An mjht one shot...updated pg 5.d request is on!!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

WOW!!! 👏👏👏👏

Yaar Yashika kahne ko to bahut kuch hai but abhi sirf yahi kah paungi ki this was one of the BEST Oneshots ever read. I know thats a huge compliment 4 u but its true. Really true.

Now coming to the OS, i just loved it. And mujhe kuch kuch scenes bahut hi ache lage jaise,

D:woh Sammy'nupur nahin chahti thi ki tumhein aur gunjan ko is baat ka pata

chale'woh tumhein upset nahin karna chahti thi'itne time ke baad tum dono ko

ek doosre ka saath mila hai'isliye usne humein bhi ye sab chupane ko kaha' Nupur is such a caring & loving sis

S: nupur main jaanta hoon ki tum is waqt kya soch rahi ho'yehi na ki mayank ke saath itna kuch galat ho gaya aur tum, jisne hamesha uska saath dena ka promise kiya tha woh uske paas bhi nahin thi'lekin nupur kabhi kabhi life mein kuch cheezon par kisi ka control nahin hota'koi nahin chahta ki waisa kuch ho aur na hi unke hone mein kisi ki koi mistake hoti hai'par phir bhi they happen''

and S:nupur!!!mayank bilkul theek kahta hai tum bahut bolti ho'isliye aaj kuch mat bolo'sirf meri ek baat suno'abhi tumhein ye lag raha hai ki tum mayank ko kaise face karogi lekin nupur kya apne guilt ki wajah se mayank ko is samay akela chodna sahi hoga.. .nupur tumhein nahin lagata ke jab mayank ki life ke do sabse important logon mein se ek problem mein hai to use doosre ki sabse zyaada zaroorat hai'jao nupur mayank ko sambal lo..use apni nupur ki zaroorat hai'. the bold letters were the best

The enitre mayur scene. Specially when he completely breaks down & she hugs him.

Sajan scenes - very romantic, so touchy, & really really so sweet of Samrat 2 shift his scholarship in name of mayank.

and - D: haan mayank jab nupur tumhare paas aayi thi to peeche se humne benji ko aunty ko mrs. Sarita ke ghar se lane ke liye bhej diya tha aur ab aunty Sammy ke ghar pe hain'awwwww 😊 such a gr8 frnd yaar!!

Her voice though was weak but listening to nupur mayank noticed a unique joy in her voice'

S:aunty kya main aapko mayank ki tarah maa bula sakta hoon' - someone like cool dude samrat should definitely need a cool mom like shilpa aunty, phir dono milke mayank ki tang khichayi bhi kar sakte hain. I hope serial mein bhi jald se mayank, his mom & sam ka ek scene ho.

S:really!!! Gr8!!!nupur ek kam karte hain naa tumhein khana banana aata hai na mujhe'to hum dono maa ke paas beth te hain aur chashmish aur mayank khana banayeinge. - hehe thats funny 😆😆

and the last but not the least - Seeing all this happen gunjan looks around'.and what all she can see is sheer happiness'at one side her two lovely cousins and sweet frnd benji are doing all mad things and jumping on the sofa'🤣 they are surely gonna get something really good for this from samrat'behind her its her sister nupur applying medicine on mayank's hand and scolding him for being so careless but mayank rather than listening to her is just looking at her with so much love in his eyes 😳😳😳'and right in front of her is her own love'telling his old boring crazy jokes to mayank's mom'.oops his own mom😊'how does he manage to make everyone giggle with so irritating jokes'well she knows its not his jokes but his januable smile that makes everyone smile with him'😉😊😳''''''

Well yun samajh lo ki mujhe sabkuch pasand aaya. Plz write more oneshots like this.

loads of love
vinu





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Originally posted by: princessyashika

@mjht_admirer

oh god yaar i can't beleive you said so much...was i really that good!!!thnx so so much for giving such a hearty response.thnx so much dear.i am so happy that you thought my os is one of the best u ever read...its the biggest compliment...i cant tell you i am on cloud 9.and i will soon write more of them.till then take care and keep smiling. 😛