An mjht one shot...updated pg 5.d request is on!!!

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Note:Dear mods i know that one shots are to be posted in
the one shot gallery and i posted this one shot there only but
it hardly got any views.I really want to request you to allow us
write one shots as separate topics.You would yourself had
seen the number of one-shots that were written on the forum
have become so less.this is because posting them in the one shot
gallery means hardly getting any good feedback...this discourages all
of us to spend so much of time writing the shots.Pls pls pls mods
amend this one rule of the forum.I know its difficult for you guys 2
manage so many things but pls its a heartfelt request.I hope all my frnds
will join me in this request to you.Even then if you feel we are demanding
something really unjust you can close my topic and the remaining
members who like this one shot can hit the like button in the mjht one
shot gallery.
An mjht one shot
guys I am back with my sajan+mayur one shots.A long time had passed so thought of writing one today.This one shot is in two parts?just posting the first part now.If you will like it I will definitely post the next part by tonight only.So guys pls do comment or hit the like button.
In this one shot sajan,nupur and the entire gang has returned to Mumbai.But nothing much changed in the past few days all of them spent in maurena.Just that Gunur's dad noticed the extreme love gunjan has for samrat and in a way he himself was happy with her choice?his view abt samrat didn't match with those of bui.So he thought that sending gunjan back 2 mumbai will be the best decision for her.As far as nupur was concerned?she never got a call from mayank who had long left maurena without even saying a word to her.Her smile had lost somewhere?whether it was diwali or chinky's wedding?nupur's eyes never had the same glitter?and this was much visible to her dad.Her dad believed that bui's unthoughtful decision of bringing an unknown boy to nupur's life shattered her and the best for her will be to return her back to her studies so that she can forget that incident of her life.So all of them had finally reached Mumbai.
The next day in college as gunjan and nupur walked down the corridor everything seemed so same yet so different!!!The feel was same but the meaning was so different.where gunjan cherished all the moments she spent with samrat in the college?in that corridor?in the classrooms?what all nupur could remember was the time when someone was with her and the college?the canteen?even empty classrooms and library seemed so beautiful!!!
Thinking all this both gunjan and nupur were lost in their nostalgia with just one difference that gunjan's eyes had a magical glitter but nupur's were completely devoid of any feeling?neither pain coz in the past few days she had lost all hopes!!!Only then nupur notices that gunjan had stopped a few steps back.Nupur turns around to call gunjan when she sees that samrat is calling her from behind the pillar to come with him.This brings a smile on nupur's face?well this was something that was happening as a routine from the time mayank left from maurena.Only Gunjan's happiness was the thing that brought a smile on nupur's lips?seeing them lost into each other and so happy nupur turns around and decides to walk alone.She so much wanted to tease samrat but that nupur was lost somewhere?may be where mayank was lost.Uptill now nupur's eyes were completely brim with tears and she could hardly see the way when she bumped into someone.The sudden collision made the tears that she was forcing inside trickle down her cheeks.She quickly wipes them off but there was no use coz as soon as she looked up to the person she had collided with the tears were back and this time she didn't have the capability to stop them...It was mayank!!!As nupur looked upto him he seemed so different?so depressed?for a second she forgot all her pain and what all made her worried was mayank's lifeless face and his red eyes.She couldn't understand why he looked like this. she constantly looked at him without even blinking once?but only then mayank's heavy and teary voice broke the deathly silence between the two and nupur comes to her senses?.
M:Nupur?
N:Mayank pls tumhein kuch kahnein ki zaroorat nahin?.tum maurena se kyun aa gaye
aur tumhari kya majboori thi mujhe iska koi explaination nahin chahiye?aur tumhein
fikar karne ki bhi koi zaroorar nahin hai?ab main samajh chuki hoon ki tumhari life mein meri Koi zaroorat nahin hai?isliye pls ye?ye?tension mat lena ki main tumhari life mein wapas aa gayi hoon?(and she breaks saying this?there is so much she wants to say but tears don't let her ..so she just leaves without saying anything else and without even listening to mayank)
As she leaves?mayank is still looking to her in anticipation that she will turn back?she will ask why he left?how was he?and if not all this atleast she will turn back with the same concern in her eyes that she always had for him.He couldn't understand?was his mistake so big that the girl who used to get worried with his smallest scratch?or even when he just sneezed?is no longer bothered to know that why is he so depressed.Thinking all this Mayank who was already preoccupied with so many tensions?just left towards the locker room.
Scene shift:
Samrat and gunjan are walking in the corridor?and gunjan is blushing like always and
Samrat is looking at her with the same twinkle in his eyes and a sweet naughty
smile on his face.Only then someone's conversation breaks their romantic moment?
two guys were talking to each other and one of them tells to the other that his
new locker number is 145?listening this samrat stops with surprise.
S:145!!! Dude ye to mayank ka locker no. hai na?to tumhara kaise ho sakta hai???
"You are right samrat ye mayank ka hi locker hai?lekin ab woh college se ja raha hai to ye locker mujhe mil gaya hai",said one of the guys.
and listening to all this samrat and gunjan are left completely shocked!!!
G:kya!!!!!!lekin?lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai?mayank college se kaise jaa sakta hai?
woh college se kyun jaa raha hai?woh?..
"ek mimute gunjan what are u saying???iska matlab tumhein nahin pata mayank ke saath kya hua hai?I thought ke tum sab uske achche frnds ho!!!!",exclaimed one of them to samrat and gunjan.
S:what do you mean dude???kya hua hai mayank ke saath????
"Samrat jahan tak mujhe pata hai?mayank aur uski mom se unka ghar khali karva liye gaya hai?and iski wajah se uski mom ko mild heart attack bhi hua tha?from the last seven days woh hospital mein thi?and kyunki mayank ki mom ki job bhi chali gayi hai?I think mayank can't afford to study in excel.
As soon as that guy uttered these words?samrat was all red with rage and he seriously wanted to give a good dose to that guy for insulting mayank when gunjan keeps her hand on samrat's shoulder to stop him.seeing samrat like this both of the guys leave quickly.
S:chashmish?ye sab?banji aur dia ne to mujhse kaha tha ki mayank ko ek scholarship exam mein participate karne ka chance mila hai isliye woh Mumbai wapas aa gaya?lekin ye sab?.
G:pata nahin samrat mujhse bhi di ne yehi kaha tha?mujhe to kuch samajh nahin aa raha?only then samrat and gunjan hear a sound?as they look back it was nupur!!!! She was on her knees she had heard everything and was shattered completely.Only then benji dia and uday too come and all of them rush towards nupur??
That's it guys?since the entire scene is a bit long I thought of writing in two parts.if you like it Pls do tell me?I will surely continue.


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bloomstellamusa thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Superb! and yeah i also want the one shots to be written in seperate topics or othervise they hardly get any views
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@bloomstellamusa Thnx so much dear for replying back and supporting my view.I really hope mods too understand this.Ans so happy that you liked my one shot.Thnx a ton.And wish you a very happy diwali
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! What a oneshot Yashika dear!! Plz plz plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue. It was amazing & more than that it was very very touchy. Awww Poor Mayur 😭 Plz continue i really wanna know what will happen nxt. I mean i can imagine what can happen nxt but i wanna c in ur words.

Vinu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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& wish u a very Happy Deepavali & a Prosperous New Year!!
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@ mjht_admirer Thnx dear for appreciating.I will surely continue and pls join us in requesting the creatives allowing one shots as separate topics.Do read the update by night.If this topic will get closed i will post in the one shot gallery.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sure Yashika. I do believe that oneshots SHUD be considered as a seperate topic.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yup dear i agree..its better to keep os separate..they r more visible tht way..or else mostly ppl dnt go and check the os gallery daily..so we r nt sure if anyone has written any new one..so plss mods allow us to keep os separate..
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lovely dear..beautifull plss continue the 2nd part soon...&write loads of more sajan os..plssss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey princessyashika awesome shot
do pm me wen you update the 2 part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's a lovely oneshot dear.And mods i agree to this request.that's what happens to galleries.IT get so filled up .Everyone dosen't check beyond say forst 5 pages and then the last pages.It's full with comments too.

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