FF~'CLosER Than EvEr'~(updt prt 13)sajan special

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys...ive been working on this fanfic for a very long tym,n i hope u guys wud like it to..
this is d character sketch-

NUPUR BHUSHAN-the bubbly,bindaas,pretty looking 'Madhhuri Dixit' of Morena....Little miss popular,she loves to dance,cook and take care of everybody around her,but in her own way....she's closest to her lil sisiter..she also has a best friend,Tamanna,whom she met 4 years ago,at her dance class....

beautiful,chuimui, a sweethart and everybodys favourite....the most melodious singer in d world,who can attract nebody with just one sweet smile...thats GUNJAN BHUSHAN for u...reserved n shy,she doesnot make friends easily,but those who know her,simply adore her!solving everybodys problems n caring for even strangers,like they were a family is her best quality...she loves her nupur di a lot,who is also her bestest friend n guide.

if looks could kill,then all girls at excel would be re born everyday....hot,flirty,generous n the captain of d basketball team..thats SAMRAT....he can woo girls wid a click of his fingers...and he is pretty aware of dis fact too..a passionate dancer and a guitarist...kind and down to earth,he doesnot show his real nature,fearing people will take advantage of dis....he has a cool gang of friends,but is still waiting for someone wid whom he can be samrat the person,n not samrat the greek god...

MAYANK-"books are my best friend"...thats wat he told everyone at the first day of his school...smart,dashing and very intelligent-girls were head over heels for him..but...his definition of love was simple-a girl should love me for who i am n not for what i am or how i look...he had suffered a tough childhood,but had a golden heart beneath his tough looks....and was also an excellent singer..

TAMANNA-hot,sensitive,intelligent and full of life....she was Nupur's best friend..a terrific dancer,a good student and a trained classical singer,she had all d qualities a guy looked for in a girl...but she had already given her heart away..to the most charming guy in d world..whom she met in an academic meet 6 months ago...for whom she changed her college and came to excel...who unfortunately in future was to become her jija g...

DIA-'sammy is mine'....dat was her favourite dialouge...she ws d queen of college and of arrogance n attitude as well....she was good at heart,but her desire to be at d top at the others expense made her forget her basic nature...her main aim was to be samrats girlfriend,she could commit any form of crime for dat,not because she loved him,but because everybody loved him....

other characters are benji,uday,cj,rohit n all teachers...
the story would begin at the 2nd semester of excel...
do tell me if u want me to continue...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiii!!! i'm new here and my name is Arpita. anyways please continue soon!!! i love your storyline and i cant get enough of FF with MJHT.
P.S: please add lots and lots of Mayur scenes 'cause I LOOOVEEEE them!!!! 😳 lolz.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowowow plzzzzzzzzzzz contuied soon i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey...thanks...i was a bit nervous...
m addicted to both the couples,so there will b loads of mayur n sajan scenes,m waiting for a few more responses...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice intro sweet.. plz try to balance both d couple sajan n mayur :)
thanks..
love
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1

The atmosphere was very tensed…she was holding his hand very tightly…she could not see his face clearly due to the strange lighting, but knew he was there and she felt safe…the judges sitting on the other end of the auditorium were murmuring amongst themselves…she was getting very hyper…he knew she was afraid…he tried to calm her… couldnot see stress on her face..'MAIN HOON NA', he said..

'Yeh time filmon ka naam lene ka nahin hai…maana shahrukh mera favourite hai..but filhaal chup karo' …

Nupurrr…..he shook his head….it was hopeless..

Finally the host spoke…

"The winners of this contest are…NUPUR AND HER BALIYE!!!"

She was jumping up and down..it was her dream come true…NACH BALIYE! SRK,SAIF,KAJOL and SAROJ KHAN…all were coming towards her with that big cheque..she still didn't leave his hand..she couldn't..a part of her was telling her..dont let go…he might not return..….and suddenly..she felt a stabbing pain in her hea…she looked at him…like d past four five times, couldn't see his face,again…..

"Di…aap theek toh ho…Aap bed se kaise girgaye???"it was gunjan…who woke startled,hearing a thud..

"Wo main……hain ?Main bed se kaise girgayi?By god Gunjan,zaroor iss bed mein koi kharaabi hai….aise kaise mujhe gira diya..ahh..mera sir….Pta hai Gunjan..mujhe who sapnaa fir se aaya..Nach baliye waala…main firse jeeti…mazaa agaya by god….kya raapchick dance kiya maine…sabki sitti pittai gul ho gayi…"

Gunjan,smiling at her celebrity mania…haan di..tum sabse accha dance jo karti ho..meri madhuri dixit!

In her melodramatic dialogue tone-'Bus kar gunjan..uff……kahin main sharam se paani paani na ho jau'…both of them giggled n then went back to sleep…

Nupur was very restless…she couldn't sleep…it was the fifth time she couldn't see his face…there was a feeling of satisfaction she felt in holding his hand….something about his voice dat sent a tingling sensation throughout her body…a certain enigma that made her feel "jab tak main iske saath hoon,mujhe kuch nahin ho sakta"…she alwaysused to dream a lot,but it used to be about salman khan,saif,shahrukh,ranbeer….no not ranbeer….uski toh who khmbi girlfriend hai,she used to say…but pichle kuch dinon se,it was all different…she wanted to see him,touch him,hug him…but she didn't know who he was…!!

'Jab se hum Mumbai aaye hain,tab se mere saath yeh ho raha hai…do din baad hamare naye college ka pehla din hai…ek semester pehle se he miss kar chuke hain,aur agar main aise he sapne dekhne lagi toh main dusra bhi miss kardungi…Nupur beta,soja,tera kuch nahin ho sakta!!'

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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 yaar.......continue soon
loved the way u described evrythng..........plz pm when u update nxt
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Posted: 16 years ago
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FAB! šŸ‘PLZ CONTINUE SOON!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Go on dear.. ill surely read and comment :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar i love d way u made d story turn out!!!!....plz rite aur haan a spl req frm me....plz ha a lot of mayur.......dey r my fav couple....plz continue

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