New mayur ff : Do you realize? part 15 pg.25

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Supriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

part 12.. rockin update ria!👏.
luvd my strong Nups...
it really gettin interestin!!!
pls update soon & thnx 4 d pm!

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Thanks for long update!!!!😃
Aww Poor Nups.😭. everyone telling her do this do that..
Her anger is justified..
Mayank is at fault here he shouldnt have made Nups..
agree to marriage...👎🏼
but i loved that Nupur n Parents scene..😉
Glad NUPUR is standing up.... she should not be forced into a relationship...
i hope the hand is Mayank's or it culd be Samrat.. 🤔

thanks.. cant wait for next update...😍

Thanks for PM!!!🤗
❤️-Rabiah

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Gul

@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

I am So happy So happy so happy

Finally Nupur Said it

I hope Nups ka dad ko rokna wala hath Mayank ka ho

Hope to see Lots of mayur scenes in the next update

Thanks For pm and plz cont soon

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

i really hope mayank has come........n he has only stopped the dadz hand.............

anyways want mayur union soon!!

the part was really gud!

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priya

@lopli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Hi guys i am updating part 13 of this ff.

Part 13 Nups dad was shocked, no one had ever dared to stop him. Both Nups and her dad looked at the person, it was none other than Rahul.
Nups dad: "Rahul beta tum yahan". He put his hand down.

Rahul: "I am sorry uncle mujhe aise aapka haath nahi pakana chahiya tha, but I couldn't let you punish nupur, kyunki isme uski galti nahi hai". Nupur was shocked, confused what was going on? She wondered, did rahul hear everything?

Nups mom: "kya matlab Rahul".

Rahul: "actually aunty yeh shaadi na karne ka faisla hum dono ka hai".

Nupur looked at Rahul, he looked at her and smiled assuringly.

Rahul: "actually uncle, main aapse baat karna chahata tha but mujhse phele nupur ne aapko keh diya, hum dono hi yeh shaadi nahi karna chahate". Nups dad: "kyunk beta yeh faisla achank, aisa kya hogaya ki".

Rahul: "uncle aisi koi baat nahi who actually main kissi aur se pyar karta hun, main yeh baat aap logo phele hi bata dena chahata tha but couldn't ge the courage, since dad aur apne rishta bohut jaldi pakka kar lia, please aap nupur koh kuch mat kahiye".

Nups dad: "pyar, pyar kya hogaya hai aajkal ki generation ko". He left gurffily from there after all what could he do since Rahul had rejected the wedding.

Rahul turned to nups mom.

Rahul: "aunty I am really sorry, mujhe yeh sab phele hi keh dena chahiya tha par main keh nahi paya, please aap nupur ko iskeliye blame mat kijiye, shayad nupur ki life mujhse koi better likha ho".

Nups: "nahi bata main tumse naraz nahi hun, bas soch rahi hun ki nupur ke papa ka gusse ke kaise control karna hai ab". Nups hugged her mom crying.

Nups: "I am sorry mom, meri wajah se hamesha problems hoti hai I am really sorry mom". Nups mom hugged her back and consoled her.

Nups mom: "nahi beta tumhe apni zindagi kef aisle lene ka pura haq hai, I am not angry with you, I can never be, tum toh meri sweetheart ho".

Rahul: "sorry to break mother daughter emotional scene, but (nupur and her mom separate) actually aunty agar aap mind na kare toh kya main nups ko bahar le jaa sakta hun".

Nups mom: "haan beta sure". Nups looks at Rahul confused, he stopped their marriage and he was now taking her somewhere. Though she did not argue she had some questions to ask him. Nupur sat in Rahul's car and slamed the door shut. Rahul smiled her started driving. The were out on the main road both were quiet, finally Rahul broke the silence.

Rahul: "Nupur main tumhe bahar isliye leke aaya hun to give answer your questions and give explaination for why I did what I did?".

Nups was quiet she just nodded her head. They both were quiet for ten minutes. Finally Rahul stopped the car in front of a public park. Both of them got out and started walking.

Rahul: "tum kuch poochogi nahi?"

Nups: "main kya pooche aapse, I believe what I did today was wrong with you, I sorry maine yeh shaadi todi likin'.." Tears started rolling down her eyes.

Rahul: "wooh ah don't cry please maine yeh shaadi apni marzi se todi hai".

Nups looks up at him. Nups: "huh par kyun".

Rahul: "First I am sorry". Nups: "kisliye?".

Rahul: "jo maine kiya aapke saath aur bro ke saath (nups looks at him questioningly) Nupur main janta tha ki you and bro are in love, infact maine iss rishte ke liye haan issi liye kit hi, I am sure bro ne tumhe hamari story baatye hogi, Main bro se badla lena chahta tha, I always hated him kyunki mom ne mujhe chod kar unhe choose kiya. Likin I don't know why mujhe unhe hurt karke acha nahi laga, I mean unhone aapko simply chod diya mere liye, first that thing didn't bother me I thought ki who bas acting kar rahe hain, likin when I saw you both in the classroom at the party I realized ki what love is, apne bhi unki baat manke mujhse enagement kar li. Then after I saw you in the classroom, I realized ki main aapko ek aisi cheez ke liye punish kar raha hun jisme aapki koi galti hi nahi hai, I am sorry for all the pain I had given you both". Nupur was shocked, she could not believe this. The were almost in the middle of the park, nupur looked up and saw Mayank, Sam, Gun and a girl were also there.

Rahul: "aur dusri wajah yeh hai ki, I love someone else". He walk over to the girl and hugs her. Nupur walks and stands by gunjan.

Rahul: "aur yeh hai mera pyar Priya, aap logo ke dekhe mujhse bhi eshaash hogaya ki I love her".

Sam: "acha hua ki jaldi eshaah hogaya nahi toh pata nahi muhe kya karna padta".

Nups: "jij I am sorry ki maine aapko aur di ko kitna pershaan kiya".

Sam: "oh its okay nups, tumne hamari baat manli yehi bohut hai or I am sorry ki maine tumhe who sab kaha par main bohut gusse main tha, main apni pyari mast nupur ko khote hue nahi dekh sakta tha". Nups and samrat hug.

Gun: "ok Ok ab yeh emotional drama band karo, the main point is everything is well now".

Rahul: "yah sivai ek ke". Everyone look at him questioningly.

Gun: "kisske". Rahul walks over to nups takes her hand and takes mayank's hand (both of them were silent, they looked into each others eyes).

Rahul: "I am sorry bro for hurting you and you too nupur, likin ab aap dono ke beech main koi nahi hai, (he puts nups hand in mayank's hand who holds it tightly) You guys are made for each other". Mayank and nupur are lost in each others eyes.

Sam: "I think ki hume inhe akela chod dena chahiye you know give them privacy".

Gun: "haan good idea". All four of them leave Mayank and nupur who were still holding hands.

I know many of you must be disipointed with this part as you wanted it to Mayank who stopped Nups dad's hand, but there is more story to it, so i couldn't make it Mayank's. Also i know i rushed this part, i could have made it better, but i wanted to have more of mayur scenes now. I am sorry for not so good part.

Do leave your review/comments😊

Edited by lopli - 14 years ago

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kala_0112

@kala_0112

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

nice one waiting for the next update......................

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

i expected mayank to stop nupzi's dad but still i am happy dat rahul did...thank GOD...rahul has got some sense...........finally everything is fine i guess.........pls continue soon...............................

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neetu

@mayurg2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

the part is really nice... though you rushed it came out nice...
i loved the last scene and you really projected the respect to the elders gave by mayur....
i loved it.
do cont soon