Let The Tears Fall -MayUr OS *NEW*

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Hey guys! 🤗
I have written a new MN OS and it's on the current track! I hope you all will like it, and leave your preious omments, I love them! 🤗😳

Let the tears fall (MayUr)


A furious Dhruv dragged Nupur out of the locker room. He had held her hand so firmly, and his sharp nails were piercing her skin. She tried her best to control her tears. He dragged her across the corridors of the Excel college. Nupur saw Mayank walking from the opposite direction and got terrified. If he tried talking to Nupur, Dhruv would harm him. She looked away and walked on.


"Nupur are you alright?" Mayank asked, concern in his eyes and words. "Why are you crying?"


"She is totally alright," Dhruv said, seething in anger.


"She's not," Mayank said immediately. "I am able-"


"Move," Dhruv said. "Stay away Sharma. It will be better for you...and Nupur."


Saying so, Dhruv dragged Nupur away. Something fell out of her hand and Mayank took it. He tried calling out for Nupur, but she was already out of eye-sight. He decided to give it to her later, and put it inside his pocket.


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That night Mayank was going through some important documents when he took out Nupur's packet from his pocket. Softly and carefully he opened it and saw a bunch if papers fall out. He took the first one and read it out.


Dear Diary,

Today while I got out of the auto, I felt Mayank's presence behind me. I glanced back and saw him. I started to run, lest he finds me. I knew he had seen me, or atleast realized that it was me, because I felt him run behind me.


He then called out to me "Nupur". I froze midway and and turned around slowly. I saw him. He looked the same as he did three years ago, only a little older. His eyes had tears and a gleaming smile when he saw it was me. He started walking towards me and I got into the nearest auto, took a last look at him and went away from there.


I heard him scream after me and that just hurt me more. I have to keep my emotions aside. This is for him only. For Mayank Sharma.


Love,

Nupur


Mayank started at the paper in shock. She was his Nupur? Why did she write that she was staying away for him for himself? He felt relief at first that yes, it was his Nupur, but sadness englulfed him when he realized that she was avoiding him. He took out the next paper and read.


Dear Diary,

I had gone to the local bazaar to buy myself some mayaparis. As I was shopping there I felt his presence again. Mayank's, I mean. I turned back carefully, and saw him. His eyes were frantic and I knew he was looking for me.


Heartbroken, I walked away from there. I wish Mayank would realize. He cannot have me anymore. For the sake of his own life, he must not have me. We are not destined to be together.


Love,

Nupur


Mayank's eyes filled with tears on reading this. His ran his thumb over the diary entry and kissed where she had signed Love Nupur. He was unable to understand why she was talking like that.


Dear Diary,

Today Mayank met with an accident. I rescued him and admitted him to the hospital. My heart shattered into a million pieces on seeing him in such a fragile and delicate condition. I told the nurse that I was his wife (the pride with which I said that, you wont be able to imagine) and they got his treatment started.


While returning from the pharmacy, I happened to glance at Mayank who was in a conscious state. He said "Nupur" and I hit the wall. I lost control of my emotions. All I wanted to do was to run to his side, hold him near to my heart and tell him how much I love him. But then I saw Samrat and Gunjan and went away from there.


I decided to leave Mumbai forever. I asked to hospital people about Mayank's condition and they told me he was good. I called up Dhruv and told him I was going back to Delhi.


Mayank, Gunjan and Samrat met up with me in the bus stop and tried to convince me that I'm their Nupur. I refused to acknowledge them and walked away, when I tripped and fell into Mayank's arms. His arms felt like home. The comfort that it they had always offered to me came rushing back. I was almost lost in his eyes when the bus honked and I straightened myself.


I tried being extremely harsh to the three of them and they went away from there. But I felt so guilty and sad that I went to Gunjan's house to say sorry. They took me to a room full of memories of mine and I felt tears sting my eyes. Every single moment with Mayank, Samrat and Gunjan came flooding before my eyes.


Mayank tried to get me to confess, oh how well he knows me. Gunjan begged me to stay for a week so that she will be able to get the feeling of having her Di with her. I agreed reluctantly. I told Dhruv that I would be returning only after a week.


Tonight I almost gave myself away.


Love,

Nupur


Mayank's tears fell onto the paper. He was unable to stop the tears.


Dear Diary,

Today I visited Excel college with the trio. They locked me up in the bathroom and Mayank came to save me. Forever my savior, knight in shining armor and the love of my life. I fell into his arms again, and the memories of the time he rescued me from the bathroom 4 years ago rushed through my mind and heart.


They four of us attended Shukla Sir's lecture. The trio got me into a project and made Mayank my partner. The both of us fought like cats and dogs, just like usual. Mayank is still very sensitive to my calling him sadu. He challenged me to a dance competition and I accepted the challenge!


We both went to the library to look up information on our assignment, when we got locked up there. I started coughing and Mayank gave me water, while holding my hand tenderly. I was lost in the moment but recovered immediately. He challenged me to dance blindfolded and I took it up. I started doing salsa and the memories of our rehearsal came flooding before my eyes. Again, I tripped and fell into his arms.


That night I was way too tired and fell asleep on the library desk. Mayank approached me from behind and tucked my hair behind my ears. He blew into my ears and I shivered. He then sat opposite me and put my hand on his, and put his head on mine. I held onto him. He then played with my hair and I pulled his hand and held onto to it tightly.


I am failing diary...I am putting Mayank in grave danger. I need to go away from here.


Love,

Nupur


Mayank smiled tenderly on reading his love's description of the entire situation. He went through many more diary entries and reached the most recent one, that of the day before.


Diary,

Today Dhruv and I went to the college to meet the gang. Throughout our stay in the canteen, my eyes were fixed on Mayank's. The way he narrated our lovestory to Dhruv was so beautiful. I now know why I fell in love with him. He is such a selfless lover.


After the trio left, Dhruv turned the table upside down and yelled at me. He threatened me that if I even speak of Mayank, he will disfigure my face. He hurt me so much, diary, so much. When Mayank arrived there he pretended to help me out, and kind of scolded me for being "careless".


While walking through the hallway he broke my bangles on my hand and threatened me that all Mayank has to do is touch a switch, short current happens and he is dead. I got furious and told him not to speak about Mayank like that.


I'm afraid diary. What if he harms Mayank? How will I be able to live with it?


Nupur.


Mayank looked at his wounded hand in unpleasant surprise. Dhruv had done this to his hand? WHY? There was one more last entry from her.


Dear Diary,

Today I learned that Dhruv has actually caused an electric shock to Mayank. Dhruv took me to an empty classroom and wanted to play a silly game with me. He started narrating the story of how he found me in an injured and terrible state and how he took ultimate are of me. He named me a liar and said that I went back on my words.


That was all I could take. I stood up and retorted that I wasn't wrong, he was. I told him I was bearing him from the past three years only because he promised not to harm Mayank, Gunjan and Samrat. He asked me whether it was paining seeing Mayank like that.


I said yes, because main Mayank sharma ki patni hoon...Nupur Bhushan Sharma. Dhruv scolded me again. And tortured me. He hugged me when Mayank entered the classroom. He returned my chain to me. Dhruv again got upset and terrified me.


So diary...that is the truth of my life. I am living away from the man I love, my dear sister and best friend just to protect them. I am living a fake life as Nupur Verma just to ensure my family's safety, especially Mayank's. I don't know how much more of this torture I will take, but I wont stop...because I am Nupur Bhushan Sharma...Verma...


Love,

Nupur


Mayank took the paper to his face and ran it over his face. His tears drenched the paper making it unreadable. He was in a state of absolute shock. He was unable to register the point that Nupur had gone through three years of absolute torture and terror just to safeguard him. It was believable, after all she is his Jhansi Ki Rani Nupur. He felt absolute rage towards Dhruv. He was not able to believe that someone could be so cruel and evil.


He got up from the room and got into his car. He would get his wife back. He would punish Dhruv for his deeds. He would get justice for Nupur. He just WOULD.


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Mayank ran upto Dhruv's room in the seaside hotel and rang the bell impatiently. It was Dhruv who opened the door. He glared at Mayank with absolute hatred.


"What are you doing here?" Dhruv asked.


"Where's Nupur?" Mayank asked, ignoring his question. "Nupur! Nupur! NUPUR!"


"Who is at the door?" Nupur asked, walking up to them. "Mayank..."


"Get out of here NOW!" Dhruv demanded.


"How dare you?" Mayank said, gritting his teeth and holding Dhruv by his collar. "How dare you keep my wife away from me? How dare you threaten and torture her? How dare you bring her so much pain? How dare you pathetic excuse for a human?!"


"She's mine," Dhruv said.


"She was NEVER yours," Mayank said. He held Nupur's hand and pulled her out. "Let's go Nupur, I wont let you stay with this man even for a minute!"


Dhruv got so angry that separated Mayank-Nupur and started beating up Mayank. Mayank was unable to defend himself.


"Dhruv STOP it!! Please Dhruv just stop it!" Nupur cried out.


But in vain. Infuriated on seeing her husband getting beaten up so badly, Nupur went up to Dhruv, pulled him by his collar and pushed him away. She rushed to Mayank and held him tightly.


"Mayank you are alright...oh Mayank why did you have to do this?" she asked, holding his face.


"Nupur," she heard Dhruv's voice.


Nupur got up from there, turned to Dhruv and glared at him.


"Don't take one step towards me," she warned. "I trusted you enough not to harm Mayank. You have gone too far."


"Nupur listen," Dhruv said.


"No you listen Mr. Dhruv Khanna," Nupur said. "Three years I suffered like so terribly thanks to you. I lived away from the love of my life, my husband and my soulmate, just because of you! I beared mental and physical torture JUST to save Mayank, Gunjan and Samrat. You have crossed your limits. You take one step towards me or you touch Mayank, you have had it from me. And this is NOT Nupur Verma, I'm Nupur Bhushan Sharma."


There was some noise at the door and the security had arrived.


"Security," Nupur said. "Take this brute of a person away from here."


The officers held onto Dhruv and dragged him out. The police also arrived in no time and put Dhruv behind the bars.


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After everyone had gone, Nupur locked the door behind her and went towards Mayank. She lifted him off the ground and made him sit on the sofa. She went inside, got the first-aid box and started cleaning up his wounds. She bandaged him without saying a word, while Mayank just looked at her. Both of them were overwhelmed at the situation. They were together at last and Dhruv wouldn't be able to harm them again.


She took him to the bedroom and made him lie down the bed.


"I will order something for you to eat," she said, smiling, going up to the phone.


Mayank held her hand stood up. He looked at her properly after ages and held her face between his hands and kissed her on her forehead. He gently made her sit down next to him. He hugged her from the side and she sat in absolute silence.


"He's gone," Mayank said, comfortingly. "He wont touch you again. He wont dare to do so."


"Yes," Nupur said, staring into the empty space.


"Ek phone call nahin karke sakti thi?" he asked, his voice soft and loving.

"Puraani baath puraani hain," Nupur said. "Forget the past and embrace the future."


"Nupur," Mayank said. "Ek baar bathanahi sakti?"


"Mayank he would have-"


"I don't give a damn about my life," Mayank said. "He has tortured you physically and mentally for three goddamn years! Say something!"


"What should I say?" Nupur asked, her voice hollow and devoid of any emotion. "It was written in my fate and I accepted it. Nothing left to say."


"He harassed you and tortured you to such an extent that you broke down...my Nupur broke down," Mayank said.


"Mayank please I don't want to-"


He held her face and looked at her in the eye. He ran his thumb over her soft cheeks and felt dry tears.


"It's okay to cry Nupur," Mayank said. "You are stronger than anyone else I met. It's okay to cry sweetheart."


Nupur looked away and felt tears sting her eyes.


"You don't have to pretend to be strong for me," Mayank said. "Let the tears fall Nupur. Three years...long time."


Tears broke out of Nupur's eyes and there was no stopping. She held on tightly to Mayank's hand and sobbed. He rocked her back and forth, comforting her silently. Nupur spoke in the middle of her tears and told him how much she loved him. He was her entire life and she would never be able to see another person in place of him. Mayank kissed her head a few times in the middle telling her that he would never let her be alone again.


After an hour or so, Mayank tucked her in bed and lay down next to her. She held his hand tightly and went to sleep. It would take her longer to get near to him in a physical and intimate way, so she just held onto his hands.


For the first time in three years Mayank and Nupur were able to sleep. They were together, and for this moment thats all that mattered. The man and wife were together at last.


The End








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great os nidheya.....am so glad that u wrote this oneshot.....in one of your topics..i have requested you to write an os..i dont whether u have seen it or not......anyways am also happy that i am the 1st to comment .....thanx a lot 4 this os,,,,.....tc

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Hey Nidzyyyyyyyy that was soooooooooo well written. This was the first time i ever read a write up on MN involving Dhruv and it felt damn real. You have taken it ahead very realistically. I hope that in the show as well it is handled well! Thank you so much for sharing!
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Beauifully written Nidz. I want to see Mayank's anger in MJHt just the way expressed it. I really wish he comes to save Nupur, but at the same time I want Nupur also to stand up for herself, just the way in your OS.

Beautiful!!! I loved the diary entries! The were written so beautifully and descriptively. You are an awesome writer!! Keep writing.🤗
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Originally posted by: Senny

Hey Nidzyyyyyyyy that was soooooooooo well written. This was the first time i ever read a write up on MN involving Dhruv and it felt damn real. You have taken it ahead very realistically. I hope that in the show as well it is handled well! Thank you so much for sharing!



Thanks a ton Senny 🤗

And thanks a ton fanofamrita 🤣 🤗
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You're welcome Lioness!😆😉
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OMG! Twinno 🤗
Beautiful. Just beyond beautiful. I really had tears in my eyes, reading all the diary entries and the end, when she just let the pain flow 😔
Gosh, Twinno right now I just can't find words to describe how much I loved it <3
It was beautiful, so touching, emotional. It was just so flawlessly written. Every word touched my soul. I mean I was just lost in the sheer beauty of it all.
The way you took this story and wrote it just so brilliantly is just beyond amazing. I am telling you, apply for the job of the CVs and writer in MJHT, I will make sure you get appointed. 😆
Niddy I'm just lost in this OS. It is just magical. 😍
I love you for this one jaana <3<3<3
I want more 😳
Really Niddo, I just beyond loved it.
ILY <3<3
All the best for your paper
-Well, your Twin 😃
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I am off to sleep my friends 🤗
Hope to see manyyyyyyyyyy reviews when am bak!! 😳

Love all,
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Originally posted by: -Daania-

OMG! Twinno 🤗

Beautiful. Just beyond beautiful. I really had tears in my eyes, reading all the diary entries and the end, when she just let the pain flow 😔
Gosh, Twinno right now I just can't find words to describe how much I loved it <3
It was beautiful, so touching, emotional. It was just so flawlessly written. Every word touched my soul. I mean I was just lost in the sheer beauty of it all.
The way you took this story and wrote it just so brilliantly is just beyond amazing. I am telling you, apply for the job of the CVs and writer in MJHT, I will make sure you get appointed. 😆
Niddy I'm just lost in this OS. It is just magical. 😍
I love you for this one jaana <3<3<3
I want more 😳
Really Niddo, I just beyond loved it.
ILY <3<3
All the best for your paper
-Well, your Twin 😃



You 🤗
By God u are SOOOO greedy! 🤣
You always want more!!!

I will write more after my exams!

Thanks a ton!
-Me😳
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^^ That I am 😎🤣
Especially when it comes to your writing and MN.
All the best for the exam.
Love ya <3

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