MAYUR ONESHOT...UNCONDITIONAL LOVE..COMPLETED.... - Page 3

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

loved it.

thank u so much..

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hi aisha!!

now what should I say???? I have no words to explain how much I loved it.

you explained everything from nupur's POV very perfectly. her emotions, her thoughts...........you potrayed nupur's character wonderfully.

I really loved the last part.- "adhoori saans thi, dhadkan adhoori thi, adhoore hum. magar ab chand poora hain falak pe, aur ab pure hain hum."

it was awesome.

write more.

aww..thank u so much nishi..thats so sweet of u...
ok i ll surely write more...
thanx for commenting...

poppy and falak..i ll be waiting for ur comments...

Originally posted by: falak01

aisha ji...aaj mere dimaag ka dahi ho gaya hai....aur main is condition me nahi hoon ki comment abhi edit kar sakoo...tu SBG hai yaar..hope tu samjhegi....kal pakka sabse pehle yaha aakar comment edit karungi....

haan sure jaanu..take ur time..i know..
ok yaar i read ur PM..i ll surely help u..
tu kal kissi bhi time mujhe woh PM ker de..
actually i cannot answer it now kyunki sub ko yeh oneshot PM kerte kerte capacity khatam ho gayi hai..aur PMs send hi nahin ho rahe...
so i ll reply to ur PM after sometime ok..

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan

oh god!! oh god!! oh god!!! kya story thi yaar......wonderful , fantabulous , excellent , superb........ufffffff main bata nahi sakti mujhe ye kitni pasand aayi hai.......it was just wooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwww.......awsum awsum ..... plzzzzzzz write more like dis one..... oh god cant believe it.... really ur story was sooooooooooooo sweet luved it..... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

awww....thats so sweet of u dear....
thank u so much..
ya sure i ll try writing more..

Originally posted by: debby

Hey aisha.. that was a beautiful write up..
You took me back in time and made me relive those beautiful moments of MN's relationship... tracking it all the way to the present...

I liked the title too: unconditional love. Indeed, true love is always unconditional...

Loved reading through this, keep writing more!! 😃

thank u so much debby..
it feels great to get these compliments from a great writer like u.
thanx alot..

hey guys..there is a problem with my PMz..so i wont be able to PM the links to u for an hour..after that i ll do that..
till then if u read my oneshot plzz leave in ur comments..

thanx..
luv..aisha..