MAYUR ONESHOT...UNCONDITIONAL LOVE..COMPLETED....

cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Shilpa.Agarwal
hi aisha di....its a kick star....what a intro! n i lovd this line....for me this is an unsaid aspect of nupur's charecter

i always missed her but i never showed it on my face as i could not afford to see my sister sad

thanx dear..read the whole now..i ve updated the whole one now..do comment haan..

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
hey yaar luv your intro are u updating today the first part

ive written the whole now..
do leave in ur comments..thanx..

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nishithini
hey aisha!
nice intro. when r u gonna continue??

I am waiting.

thank u jaan..ya ive updated the whole now..do read n leave in ur comments... thanx..

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: nikki028
aisha.....kya intro likhi hai tune,BY GOD!!!!!!!!!......... 👏 .........its vry gud.....gr8.....plzzz update soon dear.....n if possible pllzzzzzzz pm me when u post d next update.....

thanx dear..ok ive written the whole now..do leave in ur comments..

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
awesome aisha

too good re 👏

thanx dear..ok ive written the whole now..do leave in ur comments..

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: cherrgirl2711
i enjoyed the intro and am waiting for da update....plz continue its sounds really gd !!!!!

thanx dear..ok ive written the whole now..do leave in ur comments..

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25
hey .hi! nice start ...... love it ...... continue it plezzzzzzzzzzzzzz . 👏update next part sooon plezzzzzzzzzz .

thanx dear..ok ive written the whole now..do leave in ur comments..

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payas bansal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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sorry ashu

i have to urgently leave

will cum 2morrow and comment

sorry again

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EDITED***

wow ashu....................loved it

soooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeet

awsum job done

do continue wid this work

very well written

Edited by sajan_monaya - 16 years ago

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falak

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Posted: 16 years ago

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***EDITED***

CHHAND POORA HAI FALAK PAR....

SAASEIN AB BHI BAKI HAIN MAGAR....

DIL KO CHOO GAYI TERI HAR ADAAA....

DHADKANO PAR KIYA TUNE AISHA ASAR....

Aisha....meri jaan.....aa gale lag jaaaa.......

mujhse raha nahi gaya aur maine poora padh liyaa....😆😆

meri shayari se samajh aa gaya hoga ki main ek baar phir se deewani ho gayi....

loved it yaar..the way u introduced..the way u called up each n every moment of mayur's relationship...hayyyyyeeeeeeee.....

aur haan..present situation to LAJAWAAB hai.....

chha gaye ji....👏

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nishi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

hi aisha!!

now what should I say???? I have no words to explain how much I loved it.

you explained everything from nupur's POV very perfectly. her emotions, her thoughts...........you potrayed nupur's character wonderfully.

I really loved the last part.- "adhoori saans thi, dhadkan adhoori thi, adhoore hum. magar ab chand poora hain falak pe, aur ab pure hain hum."

it was awesome.

write more.

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