Mayur OS (SS)...updated..part 4(pg 8))

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

part 3-

kya baat hai...........
kya jaadu hai tumhare ff mein..........
simply love it yaar...........
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me whenever you update...........

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

you are a great writer

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mohseena

@mohseena

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

yaaar aisay end nahi karaaaaaa karooooo!!!! and next time thoree bari update wunra i 'll go crazy i luc ur simple ff!!!

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

its too good shafiz loved it lots ......... continue kar i am loving this OS ........

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

gr88 update.....
loved nupur's possessiveness!!!!!
do continue soon

Edited by daniella05 - 15 years ago

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anju011

@anju011

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

hey nice part dear.
Loved the jealous nupur & her dialogues.

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shafiz

@shafiz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

guys tanx very much 4 all your lovely comments....
well...honestly speaking maine kabhi nahi socha tha ke main bhi koi story likhy ghi lekin kya karo Mayur sindrome se majboor ho..har waqt unke bahre main hi sochti rehti ho...

main to soch rahi thi ke yeh "OS" YAHI KHATAM KAR DOH..LEKIN AB main surely continue karoghi...aur ap sab ko pm bhi zaroor karoghi...
next part khal likhughi...during history lesson kiun ke boht koshish karthi ho focus karne ko(in Mayank style focus focus..) phar nahi hota..so main khal zaroor continue karooghi...
tanx once again...