Mayur OS (SS)...updated..part 4(pg 8)) - Page 3

Originally posted by: yash.dilse

@shafiz............tumko kisne kaha ki tum mein ek writer ki ability nahi hai..........welll I must say u write vry beautifully..............n love 2 read MN os which actually v dont get 2 c........so sad 😔
Welll..............continue dear.I wud love to read more..............
(Evn I huv written 4 OS on our MN............pls temme if u r intrested 2 read dem............I'll PM u)

tanx dear..ab mujhe itna zarror pata chal gaya hai ke main Mayur peh Os likh sakhti ho...
i would love to read ur Os on mayur...plz pm me...tanx

aww...really nice....

yaaaaar cont!!!! plzzzz awwesome !!!!

hey!!!
this was soo nice!!!😳
i liked it....😉
but...SS shud be in the fan fiction forum...OS to be in the MJHT OS gallery...😕
may be mods can close this topic....

hey to gud

PART 3...
AT EXEL College..
Nupur and Gunjan are walking in the corridor..
Nupur is really angry ..aur Gunjan ko pata tha apne jiju ke plan ke baare main...so she tought to ask her about it...
G:" Di..kya baat hai..bohat pareshan lag rahi ho...??"
N: "Gunjan..woh..main..."
G: "Kya hua di"?
Suddenly Nupur sees har hubby talking and laughing with Natasha...and obviously she feels like killing her...kiun ke use pata tha ke woh churail zaroor Mayank phar line mar rahi hoghi!...
Gunjn saw this..."di ...Mayank ne apni partner doondh li hai...ab to tumhe koi chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai..."
N:"nahi Gunjan...tum us Ntasha ko janti nahi..woh zaroor Mayank ke saath work kam aur flirt zaida kar rahi hoghi...!!! Dekho kaise has rahe hai dono....!!!
G:!"Di woh uski partner hai..baat to karni hoghi na...?!"
N :" Mayank ki partner banne ka haq sirf mera hai...ab chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...main yeh project karoonghi...!!!"
Gunjan ko yeh sab sun kar bohat accha feel ho raha tha kiun ke use patah tha ke sirf yehi ek tareeka hai Di ko study karane ka...
G:"to tum yaha kya kar rahi ho mere paas ..jao aur apni jaga leh lo...!"
Nupur goes to Myank who is doing the project..Mayank sees Nupur but he ignored her...
Nupur to Natasha..:" Well ..sorry phar Mayank ki partner a gay hai..to tumhe uske saath kam karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.."
Ntasha:"Well babez...agar tumhe yaad nahi hai to let me tell you ke hum ek project kar rahe hai..aur main hi sirf Mayank ki partner ho..samjhi??"
Mayank ko bilkul bhi accha nahi lagha jis tareeke se Natasha Nupur se baat kar rahi thi...lekin usne phir bhi kuch nahi kaha kiun ke use patah tha ke Nupur chup behtne walo main se nahi hai...
N:"oh Hello..Miss super-cool...mere khayal se mujhe yeh batane ki zaaroorat nahi hai ke Mayank ab mera husband hai aur ab sirf main hi uski partner ho..life partner...samjhi??"
Natasha:" Babez...i think ke tumhe samajh nahi aya ke maine kya kaha..lekin ab main phir repeat nahi karna chahti so...if u don't mind hum apna kaam kare..?!""
CJ arrives..
CJ:" babez..just cool down ok!..Mayank ke saath sirf Nupur hi kaam kareghi..."!
Mayank was really amused by the situation in front of him..."unbelievable..3 girls are fighting for me!!!!"
M:"excuse me..excuse me..can i say something..?"
"tum loog is project ko international problem kiun banah rahe ho..iska simple solution haina mere paas ..."
Natasha,Cj,Nupur together: "kya"..??
M:"yehi ke main decide karooga ke main kiske sath jaonga..aur obviously woh m eri beautiful wife hoghi..."..and he hugs her..
cj:" dekha miss Natasha...now mujhe laghta hai ke isse pehle ke Nupur ko phir ghussa a jaye...you can leave..!"
Natasha was really angry and she leaves..
N:" churail kahi ki.."
M:" Nupur aisa nahi kehte..woh to sirf project karna chahti thi mere saath.."
N:" accha...tumhe barah kaam karne ka shohk hai uske saath..lekin sorry oati-dev..mere hote yeh nahi ho sakta..!"
and they both hug each other...
CJ:" ahem...sorry guys to interrupt you lekin yeh public place hai...now canteen chahle...bohat boojkh laghi hai..
M&N:" haan chalo..."


guys plz do comment...
tanx to all of you jino ne meri is chohti si story ko pasand kya...tanx..

oye shafiz

brilliant part 3 yaar

update soon ;

love pebo

part 1-

fantastic.......
awesome........
love it........
superb........
awesome.........
add me to your pm list........

part 2-

fantastic update yaar.........
mayank using jealousy to get nupur to work with him is so cute.........
each and every part was rocking..........
couldn't decide the best one...........
stil i choose the bestest-

N: "Romatic!!!!...mujhe to laghta hai ke use Romance ka R bhi nahi ata hai..!!!"
Meanwhile Mayank arrives aur woh Nupur ki baat sun lehta hai...
M: " R???"
Uday&Benji together.."Mar gaye!"
M: "Nupur..mujhe to romance ka poora spelling ata hai...dekho...R.o.m.a.n.c.e..!!!!"