Mayur OS (SS)...updated..part 4(pg 8)) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Shafiz... just read all the three parts.. and I must say... Really well written... Do PM me.. and add me in ur PM list...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Do continue.. i really miss dis kind of real cllg moments in mjht nw a days...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 4...

Nupur was going home and Mayank was still in college kiun ke use part-time job bhi karni thi..
Ghar phar Nupur was thinking about her life...uski zindagi kitni badhal gay hai...uski zindagi Mumbai main bilkul babal gay hai..Mayank ki wajah se...his husband ..boyfriend...bodyguard..best friend...USKI SARI ZINDAGI..
Suddenly the phone rang...It was Shilpa aunty...(aj kal patah nahi woh kaha hai..)
N: "hello"..?
Shilpa:"hello Nupur beta...main Shilpa bhool rahi ho"..
N:" Namaste aunty..mera matlab hai maa...kaisi hai aap..sab theek hai...aap ki job theek hai...hum apko bohat miss karte hai..."(in one breath)..
S:" Nupur..nupur...tum mujhe bolne ka mohka to doh..main shuru se start karthi ho..main theek ho..sab theek hai..meri job bilkul theek hai..aur main bhi tum dono ko bohat miss kharthi ho..."
Nupur thinking..."By god..maa aur beta ek jaise hi hai.."
S: "Nupur.....??!!"
N:" ji maa..main sun rahi ho...ap hame bohat yaad athi hai..kash aap hamare sath yaha hote to hamari family bilkul complete hoti..." in a sad voice..
S thinking..." Mayank ki choice phar mujhe fakhr hai..usne bilkul perfect biwi aur mere lye bahu lay hai.."
S:" Beta main janti ho tum sab ko bohat mushkil hoti hogi...isi lye maine phone kya tha...meri promotion ho gay hai..aur ab maine transfer lay li hai..mumbai main..infact main kaal a rahi ho..."
N:"sach main maa...yeh to bohat khushi ki baat hai...ab hamari family bilkul complete hoghi...main Mayank ko abhi bathati ho..."..
S:"ok betha..kal milte hai..take care.."
N:" ok bye maa"
Nupur decide karthi hai ke woh Mayu ko call karke bataye ghi..aur woh bohat khush hogha...
Mayank was busy with some student...uska mobile bajhta hai..
M" ..haan Nupur bolo.."
N"..bolo??...i mean..tumhe kuch aur tareke se phone answer karna nahi ata ..???...sadu kahi ka..!!!!"
M:" Nupur main is waqt kaam kar raha ho..aur tum mujhe disturb kar rahi ho..."
N".accha...to main ab tumhe disturb karthi ho...itni insult...shadi se pehle to yahi baatein tumhe achi laghti thi na.."
Mayank was listening to her blabbering...and working...
N".Mayank...Mayank...tum sun rahe ho na...???"
M:"hmm..."
N"..dekha..ab tum mujhe jawab bhi nahi deh rahe ho..."..
M:" Nupur dekho in chohti baton phar hum baad main bhi ladai kar sakhte hai...ab main kaam karo.....ok bye..."
N:"Tumhara matlab kya hai..main ladh rahi ho...mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi tum se baat karne ka...mujhe bohat kaam karna hai..."..
M:"..Haan to theek hain na..tum apna woh bohat saara kam karo na..lekin mujhe abhi tang mat karo...bye.."aur woh phone kaat dehta hai..kiun ke Mayu ko patah tha ke Nupur aur use ghussa dilathi aur phir woh usse kuch bhura keh kar hurt nahi karna chahtha tha...he tought ke woh ghar jah kar usse mana legha...
N:is ki itni immat..mera phone kath dya..."
"ane dho..nahi chorunghi...." then she remenbered ke usne Mayu ko kaha hi nahi ke MAA a rahi hai..
N:"Tu bhi na Nupur..kya zaroorat thi use thang karne ki...phone kar ke itna batah dethi ke maa a rahi hai..aur Mayank itni mehnat hamare lye hi to kar raha hai.."..chalo koi baat nahi shaam ko mana loonghi.."

Guys...short update hai...lekin maine abhi likha hai aur abhi hi post kar dya...so abhi ke lye itna hi...next part jaldhi ayega...jaise aap sab pehle bhi comments dehte rahe ho aur meri is SSko pasand kya...i hope ke ab bhi karoghe...plz do comments...tanx

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
hey..pls update the next part soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
it was again lovely n sweet
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
awesome update!!!!
loved the saas-bahu convo.......
waiting 4 next update......continue soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
its amazing shafiz ........... you write really well continue soon waiting for the next part eagerly ........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Nice update
shaam ka intezaar hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
update update update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
luvd it to the core!!!

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