymore, she pulled her hand out of mayank's hand and left the party hall. No one noticed this except Samrat. Mayank looks at nupur leaving, he knew she was crying and he couldn't let that happen he followed her outside.

Nupur on the other hand was in her chemistry class, she was crying her heart out, she couldn't leave without Mayank, the more she was trying to keep herself away from him, the less she was successceding. Suddenly she heard the door open of the classroom, and then closed.

Nups: "Mayank please yahan se chale jao, leave me alone".

Guy: "tumhe main akela kaise chor sakta hun, tumse toh purana hisaab hai". Nupur turned around to the voice, which was definitely not Mayank's but RV's.

Nups: "tum, tum yahan kaya kar rahe ho, tumhe is college mein aane ki permission nahi hai".

RV: "Ranvijay ko kahin bhi jaane ke liye permission nahi chahiye hoti". He takes a step closer and nups takes a step back. RV caught nupurs arm and pulled her a little closer.

Nups: "RV let me go".

RV: "agar nahi jaane diya toh kya karlogi".

Nups: "I will scream RV let me go, ouch". RV gives a wicked smile, while nups was in pain, tears rolling down her eyes.

RV: "chilaogi, chilao, no one hear you saare party mein enjoy kar rahe hain, aur tumhe yaad hai tumne mujhe 6 months phele kya poocha tha ki mere dimaag mein kya chal raha hai, aaj main tumhe uska jawab dunga". He moved a little more closer to nups, while nups was thinking about why she came out of the party hoping Mayank would come.

RV: "actually main tumhe apni feelings baad mein bataunga phele main tumse tumhari behen ka toh badla le loon, usne mujhe thapad mara tha na". Nups heart beat increased, she was really afraid as the classroom was really dark, and she knew no could hear her scream it would be useless. She struggled to get out of RV's grip, but his fingers were digging in Nups skin and his grip was strong. RV was about to slap nups, when a hand grips his hand. Both RV and nups look at the hand, it was Mayank. His eyes were flaring with anger. He let go of RV's hand punched him right on the face.

Mayank: "how dare you touch her"? Nups was scared she had never seen Mayank this much angry, she moved back to the wall as Mayank started hitting RV.

Nups: "Mayank please stop it, Mayank usse chod do ". Mayank doesn't listen he carries on punching RV, he throws her out of the classroom, was about to give him another punch.

Nups: "Mayank please stop it". Screamed Nupur. Mayank let go of RV and looked at nupur, who was crying really hard now. Mayank comes back to nupur who was holding her arm, where RV's hand had made it all red. Mayank lightly touched nups arm where it was red.

Nups: "ouch……". Mayank took nups hand in his hands and lightly cleaned her tears with his thumb.

Mayank: "Nups tum thik toh ho na, I am really sorry nups mujhe jaldi aana chahiye tha". Mayank and nupur were really close, they both forgot about the marriage, their argument their separation. Mayank slightly kissed nups forhead, he kissed her eyes, while nups heart beat increased.

Nups: "I love you Mayank, main tumhare….bina nahi jee sakti.....". Mayank. Nups pulls Mayank a little closer she hugged Mayank hiding her face in his chest.

Nups: "I love you". Mayank realized what he was doing, he had to keep himself away from her not closer to her. He let go of nups in an instant, while nups stabled herself. Mayank took five steps aways from her.

Mayank: "I am sorry nups, who actually hmmmm main tumhe console karne ki koshish, tum yahan akele karne kya aayi thi, tum aur problems ka koi purana rishta hai kya". Mayank was mad, at the incident before he was thinking what could have happened if he hadn't came on time. Nups was already upset over the RV incident and now Mayank was yelling at her. She was filled with anger, because she couldn't control herself, because Mayank came closer to her.

Nups: "Jabse tum meri life main aaye ho tabse meri life main bas problems, or gham hai, agar tumhe mujhse chorna hi that oh kyun pyar kiya mujhse, kyun sapne dikhaye mujhe, thanks mujhe aaj bachane ke liye". Nupur was about to walk out of the class room, when she bent down, because her foot was sprained. Mayank moved closer to help her but nups stopped him with her hand.

Mayank: "nups mujhe dekhne do, dard ho raha hai na".

Nups: "nahi Mayank utna dard nahi ho raha jitna tumne mujhe diya hai". Saying this nups leaves the classroom.

Mayank back himself on the wall, he supports himself with the wall.

Mayank: "Nupur jitna dard tumhe ho raha hai utna hi mujhe bhi bas tumhe mere dard se bekhabar ho". Mayank clears the tear from his eyes, he was leaving the classroom, when he sees Rahul standing in front of him.

Do leave your reviews😊

I know this part is not that good, but i had to write it really fast as all of you have been waiting for the update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
mindblowng update dear............hope rahul heard everything..............
Edited by achoose - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Hi dear
thanx for updating this ff
Fantastic update
thnax GOD maynak saved nupur
u end it at crucial point.
i just hope rahul heard it.
lovelyyyyyy update
keep updating
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
today i read all d ten parts
great ff
AWESOME SUPERB TOO GOOD
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pls PM ME DEAR WHEN U UPDATE NEXT
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
hey the part was really nice
i hope rahul might have understood everything and he should help in uniting the lovers........

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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
mindblowng update dear............hope rahul heard everything..............

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