FF~'CLosER Than EvEr'~(updt prt 13)sajan special - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
Oh my goodness.. cant believe i read it ! lol.. im so lazy that never maged to read any FF.. but im reading ur FF haha..
great girl..im lopving ur every art.. sacchi.. i loved it.. i loved Mayank's mom & nupur's convo.. by god maza aa gaya..
i loved my fav pair sajan interraction..ahh ! it was so heart stopper..hayye !..
Its awesome dont 4get to pm me next yime..coz i dont wanna losse my this new habbit (reading FF) & also dont wanna miss ur sweet FF..

Keep it up :)*hug*

Love
piya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
both the parts rock ⭐️
pls continue
just loving the sajan parts😃
the mayur parts are nice 2
rhea
PS - i am new
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
amazing part!!!
totally loved it...
continue soon
drishti
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
hey awesome man, all your parts have been more than wonderful, do update soon. loveddddddddddd mayur man.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

short update,since this the second update of the day..



PART 5

How could u do this?woh bhi uske saath,jo tujhse sabse zyaada pyar karti hai? the girl who changed u,ur life forever…??have u seen how lifeless has she become?she will never forgive u.…tune usse barbaad kar diya..

He was cursing himself…sitting on the bench in d garden….. regretting every word he said and every action he performed…

She was running…she had huge tears in her eyes…she had had enough..she wanted to end her life….she could not live without her soul….

He saw her running towards him…instinctively,his arms opened…he did not realize he was still at college,or that she would never come into his arms again..but he could sense her tears…

She saw him……and she could see nothing else…he still had d same effect on her,even after what all had happened...she ran into his arms,after 2 long months that seemed like an eternity…the comfort…the love…..the passion.the feelings that had been killed,all re emerged,as if they were always there….she wanted to die in his arms…

He tightened his grip on her…he felt as if he was in heaven..or maybe heaven was nothing as compared to d feelings that rushed through him…she tightened her arms around him too…he was a little surprised that she reciprocated like this,he was expecting a tight slap…..

Not wasting more time,he said what he yearned to say-

I LOVE YOU…….I LOVE U GUNJAN……main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon…..Please Gunjan mujhe maaf kardo…

Gunjan became very still….she could not believe her ears…yeh nahin ho sakta….woh mujhse pyaar nahin karta….but…he was holding her right now..tighter than ever…..

Iss se pehle tum kuch kaho Gunjan,main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon…he was still holding her…she was as precious as his own life…no..more than that..

Mujhe maaf kardo Gunjan…please…mujhse bohot badi galti ho gayi Gunjan….main tumhare sacche pyaar ko thhhukraa kar apni jhooth aur nakali zindagi sanwaar raha tha..par meri zindagi toh tum ho gunjan…meri har ek saans tumhari….main janta hu tumhein meri baatein bekar lag rahi hongi…Main tumse maafi ki koi ummeed nahin rakhta Gunjan..main maafi ke layak nahin hoon…par please Gunjan..rona band karo..main tumhein aise nahin dekh sakta Gunjan…he was crying too….please…

How could this be possible…how could SAMRAT say all this…maafi? Those two months,all the times I cried myself to sleep,those sleeping pills,the scars on my hand,the broken pieces of my heart…maafi?pyaar?yeh sab main bhool chuki hoon..

But then..why was she still in his arms,like an overprotected child…why did she still love him more than anything in this world…..why did his touch make her faint still…..was she still d same?had samrat really changed?

Gunjan immediately broke the hug…she looked at him….she had not spoken to him since an eternity….

GUNJAN-im sorry SAMRAT…..main apne aap ko rok nahin payi….sorry for the trouble….

SAMRAT-gunjan tum yeh kya

GUNJAN-bye SAMRAT..and she walked away

GUNJAN-she wanted to turn back and hug him again…tell him that she loved him still…cry in his arms….but her mind forbidden her to do so…

She was about to faint……there were images and voices all around her..

CHASHMISH…I LOVE YOU….CHIPKOO……BEHENJI……..PRINCESS…..NIKAL JAO MERE ZINDAGI SE

She couldn't take it nemore……with all the stress and the events of the past two months revolving around her,she fainted…….

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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
no mayur part jaani............plz mayu ko jaldi dekhao
but i loved this part of urs...............it was rocking
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
wowowwo coollll part i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
wonderful part....completely loved it.
don't keep sajan away from each other for a long time.
update soon
drishti
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
hey nice but can we please have mayur na.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
LOVED IT! SAJAN ARE SHO CUTE <3 THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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