New mayur ff : Do you realize? part 15 pg.25

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

oh no yr it ws gud dnt underestimate urself it ws really gud n da promo is also too gud...liked it alot

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Gr9 part... That Rashul is such a B****d,,, God... It wasn't Mayank's decision, it wa shis mom's... o why is is after Mayank... God i felt really bad for Mayank... He did soo mcuh for him, he sacrifsed hi love, his lfie for hima dn tjhsi is what he gets... 😭

And i feel even more bad for Nupur... What was her msitake she's just beign used, or like a toy .. firt u give ti to soemone and then to someone else... By God i feel terribel for Nupur... 😭

But I lvoed the pre-cap...Fianlly someone is doing something... I love Samrat for that...

But I ahve this bad feelign Nupur Will marry Rahul... But we'll see...

Amazing udpate doo continue soona nd break the suspence will she marry or not...

- Laiba

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

WOW.. very heart touching sad update..
I felt Nups n Mayanks pain....😭

God.. i hate that Rahul Jerk🤢... its not even Mayank's fault more over its not Nupurs fault so why is he doing this..
Mayank is his brother n he knw he is sacrificing his pyar, zindagi, happiness (Nups) for him n he is still cold patar dil... erkk i hate him 😡

....but i loved how u portrayed MN feelings😳 in the song...
it was beautiful..👏

--loving the pre-cap... Samrat in anger.. woah😲.. cant wait..😉
also dying to see MAyank save NUps😳 fROm evil Rahul....😡

thanks for pm!🤗
cant wait to read the next update..😍

❤️-Rabiah

Edited by Rabiah - 14 years ago

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Gul

@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

I just wanna kill that Rahul😡

How dare he can dO this with poor MAYUR

]hE IS THE BIG JERk

Thanks God Mayank realize His mistake

Hope Nupur can understand him

Precape i9s so interesting dear

Thanks for pm and Plz update soon

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katherine123

@katherine123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

u write very well...!do pm me nxt tym u write..

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priya

@lopli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Part 12

Sam and Gunjan opened the door to Nupurs room; they looked at the empty bed and got nervous. They knew she would be upset, because of the dance, and then Suhani also witnessed the classroom scene between both of them and she told Samrat about it. He was really pissed at both of them but more at Nupur, since she was ruining her life on purpose.

Gun: "Nupur agar kamre main nahi hai toh kahan hai". Samrat went by the balcony where he saw nupur on the floor resting her head on the door and sleeping. He could tell she fell asleep crying as she was in the same party clothes and her kajal was messed up. Gunjan walked over to Nups put her hand on nups shoulder.

Gunjan: "Nups, utho, nupur". She shaked nupa a bit, and nupu woke up slowly, she opened her eyes to the sunshine, and she looked at Gunjan. She slowly stood up.

Nups: "arre Gun di aap yahan itni subah". Gun: "Nupur tum yuh zameen par kyun so rahi toh aur tumne kapde bhi nahi badle". Nupur looked down at her clothes and she remembered what happened last night at the party.
Nups: "uhmm woh ahmm actually raat ko party main kaafi tired hogayi thi toh isliye shayad".

Sam: "Bas Nupur stop it". Both nupur and gunjan looked at samrat shocked he had never screamed in front of them, more scream at nupur.

Nups: "jij kya hua, aap itne naraz kyun hai".

Sam: "kya hua nupur, kya hua yeh tum humse pooch rahi ho, yeh toh mujhe poochna chahiye". Sam was very angry.

Gun: "Samrat please aram se baat ho sakti hai".

Sam: "Nahi gunjan isse pyar se samjane ka koi faida nahi hai".

Gun: "sam please".

Sam: "Please gun aaj tum kuch nahi kahogi let me talk". Nupur was silently listening to everything. She didn't know how to handly the angry samrat other than listen to him.

Sam: "Nupur akhir tum yeh kya kar rahi ho".

Nups: "kya jij". Nupur asked in a light tone.

Sam: " nupur tum acchi tarah se jaanti ho ki main kis bare mein baat kar raha hun, yeh shaadi kyun kar rahi ho".

Nups: "jij aap jaante hain na kyun, mom dad iss shaadi se bohut khush hain".

Sam: "woh iss shaadi se isliye khush hain kyunki unhe sach nahi pata, tum yeh shaadi sirf isliye kar rahi hoon taaki mayank khush rahe uski family compelete hojaye aur kuch apne parents ki khushi ke liye".

Nups: "jij aisi koi baat nahi, Mayank aur mera koi rishta nahi hai".

Sam: "acha agar tum dono ka koi rishta nahi hai toh tumhari ankho main usse dekhte hi aansou kyun aajate hain". He snatches the photo out of Nups hands and holds it in fron of Nup and Gun.

Sam: "yeh photo ko tumne abtak gale se laga ke rakha hai, Nupur lets put it simple, mujhe koi parwa nahi hai ki tum yeh kiske liye yeh kar rahi ho, likin yeh galat hai nupur, yeh shaadi galat hai, tum iss shaadi ko tod do". Nupur was shocked, how could she do this, her wedding was in two weeks her parents were so happy and excited. She couldn't do this.

Nups: "jij yeh nahi ho sakta".

Sam: "toh thik hai tumhari marzi, likin jis din tumne yeh shaadi ki that day would be the last day of our relationship, forget that you have friend name Samrat". Nupur was shocked she couldn't afford to loose Samrat he had supported her in her every step; they always had so much fun during college, their jokes all the masti they did.

Nups: "Sam tum yeh kya keh rahe ho".

Sam: "sahi keh raha hun tumhe apni zindagi ke saath khelte huye dekhne se acha hai ki main tumse baat karna band kardo, Nupur tum khud socho kya tumhe sach main lagta hai ki tum rahul ke saath reh paogi, Nupur shaadi koi khel nahi hai yeh lifetime relationship hai, yeh koi compromise nahi hai.. Aur yeh shaadi karke tum apne saath saath rahul, ko bhi compromise karne pe majboor kar rahi ho would you ever be able to love him".

A tear rolled down Nups eyes, love she could never be able to love someone other than Mayank. She knew Samrat was right she couldn't even think of spending her life with a different guy.

Nups: "Main yeh sab nahi jaanti hun, likin main yeh shaadi nahi toh sakti jij".

Sam: "As you wish nupur, aaj ke baad hum dono main koi relation nahi hai, mere liye ab tum sirf gun ki behen ho bas sirf ek formal relation hoga, that's it". Sam was really angry he turned around quickly and was about to walk out the door.

Nups: "Sam please meri baat suno, main already apna pyar kho chuki, now I can't afford to loose a friend". Sam turned around and looked at Nupur tears were rolling down her eyes, Gunjan was just standing there, and she knew supporting either side would be wrong at the moment.

Sam: "Nupur you lost your love usme tumhari koi galti nahi hai, yeh friendship ko khona is and will be your decision". Saying that he walked out of the room, banging the door, Gun also followed him out. She knew that Nupur needed her but if she consoled nupur now then maybe nupur would not change her mind about the wedding.

Nupur just stood there blank; she had no idea what she was going to do. She sat on her bed covered her face with her hand. Suddenly her phone rang she looked at the caller it was Mayank. She hanged up. Her phone started ringing again. She hanged again; it was the fifth time she finally picked up the phone out of frustration.

Nups: "kya problem hai, what do you want now".

Mayank: "nups please, please ek baar meri baat suno".

Nups: "kyun suno, kya main sirf sabki baatein sun eke liye bani hun jo koi aata hai bas apni marzin suna kar chalajata hai, kya kissi ne yeh kabhi socha that I am also a human being".

Mayank: "I am really sorry nupur I expected a lot from you, main jaanta hun ki I have hurted you a lot but".

Nups: "but what Mayank, main thank chuki ho in sab chizo se tum hamesha mujhe dard dete ho andthen you say sorry".

Mayank: "Nupur tumhe mujhe jo kehena hai keh lo but please listen to me".

Nups: "what Mayank bolo".

Mayank: "Nupur I was wrong , please tum yeh shaadi mat karna, tod do iss shaadi ko". Nupur was shocked and surprised now why did Mayank wanted to stop the wedding. Also she was angry at the fact that everyone expected her to do what they wanted.

Nups: "bas Mayank keh diya that's it, tumhe kya lagta hai ki jot um kahoge main wahi karungi, phele kaha shaadi karlo aura b keh rahe ho shaadi tod dun do you think I am doll".

Mayank: "nahu nupur aisi baat nahi please meri puri baat toh suno".

Nups: "nahi Mayank I don't want to listen anymore yeh shaadi ab mera decision hai". Nupur hanged up on Mayank.

Mayank: "hello nups hello". He tried calling her again but it was switched off.

Mayank: "oh shoot why why did I tell her to get married in the first place, ab main usse kaise samjhoo".

Scene shfts to Nups house, her family and her were having breakfast

Nups dad: "so nupur ki mom kaisa lag raha hai".

Nups mom: "kaisa lag raha kya matlab".

Nups dad: "Matlab yehi ki two week main tumhari beti ki shaadi hone wali hai toh ab uske saath jitney breakfast enjoy karna hai karlo". Nupur looked up from her cereal, the thing she feared was coming true. Nups mom got all emotional.

Nups mom: "I know mujhe toh pata bhi nahi chala ki meri beti itni baadi hogayi".

Nups dad: "haan, anyways main soch raha tha ki shaadi ke liye kaunsa hall book kare, I have looked at few likin muhe best Bandra wedding hall laga". Nupur was getting scared by all the wedding talk on the other hand with stopping the wedding she was going to hurt her parents. By not stopping the wedding she was going to loose Sam, Gun, and not to mention Mayank yah she still thought about that him, despite the pain he had given her.

Nups mom: "muhe bhi bandra wala hall acha laga kaafi bada hai aur unkio decorations bhi achi hi hongi, aur main soch rahi thi aaj main nupur ko shopping leke jaao taaki yeh apni shaadi ka lengha bhi buy karle".

Nups: "bas" nupur couldn't take it anymore she stood up from the table.

Nups mom: "kya hua nupur beta".

Nups: "mom dad main tumse kuch kehena chahati hoon".

Nups dad: "toh kaho na beta". Nupur took a deep breath, she tried to get all her courage together she knew this would be tough but she had to do it.

Nups: "Main yeh shaadi nahi karna chahti". The words were not even completely out of her mouth her parents stood up shocked.

Nups dad: "kya kya kaha tumne tumhara dimag kharab ho chukka hai kya".

Nups: "dad please ek baar meri baat sunlo, main jaanti hun ki yeh sab galat hai meri shaadi aap log meri marzi ke saath hi the kit hi, par mujhe lagta hai ki main yeh shaadi ke liye tyaar nahi hun, mom main rahul se pyar nahi karti main nahi toh usse khush rak paongi nahi khud khush reh paongi".

Nups mom: "beta tum yeh sab kaise keh sakti rahul ek acha ladka who tumhe bohut khush rakhega, aur tum bhi uske saath".

Nups: 'mom main jaanti hun ki rahul bohut acha ladka hai, mom likin main usse pyar".

Nups dad: (in a loud angry voice) "kya pyar pyar laga rakha hai, kya hota hai yeh pyar dusro ko dekh dekh ke tumhara dimaag bhi kharab hogaya hai".

Nups: "dad I know ki maine aapko aur mom ko hurt kar rahi hoon, likin dad socho agar yehi baat main shaadi ke baad kehti toh aapko zydaa hurt hota, main nahi chahti ki main yeh shaadi karlo par isse nibha na paao".

Nups dad: "mujhe in sab faltu ki baatein karne main koi interest nahi hai, tumhari shaadi do hafte baad hai bas".

Nups mom: "dekho tum itni jaldi na karo, nupur ki baat toh samajne ki khoshish".

Nups dad: "mujhe iske koi baat nahi suni agar isse shaadi se inkar that oh tab keheti when I asked her jab Rahul isse dekhne aya tha, (he looks at nupur) tumhari shaadi fix ho chuki hai that's it".

Nups: "please dad I am sorry likin main yeh shaadi nahi karungi". This was the controlling limit of Shashi Bhushan he picked up his hand to slap nupur but before he could do so another hand stopped got hold of his hand before he could slap nupur.

Hi guys sorry for the long part, but i all of you wanted to know whether nupur would marry Rahul or not so here it is. Also i wanted to show nupur's brave side on how she could face her father. Mostly in wedding guys take the intiative as most people think that guys have more courage and girls are always scared of their parents, so i wanted to show that girls are strong to but are sensitive regarding their family, they don't go against their parents because they respect them. Now it is your point of view whether nupur is right or not.

Do leave your reviews/comments 😊

Edited by lopli - 14 years ago

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

lovely update...........

finaly nupur shadi k lie mana kar dia.....

hope to get mayur reunion soon

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

hmmmmm.. update the next part fast.. nice update

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

awesum dear i jus loved it....thnx for making it sooo long ....maxa agaya....i knw dat it is mayank who has stopped da hand of nups dad.....haina????????