New mayur ff : Do you realize? part 15 pg.25

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Hi guys i am a silent reader of this form but i have a habit of writing OS and ffs on Mayur. I have never posted any of them here this would be my first so pls bear with me. I appreciate all of you who are reading it and who are not too. I have started this ff but i am not sure if i will finish it or not, so just saying you guys don't keep your hopes high. There might be some grammar and spelling mistakes. sorry for that 😊


Over view: Nupur has been gone for her medical study for 3 months. Her decision was made at the last moment and she didn't get the time to say bye to Mayank. Mayank feels that Nupur doesn't love him and he was mad at Nupur for living. He didn't try to contact her at all, because of his ego and same for Nupur. Though they both asked their friends on others where about s and how they were. Story starts from a valentine's day.

Mayank was sitting at a table bored. He wasn't enjoying the party at all, but feeling lonely. He was missing his valentine. In the morning he picked up his phone a few time to call her but never did because of his ego, saying that she could have called me too. Now all of his friends in the party were couples dancing. He was sitting in a corner having flashbacks of his Ms. Drama queen. Just then Rohan walks up to Mayank. Rohan: "Kya baat hai Mayank party enjoy toh kar raha hai na". Mayu: "haan yaar I am having a blast". Mayank said in a bored voice. Rohan: "yaar tera expression teri statement se match nahi kar raha yah toh expression change kar yah blast word change kar". Mayank: "yaar pls dimag mat kharab kar". Mayank said irritated. Rohan: (pulling Mayank from his seat) " acha chal main tujhe apni nayi girlfriend se milata hun". Mayank: (gives a naughty smile) " kaunsi wali # 41, 42, 43, ya phir 44 se huh?". Rohan had introduced Mayank to 20 girls which were all his ex girlfriends. Rohan glared at Mayank. Rohan: "nahi yaar yeh meri last gf hai I love her". Mayank: (gives another mischievous look) " toh matlab # 45 chal yaar bas I hope that yeh bhi tujhe un larkiyo ki tarah dump na karde". Rohan: "backwass band kar aur chal". Mayank gets up and Rohan and him start walking to the other corner of the party hall.

On the other corner Nupur was sitting on a table with Ashwini, her friend from the medical camp. Nupur had come back last night but Mayank was oblivious of her return. And she didn't call him, because Mayank hadn't even called her once in these three months. She was really hurt at his ignorance. She didn't want to come to the party, because she didn't want to face Mayank, but Ashwini had forced her to come. Still at the party Nupur's eyes were searching for Mayank. Ashwini: " oh hello madam (snapping in from of Nupurs eyes) kaha kho gayi". Nupur: (coming out of her thought) " kahin nahi bas couples ko dekh rahi thi". Ashwini: " acha yaar chal chale main tujhe apne pyar se milati hoon" . Ashwini tries to pull nupur into a standing position. Nupur: (resisting) " pls yaar tu chali jaa". Ashwini pulls nupur into a standing position.

Now both Mayank and Nupur were both walking towards each other without knowing. They were almost ten feet apart but because both were looking in a different direction, they didn't see each other. Suddenly Nupur slips on the liquid drink that was dropped by someone. Nupur was almost about to fall when Mayank catches her , in this Nupur's duppatta was now on her face while she was in Mayank's arms. Mayank could see her face. Mayank: "app thik toh hai na" . Just then nupur takes the duppta off her face and Mayank and Nupur see each other. They were lost in each others eyes tears started welling up in Nupurs eyes but she controlled herself. Both come out of the eye lock by Rohan's fake cough. Both Ashwini and rohan were unknown of Mayank and nupurs relation. Mayank Nupur stand straight and smile at Rohan. Rohan: "to Mayank hey isse milo yeh hai meri Ashwini" (hugging her). Mayank: "hi". Ashwini: "hi"' aur yeh hai meri friend Nupur introducing to Mayank and Rohan. Rohan: " hi nupur how are you". Nupur: "hi rohan I am fine thank you" (totally ignoring Mayank). Rohan: "anyways nuour ek baat batao tumhe pyar vyar hua ki nahi I mean valentines day hai aur tum akili". Nupur's face expression changed tears formed up in her eyes but she still controlled them. She was about to answer but Mayank jumped in. Mayank: "Rohan pyar sirf unko hota hai jo pyar samaj sakte ho har kissi ko nahin". Now nupur was totally hurt by Mayank's statement . She run out of the party hall embarrassed by people staring at her but didn't stop till she was out. Rohan : "Mayank yaar kabhi toh apna sadrial attitude ghar oe chor ke aaya kar, aur atleast laadkiyo se to tameez mein baat kar liya kar". Mayank did feel about what he said he ignored rohan's statement and went outside to look for nupur. Rohan: (to Ashwini) " yaar in logo kya hua". Ashwini: "pata nahi anyways chalo hum party enjoy karte hain".

Mayank was now outside he was trying to look for nupur as far as he knew her she wouldn't leave since it was night and she was scared to go alone at night. He looked everywhere then he spotted her in the clay classroom (yah the party was help at their college). Mayank entered the classroom there was not much light in the room except the white light from fish lamp. Nupur turned around at the sound of footsteps she saw Mayank and lowered her eyes. Mayank could see the tears in her eyes. Mayank: "tum kyun ro rahi ho mujhe bina bataye jaane ka faisla toh tumhara tha na". Nupur was shocked at Mayank's tone she tries to walk out of the classroom when Mayank holds her hand and stops her. Mayank: "kahan jaa rahi ho nupur I am not done". Nupur: (controlling her tears) "Mayank pls let go of my hand mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni". Mayank pulls her and now nupur was standing in front of him. Mayank: "likin mujhe baat karni hai nupur, aakhir tum mujhe bata kar kyun nahi gayi nupur tumhe zara bhi andazza hai ki main tumhare bina 3 mahine kaise raha hoon, ek phone tak nahi kya tumne". Nupur: "Mayank phone toh tumbhi kar sakte the na, aur mera decision last moment pe bana tha isliye main tumhe bata nahi sakti. Likin tumne jo aaj kiya tumhe kya lagta hai main tumse pyaar nahi karti. Mayank main in teen mahinoey ka hare k din kaise guzara hai tumhe pata bhi hai. Maine tumhe her pal yaad kiya hia aur tum (now nupur was seriouls crying she was talking loud and her voice was a little bit cracking, Mayank felt bad for saying all that he didn't want to fight with her but couldn't control himself) hum aaj 3 months ke baad mil rahe hain aur tum mujhse laddai kar rahe ho ( Nupur takes a step back and in a more louder voice, Mayank was trying to come closer to her to console her but she kept pusing him off) tumne ek baar mujhe I love you tak nahi kaha ( nupur said as she pushed mayanks hand one more time). Mayank was tired of her stubbornness finally Mayank cornered her to a wall. Mayank: "bas nupur bohut hogaya bas". Nupur tried to get away from him but Mayank blocked her path by putting his hand on the wall. He moved more closer to nupur he cupped her face in his hands, cleared her tears with his thumb and whishpered. Mayank: " I love you nupur, I missed you". Nupur forgot all her anger. Nupur: " I missed you too". Mayank bended towards nupurs lips their lips were few inches apart. Nupur's heart started beating faster. Mayank feeling nupurs heartbeat smiled and kissed her on her forehead. When they separated nupur Mayank touched their foreheads and smiled. Mayank hugged nupur tightly. Nupur did the same. Just then Samrat and Gunjan's head popped in the classroom. Sam: "hi nups tumhare parent tumhe ghar bhula rahe hain okay". Mayank: (irritated) " Sam tum log har waqt galat waqt par kyun aate ho". Sam: "I am sorry ji likin aapke hone waale saas sasur aapki hone waali beti ko bula rahe hai". Nupur was about walk with sam and gunjan when Mayank holda her hand. Nupur: "Mayank kya kar rahe ho choro mujhe". Mayank: "sam or gunjan tum log jaao main nupur ko ghar chod dunga we need spent some time together". He winks at nupur. Sam: "okay as you wish". All four of them leave the college. Mayank and Nupur were in the parking lot. Nupur: "Mayank hum log ghar kasse jaayenge aur ajj toh koi auto bhi nahi milega". Mayank: (giving a wicked smile he walks over to a silver BMW and sits on the bonnet) "hum iss ram pyari mein ghar jayenge". Nupur didn't know that Mayank had bought a car from his first job. Nupur: "Mayank hum kissi aur ki ghadi main ghar nahi jaa sakte". Mayank: "pata hai mujhe likin yeh ghari kissi aur ki nahi balki Mr. soon hone waali Mrs. Mayank Sharma ki hai. Nupur was shocked in three months Mayank had done such a great job that he even bought a car. Mayank: "ab chale meri I mean hamari ghari ki passenger seat kabse aap se milna chahati hai".

Mayank and nupu were in the car half to nupurs house, in the mean time they have discussed how much they have missed each other. Nupur had gotten excepted to work in one of the best hospital as an intern Sanjeevni. While mayank's was getting new business deals. Mayank: "nupur main kuch soch raha tha". Nupur: "kya". Myank puts his hand on nupur's hand which was resting on her lap nupur looked at Mayank. Mayank: "humhe tumhare parents ko bata dena chahiya". A smile spread across nupurs face. Mayank: " I mean hum dono ne apne career bana liye hai aur I love you". Nupur smiles just then they reached nupurs house. Nupur got out of the car so did Mayank.

Criticism is welcomed. I haven't thought a name for this ff you guys can give me ideas and i will decide also you can give me ideas on how to process the story. This basically would be an ff that we all contribute to. Please don't get mad at me if i don't use your idea.

Main point: please tell me if i should continue or not.

Thank you

My name is Ria

Index
Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 2
Part 3: Page 3
Part 4: Page 4
Part 5: Page 5
Part 6: Page 6
Part 7: Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 job dear
amazing ff loved it
but ff sould be posted
in fan fictions forum
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please do continue..!!
great start....i'd love to read more.....
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hi ria
it was lovely😛
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do continue and yes great job.plz dont bring twist let them marry happily
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hey ria is very gud

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amazing start dear...pls continue soon.........................................
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NICE FF..........plz pm me when u update
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Nice start...it'll be great to read more...
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