MAYUR ONESHOT...UNCONDITIONAL LOVE..COMPLETED.... - Page 5

Originally posted by: srish.mayank

Heyy, it was amazing..

i really loved it... great effort.. just keep on writing..

n wen u write another one, dont forget to PM me...

thank u so much dear..
ya sure ..i just pmed this to u rite now...kuch probz ki waja se late ho gayi..😃

thanx again..glad u liked it..

Originally posted by: shruthinair

It was so beautifully portrayed. please do continue...

thank u so much ..glad u liked it..

Originally posted by: yourtwinkletoes

wow aisha,firstly thanks for the pm.secondly,your one shot was really something.kudos for making nups express herself so well.oh,i am falling in love with mayur more than ever ☺️

aww thats so sweet of u dear...
glad u liked it...thanx a ton..

Originally posted by: Kanika05

Amazing One Shot!!! It was like a Flashback of all the MayUr Moments!! Loved itt...

Thanks for the PM hun though i was already half way through when i saw your PM...lol..

Keep Writing More!

Kanika

aww..thanx dear..
ya i know i was late in PMing everyone..some net probz..😆

it feels good to get it from such an amazing writer like u..
glad u liked it..thanx...

BY GOD,aisha!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................well....main kahaan se shuru kar aur kahan pe khatam karu....evn i dnt knw..... 😕 😆 ............tune saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaare mayur yaadein taaza karli.......i literally ws able to visualise each n evry line u wrote..........it ws just mindblowinnnn............superbbbbbbbbbb................n ur ending....waah,...toooooooo guuuuuuuuud...............'Mayur ki shaadi'...(jo har ek Mayurian sabse bada aur khoooobsurat sapna hai...armaan hai...jise real mein hone mein kaaaaaaaaafi waqt lagega..i knw.... 😆 ).....n ur final wordings..."now i can say that no matter how sadoo and arrogant and a bit sarcastic maybe.....MAYANK is still my dream man and he is the only one who filled the empitness in my life and completed me....with his UNCONDITIONAL LOVE........"........wowwwwwwwwwww..........it ws tooooooooooooooo touching yaaaaaaar........seeeeeeedhe dil ko choooo liya yaar.......so all in all i'l giv 10/10 for ur oneshot..... 👏 ...... 🤗

Originally posted by: nikki028

BY GOD,aisha!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................well....main kahaan se shuru kar aur kahan pe khatam karu....evn i dnt knw..... 😕 😆 ............tune saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaare mayur yaadein taaza karli.......i literally ws able to visualise each n evry line u wrote..........it ws just mindblowinnnn............superbbbbbbbbbb................n ur ending....waah,...toooooooo guuuuuuuuud...............'Mayur ki shaadi'...(jo har ek Mayurian sabse bada aur khoooobsurat sapna hai...armaan hai...jise real mein hone mein kaaaaaaaaafi waqt lagega..i knw.... 😆 ).....n ur final wordings..."now i can say that no matter how sadoo and arrogant and a bit sarcastic maybe.....MAYANK is still my dream man and he is the only one who filled the empitness in my life and completed me....with his UNCONDITIONAL LOVE........"........wowwwwwwwwwww..........it ws tooooooooooooooo touching yaaaaaaar........seeeeeeedhe dil ko choooo liya yaar.......so all in all i'l giv 10/10 for ur oneshot..... 👏 ...... 🤗

aww nikki jaan..that was such a lovely comment..thank u so so much...
im glad u liked it...
10 on 10....oh god..yaar yahan aur bhi bohot amazing writers hain..im not even in the mediocres...😆
thats really sweet of u..
thanx a ton..

Originally posted by: ananya_s

wow!!!!!!!!!.awesome.....really loved it

thank u so much..

thanx guys..im glad u all liked it..