An mjht one shot...updated pg 5.d request is on!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
yashika it was jst supb u alrdy knw i m ur os' fan n i totaly agree i plea to mods fr d same thng.
Posted: 15 years ago
#22
very nice os!!
plz continue soon
n pm me when u do
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
omg!!
this all similar is going in my mind regarding this track
loved ur part plzzzzz post soon 2nd one
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thnx all of you guys for liking my one shot so much.and guys sorry for the delay...though i promised you the next part by tonight but since the next part is longer...so took more time to complete it.but i have almost completed it...so will definately post it by tomorrow mornig.Till then a very happy diwali to all of you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb.........awesomeeeeeeee..................it lookd soooooooo realistic.........i felt ki i'm really watchin this in MJHT.......plzzzzzzzz continue soooooooon...........plzzzzzzz yaar atleast tere oneshot mein toh mayur ko firse milvaado...........plzzzzzzzzzzzzz............plzzzzzzzz pm me when u post d next updates
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear. where is ur nxt update yaar. i m eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG yashika!!! awesome, fantastic OS yaar!! i loved it like hell!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon yaar!! i can't wait to read the next part!!
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Part 2
As gunjan and samrat reach towards nupur they catch her before she was literally on ground…they carefully make nupur get up and make her sit on the stairs.nupur is crying as if she has lost everything in her life…gunjan never saw her crying so much…bringing tears in her eyes as well!!!she tries to console nupur but herself falls short of words…
S:benji!!!candy!!!…tumne to mujhse kaha tha ki mayank scholarship exam attend karne
Mumbai gaya hai…phir ye sab!!!aur pls ab chup mat khade raho…kuch bolo…
D:woh Sammy…nupur nahin chahti thi ki tumhein aur gunjan ko is baat ka pata
chale…woh tumhein upset nahin karna chahti thi…itne time ke baad tum dono ko
ek doosre ka saath mila hai…isliye usne humein bhi ye sab chupane ko kaha…
actual mein to mayank dusshehre ke din hi Mumbai wapas aa gaya tha…lekin uske yahan aane ke peeche itna bada reason tha…ye hum mein se koi nahin janta tha…even nupur bhi nahin.
Listening all this samrat and gunjan are left astonished…gunjan feels like a criminal…how couldn't she see nupur's tears!!!her sister was always in front of her bearing all this pain and she was celebrating her love!!!how could she become so selfish!!!but then gunjan tries to control herself as she realizes that nupur needed her support and care...
G:Di tumne aisa kyun kiya di…tum to har baat mujhe batati ho na…phir ye kyun nahin…kyun di…kuch bolo na di…pls di kuch kaho…mujhse baat karo di…but nupur didn't reply…she was motionless!!!n just tears flowed from her eyes….
Seeing this samrat keeps a hand on gunjan's shoulder and through his eyes asks her 2 let him talk to nupur…nodding her head Gunjan steps behind and samrat comes to sit near nupur...
S: nupur main jaanta hoon ki tum is waqt kya soch rahi ho…yehi na ki mayank ke saath itna kuch galat ho gaya aur tum, jisne hamesha uska saath dena ka promise kiya tha woh uske paas bhi nahin thi…lekin nupur kabhi kabhi life mein kuch cheezon par kisi ka control nahin hota…koi nahin chahta ki waisa kuch ho aur na hi unke hone mein kisi ki koi mistake hoti hai…par phir bhi they happen……
Though nupur's throat was completely choked but trying very hard she speaks…she had to in any way coz she knows that mayank needs her…
N:le…lekin samrat main…maine gusse mein pata nahin us se kya kya kah diya…mayank sahi kahta hai main jab bolna shuru karti hoon to kuch nahin sochti…woh bilkul theek kahta hai samrat…woh bilkul theek kahta hai…and nupur starts crying again like a small child!!!
S:nupur!!!mayank bilkul theek kahta hai tum bahut bolti ho…isliye aaj kuch mat bolo…sirf meri ek baat suno…abhi tumhein ye lag raha hai ki tum mayank ko kaise face karogi lekin nupur kya apne guilt ki wajah se mayank ko is samay akela chodna sahi hoga.. .nupur tumhein nahin lagata ke jab mayank ki life ke do sabse important logon mein se ek problem mein hai to use doosre ki sabse zyaada zaroorat hai…jao nupur mayank ko sambal lo..use apni nupur ki zaroorat hai….
Listening all this, nupur,though slowly but still for the first time lifts her head up and looks upto samrat…as if she has understood what all he wants to say…still crying like a kid,nupur hugs samrat for all his support and love…the love of a true friend... n samrat too reciprocates her with the same support and concern…he wipes her tears off and asks her to go and find mayank….
And nupur runs to find her love…to tell him how much she loves him!!!!to tell him that she is always with him!!!
As samrat turns around he sees that gunjan's eyes are brim with tears…as if she wanted to thank him for all he had said to nupur…coz if he wouldn't have been there she herself wouldn't have been able to pacify her sister.but before samrat could say anything to gunjan benji speaks….
B:ye sab to theek hai dude but hum mayank ko college se jane se kaise rokenge????
D:exactly sammy woh kabhi humse kisi tarah ki financial help accept nahin karega….
S:I know candy aur mayank jaise student ko kisi help ki koi zaroorat bhi nahin hai…tum bas dekhti jao…samrat ko apna jaado sirf girls pe hi nahin excel ke princi pe bhi chalana ata hai…u just wait n watch…bas tum sab nupur ke pas hi rehna…woh bahut upset hai.(and everyone nods head in unison).
Scene shift:
Nupur has searched mayank everywhere but couldn't see him even once…now her eyes were craving to just see him once and tell him everything she had kept inside her…she just wanted to hug him once and tell him that he wasn't alone…while running like crazy in search of mayank she sees him sitting in the locker room.He was collecting his books and other material to empty the locker….
Seeing this nupur's feet stopped and a wave of pain went through her body…but she remembered samrat's words that helped her gather all her courage and enter inside the locker room.
As she steps inside,suddenly mayank's hands which were earlier busy in his books become still…as if he has came to know that nupur was near…as mayank is abt to turn back in hope of seeing his love, nupur interrupts…
N:mayank pls peeche mat dekhna…main…main jo tumse kahana chahti hoon woh tumhein dekhkar kabhi nahin kah paaongi…isliye pls mayank peeche mat dekhna.(listening this mayank again turns on the other side.)
Talking to him nupur slowly starts walking towards the bench on which he was sitting…..
N:mayank!!!main janti hoon mayank ki tum mujhse bahut narraz ho…aur…aur hona bhi chahiye…maine ek baar bhi tumhari baat nahin suni…ek baar bhi tumse nahin poocha ki tum itne dukhi kyun ho….ki…kyun tum achanak Mumbai chale aaye……lekin mayank tumne kyun mujhe ek baar bhi nahin kuch kaha…kyun itni badi baat mujhse chupai….kyun sab kuch akele sahte rahe….kyun mayank…kyun…
and now nupur had reached near the bench on which mayank was sitting…she comes and sits near him but continues to speak…
N:batao na mayank kyun mujhse kuch nahin kaha…..kyun tum aise chale aaye….but before nupur could complete mayank comes closer to her and keeps his head in her lap.In a moment she realizes that he has broken completely…so she gently places her hand on his head.she is just gently patting his head and just a few seconds later nupur notices his tears made her dress wet.
N(her hands still in his hair):mayank………
M:nupur maa ko kuch hoga to nahin na….mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha nupur main maa ko kaise sambhalonga…kahan se paise laaonga unke liye…abhi tak to mere pas koi degree bhi nahin…kaun mujhe job dega…kaun mujhe…
While he is saying all this nupur keeps her finger on his lips….
N:nahin mayank aisa kuch mat kaho jo humein kamzor bana de…ab humein milkar maa ka khayal rakhna hai…aur main promise karti hoon ki maa ko kuch nahin hoga…hum unhein kuch nahin hone denge!!!
Listening to all this mayank breaks down into tears badly and hugs nupur tightly….
M:nupur tum kahan chali gayi thi nupur….kyun mujhe phone nahin kiya…pata hai main kitna akela tha….maa ko aise dekh kar kitna dar gaya tha….
M:I am sorry mayank…pls mujhe maaf kardo…pls mayank pls.lekin ab main kahin nahin
jaaongi…sirf tumhare saath rahoongi and she hugs him even more tightly.
While mayank and nupur are lost into their hug…an announcement takes place that breaks their moment of togetherness. all the students were required to report near the basket ball court.Hearing the announcement mayank and nupur come to there senses and get up to go to the basket ball court…but mayank's hands were still shaky.seeing this nupur gets hold of his hand….she interlocks her fingers into his and they start moving together…..
Scene shift:
All students and princi have gathered in the basket ball court,Mayank and nupur also
come from behind.Samrat,gunjan ,dia,benji and uday were also standing there only.
After all students had arrived the princi comes near the mike and begins to speak…
P:well students as you all know ki apne kisi personal reasons ki wajah se Mayank sharma excel chod ke jaa rahe hain lekin excel college ke board aur trusties ne ye decide kiya hai that we can't afford to lose a student like him…mayank excel ka sabse intelligent student hai…aur isiliye uski studies ko excel college completely support karega by giving him 100% scholarhip for the next two years of his course.
Mayank wasn't able to believe what he heard………….he just looks at nupur with sheer disbelief…
Both of them are left surprised…it was all so dreamy…as if some angel had
spinned a magic wand and made things so simple….now mayank wouldn't have to leave the college and his mom's dreams…he can fulfill them all.He in a way was understanding everything….nupur's arrival solved all problems…relieved his biggest tension…she is actually his lucky charm.
He so much wanted to hug and thank nupur for being with him...for coming back...
but couldn't do so in front of the princi and all the students.and nupur!!!she was so happy as if she got the scholarship and actually for her, mayank's happiness and success was much more important than her own…mayank just kept looking at her pure smile and was completely mersemerized by her.
Scene shift:
Now all the gang members…just excluding benji are present in a classroom.Samrat hugs mayank and congratulates him for the scholarship.
D:wow mayank I am so happy for you…thank god ab tum kahin nahin ja rahe ho….
M:thnx so much dia…
lekin ab mujhe maa ke paas jaana hoga…woh sarita aunty ke ghar akeli hain…waise bhi jabse hum unke ghar mein rahne lage hain…unka behavior maa ki taraf kuch ajeeb sa ho gaya hai…I just hope mujhe jaldi se koi flat mil jaye…jiska rent…
But before mayank could complete samrat interrupts.
S:dude relax…hum sab bhi wahin ja rahe hain…to tum humare saath hi chal sakte ho…
Mayank is surprised to hear this.
M:what…lekin samrat tumne to sarita aunty ka ghar bhi nahin dekha…phir???
S:ofcourse mayank maine sarita aunty ka ghar nahin lekin apna ghar zaroor dekha hai…
M:kya!!!apna ghar!!!
D:haan mayank jab nupur tumhare paas aayi thi to peeche se humne benji ko aunty ko mrs. Sarita ke ghar se lane ke liye bhej diya tha aur ab aunty Sammy ke ghar pe hain…
S:exactly dude aur ab se tum aur aunty mere saath hi rahoge…
M:no way…pls samrat ye possible nahin hai…main tum par burden nahin ban na chahta….
S:well mayank tum galat soch rahe ho kyunki burden tum mujh par nahin main tum par banoonga…maine suna hai ki Mr. mayank sharma world ki best coffee banate hain…to ab se roz subah samrat shergill will be served world's best coffee on his bed.
Listening this mayank feels a bit awkward…
M:aaaaa…tumse kisne kaha ki mujhe coffee banani aati hai…
S:well mr Sharma koi sirf aapki grlfrnd hi nahin humari dost bhi hai….and saying this samrat naughtily pats nupurs shoulder bringing a shy smile on her lips….
D:ok guys pls ab jaldi chalo I am so hungry….
And all of them leave the room….except gunjan.As samrat sees that gunjan is still standing in the room he calls her.but her eyes looked teary…as if she will break any moment…seeing this samrat closes the door and comes back.
S:kya hua chashmish…tum chal kyun nahin rahi….
G:(trying to stop her tears)main tumse kuch kahna chahti hoon samrat….
S:kaho na chashmish…
G:thnx samrat…aaj jo bhi tumne mayank aur di ke liye kiya…agar tum na hote to….
listening all this samrat turns around so that he doesn't face gunjan…
S:nahin chashmish maine kuch nahin kiya,,,aur mayank ko ye scholarship apne hardwork ki wajah se mili hai…
G:to phir tum mujhse aankhein kyun chura rahe ho samrat…maine tumhari aur principal sir ki sari baatein suni thi….main janti hoon samrat ye wahi scholarship hai jo tumhein apne last tournament mein next year international championship ki coaching camp ke
liye mili thi…aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki funds ki kami ki wajah se principal sir chahte hue bhi mayank ko scholarship nahin de paa rahe the aur isliye hi tauji ki help se tumne bahut request karke apni scholarship ko mayank ke naam par shift karwa diya.samrat tumnein apni scholarship….aur ek baar bhi kisi ko pata nahin chalne diya…main bahut lucky hoon samrat ki tumne mujhse pyaar kiya….
S:nahin chashmish…aisa kuch nahin hai…mayank is scholarship ko deserve karta hai…college ke paas agar funds ki kami hai to is baat ki punishment mayank jaise intelligent student ko kyun mile.aur jahan tak mera sawal hai to chashmish... success ,scholarships, awards in sabki koi importance tabhi hoti hai jab aap kisi ke saath ye sab share kar sako…mayank ko apni mom ke dreams poore karne hai…lekin mere liye dreams dekhne wala koi nahin hai….to….(and samrat couldn't speak more)…
Gunjan moves towards him and keeping her hand on his shoulder she turns him around…and she sees that samrat has tears in his eyes…she can't believe this…the boy who always majes everyone smile with him…for the first time himself appeared so broken….Seeing him like this gunjan tries to console him but she realizes that her words won't be enough to pacify him.more than her words samrat needed her love….so forgetting all her inhibitions gunjan moves closer to samrat with her feet now almost placed on his….she keeps her gentle hands on his head bending his head down softly and wipes off his tear this time by sucking It…
seeing this samrat is completely surprised…her gunjan who is so shy did so…but he doesn't want to lose this moment…so he reciprocates her by coming even more closer and within a few seconds of a passionate eye-lock both of them are lost into a kiss…
After a few minutes while both of them are still lost into their heavenly world…a beep makes them come into their senses…it was uday's message on samrat's cell to call them outside as all of them had been waiting near the parking.
S:ye uday bhi na…nupur bilkul theek kahti hai...bahut hi achchi timing hai iski…
G:ab samrat sab humari wait kar rahe hain…humein bhi chalna chahiye.
(and both of them go out).
U:tum dono kahan rah gaye the…kya kar rahe the andar itni der se???
Neither gunjan nor samrat spoke a word but seeing gunjan's blushing face nupur understood what had she experienced…she also blushed the same way when mayank kissed her for the first time.
This brings a smile on nupur's face and all of them sit In the car and leave for samrat's house.
Reaching there samrat rings the door bell and benji comes out to open d door.
B:kahan rah gaye the yaar …itni der kyun laga di….
N:benji thodi dheere bolo aunty rest kar rahi hai…
Mayank's mom(MM):nupur….
Her voice though was weak but listening to nupur mayank noticed a unique joy in her voice…seeing her calling…nupur rushes towards mayank's mom and gives her a tight hug..
N:aunty aap theek to hai na…I am sorry main itne din tak nahin aa payi…I am really sorry aunty…
MM:nupur bas beta its ok but mujhe pata tha tu chahe der se aaye par aayegi zaroor…
This brings a smile on nupur's face.Then she introduces gunjan,uday and dia to mayank's mom.
M:maa pls tum in sabko samjhao na hum yahaan nahin rah sakte…
MM:mayu main samrat ko yehi samjha rahi thi lekin ye sab…
S:aunty agar aisi baat hai to phir aap mujhe iske return mein kuch dedejiye…
Everyone was surprised…what was samrat talking abt.
S:aunty kya main aapko mayank ki tarah maa bula sakta hoon…I know ki main aapse bahut zyaada demand kar raha hoon…aur main mayank jaise intelligent bhi nahin…but still aunty mujhe thoda sa guitar bajana ata hai…thodi bahut basket ball bhi khelni ati hai aur haan sabse imp. meri grlfrnd bilkul nupur jaisi hi hai…ek tarah se uski parchai hi hai…
listening all this mayank's mom looks towards gunjan's blushing face and she agrees to stay with samrat as his mom………….samrat's happiness knew no bounds as if he got world's most precious thing…he goes and gives her a hug.Mayank had nothing to protest abt so he too agrees.
U:guys pls ab tumhari ye emotional baatein khatam ho gayi hoon to kuch khaein…mujhe bahut bhookh lagi hai…
D:dodo…ye baat Sammy ko nahin gunjan ko kaho kyunki khana banana sirf use ata hai.
MM:agar aisi baat hai dia to khana to mera mayu bhi bahut achcha banata hai…
S:really!!! Gr8!!!nupur ek kam karte hain naa tumhein khana banana aata hai na mujhe…to hum dono maa ke paas beth te hain aur chashmish aur mayank khana banayeinge.
N:bilkul and nupur gives a high five to samrat.so mayank and gunjan go towards the kitchen to prepare food…well they had no other option.
Sometime had passed and gunjan and mayank were still preparing food when mayank suddenly cuts his finger.
G:oh god mayank tumhare haath se khoon aa raha hai,,,main abhi di ko bhejti hoon…
And gunjan goes to call nupur.
G:di ek minute….
N:haan gunjan bol na…
G:di who sabzi kat te hue mayank ka haath kat gaya hai…ye first aid box tum jaldi se jaakar use dawai laga do.
N:hey bhagwan ye mayank bhi na koi kaam theek se nahin kar sakta….de mujhe dawai.
and she leaves…
Seeing all this happen gunjan looks around….and what all she can see is sheer happiness…at one side her two lovely cousins and sweet frnd benji are doing all mad things and jumping on the sofa…they are surely gonna get something really good for this from samrat…behind her its her sister nupur applying medicine on mayank's hand and scolding him for being so careless but mayank rather than listening to her is just looking at her with so much love in his eyes…and right in front of her is her own love…telling his old boring crazy jokes to mayank's mom….oops his own mom…how does he manage to make everyone giggle with so irritating jokes…well she knows its not his jokes but his januable smile that makes everyone smile with him…………………
Seeing all this…gunjan looks up with a smile on her lips…and simultaneously a tear trickles down her eye…well it was her own unique way of thanking god for making things so perfect!!!
Finally guys its finished.Sorry for such a long part and for making you wait so much.Pls do comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice update....hope we get 2 c sumthn like this in the show....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwww that was so sweet....especially the last moments
great shot yaar

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