Our MAYUR Story!(mayurians only)updated pg.8+NOTE

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supercool3

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

guys this is gettin really interesting i hope everyone appreciated the two parts i did..

and im loving the other parts too

good going everyone

i will continue later.. and hoping to see more people contribute 😃

Edited by supercool3 - 15 years ago

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mjht_lover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

ooooooh so guys are following a track that has each of them thinking that the other one is dead...

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supercool3

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Mayank sat down on the couch and was in deep thoughts about Nupur.

At that time, he barely had an identity and Nupur's father had never accepted their marriage. There were many struggles he had faced along with Nupur afterwards. But he was able to fight against it because he had her by his side. She was his backbone, his support. Without her, nothing would've been possible.

And now that he has everything, he feels very lonely. This was their dream, her dream.

How can he enjoy this without her?

Nupur looked at the time and realized she had to go to Arti's school. She quickly got up and got ready. The car was parked outside and Nupur got in and drove towards the school.

She was really deep in thought that she wasn't paying attention to the road.

She snapped out when she finally realized a truck was coming in the opposite direction and she had to make a sudden turn to avoid colliding with it.

The car landed safely on the side of the road. Tha truck zoomed past honking at her.

Nupur sat inside without moving. She was shocked at what had just happened. Tears streamed down from her eyes again. She was partially relieved that she was safe but another thought crossed her mind.

She asked herself : Why was it only me?

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Edited by supercool3 - 15 years ago

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Swetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Wow this is going really nice😊

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Kiran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Nupur cried as she thought "why did he leave me after that accident? God you didn't even do anything to keep me find him. God knows where he is right now"

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

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nupur.....y didnt....y mayank u promisd 2 me tht u'll b here till last momnent of ourlifes...u even didnt tryd 2 find me ...how i m..where im..tum ko koi fareeq nhi parhta.....how can u do ths to me

mayank

In state of extrem greif..he left the home.thy always want as it apears to be so haunted without her...he gets into the car n went to the place where thr story began..2 the beach

Why NUPUR why ..why on ths earth it happend 2us y.......i even didnt get 2 cu last time ...i would have hold u so tight tht nobody would have taken u away 4me..or i have acompanied u.....awwwwwwwww it sooo.....plz God plz take me to my NUPUR

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aswathy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

...i would have hold u so tight tht nobody would have taken u away 4me..that was vy touching...pls continue soon...............all r doing a great job.........

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

thanx yr..its going really well comon guys continue

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srish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

pls do continue!!!!!!!!!! wanna read more of these!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aliya Singh Kapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

mayu got into his car

still telling god

M" plzz mujhe nupur ke pass pahuncha do........... nahi jeena mujhe uske bina

he was driving his car and he drove past arti's school

at that very moment nupur was talking to another mother and all that mayu could see was nup's back

mayu just could see arti properly

arti was waving to everyone who was passing by her car

as mayu's car passed by nups car

arti waved at him too

mayu smiled and waved back to her and drove away ............

just then nupur turned and sat inside the car

arti was still waving at everyone

N: kise bye kar rahi ho arti

A: maa sabko

N: achcha kiskisko bye kiya ?

A: ek uncle mujhe bhi bye kiya pata hai...............

N: achcha......? aur kisne tumhe bye kiya?

arti and nups chatted their way away .......................

At home

nups had forgotten to hide the photo

Arti just rushed into the bedroom and started to look through all the scattered stuffs and suddenly spotted the picture

she picked it up

A: mamma........... mamma

nupur rushed in

N: kya hua? gir gayi ......... kahan laga? kya hua?

A: nahi mamma ............... yeh uncle............ yeh uncle ne mujhe bye kiya aaj................ aap inhe jaanti ho? aap is photo mein kaise ho? bolo na mamma............

nupur was shocked on hearing this and was just standing still ....................

A: mamma .................

nupur came back to senses

N: she knelt down

N: beta tumne is uncle ko kahan dekha tha?

A: school ke bahar.......... pata hai uncle ne mujhe bye bhi kiya..............

Nupur to herself

N: toh mayank zinda hai................ aur isi sheher mein hai ......................... bhagwan ji us accident ke baad maine aapse kuch nahi manga hai par aaj mang rahi hoon please mujhe mere mayank se milwa dijiye........please ............

okay guys i cant think of nething further please continue after this

love

sneha

Edited by arjunmayankfan - 15 years ago