Let The Tears Fall -MayUr OS *NEW*

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Mugdha

@cutemug

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Lovelyyy OS dear....amazing one👏

Loved this part where Mayank urges Nupur to cry and express herself through tears...Nupur sure must've been relieved to lighten her burden in Mayank's warm and comforting arms😍

"You don't have to pretend to be strong for me," Mayank said. "Let the tears fall Nupur. Three years...long time."

Bliss!!!

Thanks for the OS 😃

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@-SMay31-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

awww Nidz sch a beautiful nd touching OS...i really want dis type of conclusion of current track...i was lil down..thnxs so mch for dis OS... gr8 piece of work...

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Madiha Rashid

@MaddyStilinski

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

OMG..Beautiful OS Nidz👏

The way you have taken the story forward is simply amazing..I've gotta say u'r a great writer..Seriously the way you have expressed Mayank n Nupur's feeling..It felt so real😳

Do write more..Would LOVE to read more of ur OS

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FanOfMAYUR

@FanOfMAYUR

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Nice OS nidz...Loved it..I especially loved the way you have described Nupur's pain n feelings in diary ..

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Wonderful OS yaar.👏👏.U express the feelings so nicely..it wz sooooo adorable....The last part where mayank consoling nupur wz just out of the world😍😍.Wish this could happen in the show..Lovely OS..Nxt time pm me..🤗🤗

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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Brilliant OS. Beautifully written. Loved the way you desribed Nupur's feelings in her diary. And loved the last part when Mayank was consoling and comforting Nupur.

Hope we get a good conclusion to this track in the show..

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

OMG...this was amazing ...beautiful perfect ....loved it

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Nidheya, this is an awesome piece of writing😃😃
You write beautifully😃😃

I loved the whole OS-had me gripped from start to end😃

The diary entries, the way mayank goes to get nupur away from dhruv, the way nupur stands up to dhruv, the way mayank comforts her.....it was all excellent😃😃

Totally loved it😃

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

amazing OS nidz
their relationship is described so beautifully 😳
i would write more in comment, but its really l8 here, & i hve 2 be silent while typing,
but i really loved it, it was tenderly & filled with sweet emotion