FF~'CLosER Than EvEr'~(updt prt 13)sajan special - Page 4

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hey gr8 story...im a huge fan of sajan...keep it up

hey....i just read all three parts...your an awesome writer...i love the way you describe everyone's feelings...you have a unique style of writing....which is absolutely great....i love your fan fic...i cant wait for you to continue......plz PM me when you update.

wow tht was a mindblowing part yaar.....luved each & every bit of it awwww i wish Gunjan ne sammy ka face dekga hota........but overall it was a splendid update.....thnxs alot for pm & continue soon

PART 4

(flash back-samrat after d whole Gunjan incident)

SAMRAT-Benji…yeh LAdki kaun thi yaar..

BENJI-kaun…woh jo abhi abhi tere upar giri?New admission hai…Gunjan…hamare batch ki hai…cute na..?

DIA enters from behind,n puts an arm around sammys shoulder..

DIA-kiski baat ho rahi thi yahaan par?maine kisi ladki ko cute kehte huye suna…sammy tum mere hote huye kisi aur ko compliment de rahe ho…not fair…

BENJI-nahin dia, tumhare hote huye samrat ki itni himmat…usse marne ka shauk nahin hai..

DIA-watever..

SAMRAT-nahin candy,hum cute nahin fruit bol rahe the..mujhe fruit juice peena hai..m so tired…game bohot exhausting than a…

DIA-awww….poor sammy…chalo,main abhi tumhein juice lekar deti hoon…

SAMRAT-how sweet candy..

BENJI how sweet candy….jitni meethi upar se hai,utni kadvi andar se hai…

MAYANK IN D LIBRARY

Mayank..have you lost it..tu itna rude kaise ho gaya…bechaari ki toh galti bhi nahin thi…tu he jaldi jaldi mein takraa gaya..tune usse kitna daanta…I think tujhe maafi maangni chahiye…..but ab toh who chali gayi ho gi na…kal maang lena…aur tujhe huya kya tha?tu blink karna kaise bhool gaya…par uski aankhein… she was sooo pretty…mayank surat pe nahin seerat par dhyan do…who kis tarah tujhe pe cheekhi..jungli billi ki tarah..par usse gussa bhi toh tune dilaya tha na?aur woh ajeeb si feeling kya thi dude?..bus..aaj se ma ke saath serial dekhna band….

Day 2 at excel

Nupur was not feeling well….she had a headache…so she requested Gunjan to go without her…

NUPUR-ahh..Gunjan mera sir phate jaa raha hai…jaldi kar..

GUNJAN-yeh lo di..garama garm adarak wali chai…isse peekar aapko accha lagega..

NUPUR-by god gunjan..aaj bhi tujhse acchi chai koi nahin bna sakta..par main soch rahi hoon ki aaj college na jau..sir mein itna dard hai…ghar par baith kar purane notes complete karlungi..aur market se saaman bhi toh laana hai..

GUNJAN-di par naya college aur phir who kal jo hua tha..

NUPUR-arrey haan…koi nhi,main chalti hu…main dawai le leti hu…

GUNJAN-nahin di..aap chup chap ghar par baitho..main chali jaungi..aur shayad tum theek keh rahi ho,sab bhool chuke honge..

NUPUR-meri acchi behen..muah..

AT EXCEL

Gunjan was sitting in d canteen,making notes when suddenly-

Hello Gunjan ji…aap yahaan pe nayi hain na?

It was dia and her gang…famous for ragging new comers…

GUNJAN-ji… haan…. Woh…. Main….. kal……. Nahin… matlab…

DIA-agar aise answer karogi,toh shyam ho jayegi babes…

GUNJAN-haan,main kal he ayi hoon

DIA-good…par main kal nahin ayi..main yahaan 2 saalon se padh rahi hu…im Dia..is college ki sabse popular ladki..aur yeh hain mere friends…Annie and CHako…

GUNJAN-namaste…I mean hi..

DIA-gunjan dear…namaste?tum kaunsi century mein paida hui thi?waise tumhaare kapde dekh kar toh lagta hai tum meri dadi mom ki best friend rahi hogi….

Everybody in the canteen starts hooting and laughing..

Gunjan could feel the tears dwelling in her eyes..

DIA-okay relax guys,shhh…Gunjan dear..kyunki tum yahaan par nayi ho,tumhein humein entertain karna hoga..

We see sammy entering,holding his guitar..he just wanted to have a cup of coffee n relax,but the crowd made him curious..

SAMRAT-yeh sab kya ho raha hai candy?

DIA-oh hi sammy…inse milon…GUNJAN g…humare college mein nayi hain…Gunjan..yeh hai Samrat..College ka sabse handsome aur popular ladka..

Sammy goes in for a handshake,but Gunjan doesnot respond…she keeps looking at the floor,trying to hide her tears…how she wished her di was here…

SAMRAT-arrey wah Gunjan ji..kal toh aap humein chhodne ka naam he nahin le rahi thi,aaj haath bhi nahin mila rahi…

Gunjan…yeh wohi hai….gunjan! shake his hand for godsake dammit…

GUNJAN still looking at the floor-im sorry..

SAMRAT was too confused…why was she behaving so weirdly..no one was eating her up..

SAMRAT-koi baat nahin…he was imitating her…

GUNJAN-mujhe jaana hai,please

DIA-not before we hear u sing babes..or dance for that matter..

GUNJAN-dekhiye please…mujhe jaane dijiye…now she was sobbing loudly enough for everybody to hear..

As soon as he realized she was crying….he wanted to go and give her a hug…and wipe away her tears…she was so innocent…and so sensitive…and she looked so cute with a red nose…she was attracting him like a magnet..but he did not even know her!how could he be attracted to her?

He was confused,but DIA ended his confusion

DIA-kahaan kho gaye sammy?Gunjan se gaana gaane ke liye nahin kahoge kya?

He wanted to protect her….n so he did…

SAMMY-candy,mujhe lagta hai humein chashmish ji ko jaane dena chahiye…iski ragging karne mein toh mazaa bhi nahin ayega…jao chashmish jao,tum azaad ho!

Gunjan rushed out of the canteen,wiping away her tears….she was somewhere grateful to Samrat for helping her,though it was for his own purpose..

As she was running,she bumped into Mayank..

MAYANK-arrey array sambhal ke…yeh kya..aap ro kyun rahi hai?kya main apki kuch madad kar sakta hu?

GUNJAN,wiping away her tears-nahin main theek hu…who bus who log..

MAYANK-lagta hai apki mulakat DIA se ho gayi hai…aap uski baton ka bura mat manna..woh aisi hai..by d way-m mayank…third year…

GUNJAN-m Gunjan…second year..new admission..kal he maine aur meri di ne join kiya hai…

Ohh…so dat other new admissioned girl is her sister….hmm…

MAYANK-tumhari di ka naam kya hai waise?

GUNJAN-nupur…who bhi third year mein hain..shayad aapke saath hongi..

MAYANK-haan shayad…meri unse dhang se mulakaat nahin huyi..woh hain kahaan waise?

GUNJAN was geeting curious…why was he so interested in knowing about di?but he looked like a nice guy..

GUNJAN-actually unki tabiyat thodi kharaab thi toh..

MAYANK-oh accha..chalo koi nahin,unse kal milenge…pleasure meeting u Gunjan…lunch mein milte hain…aur rona mat!

GUNJAN-same here mayank..thanku…

Gunjan goes to the library,smiling now. .at least there were some good people in excel…

As college was about to get over,some one touched her shoulder from behind…she stopped breathing..there was something about this touch that made her heart stop..the same way it had stopped earlier…n this time too,it was because of him that it happened..

SAMRAT-Gunjan…hi..Samrat..naam toh suna he hoga

GUNJAN-(breathe gunjan breathe…he's a normal living being…he's no alien..relax)-nahin….nahin suna…

SAMRAT-kya??excell mein rehte hue excel ke champ ka naam nahin suna?

GUNJAN-ji who main kal he ayi hoon..ab dhyan rakhungi

SAMRAT-she is soooo innocent…doesn't even realize m pickin on her…

SAMRAT-hmm…toh gunjan ji..aapko sabke saamne baat karne mein darr lagta hai?

GUNJAN(-how did he know that?he knows me….without even talking to me he knws me…wat is all dis bhagwaan ji…)nahin..haan..mera matlab…

SAMRAT-tumhare shakal par dikhta hai…itni bholi surat..itni sundar aankhein…itni pyaari smile..aur ITNI SAARI TENSION!!

Gunjan couldn't believe her ears..it was d first time ever that a guy had

coplimented her…..she felt as if there was no ground beneath her…

on the other hand..samrat couldnot believe himself either….what had he just said?wasnt he he afraid someone might hear…he was used to girls begging for compliments,he never complimented anybody..wat was wrong with him?

Gunjan then realized how stupid she was…….this guy was obviously flirting with her…how could he be so genuine?ofcourse this was another ragging trick…….

GUNJAN-dekhiye,mere raaste se hatiye,mujhe jaana hai…she was very

Angry

SAMRAT-arrey array…itna gussa?kya hua chashmish?

GUNJAN-dekhiye..mera naam GUNJAN hai…aur mujhe der ho rahi hai..please hatiye..

SAMRAT-okay okay GUNJAN JI…jaiye…

But since God too is ver filmy,he decided to add a simple twist here…gunjans frilly dupatta got caught in Samrats wrist watch…

GUNJAN(she was about to faint…….wat was he doing?why was he holding her dupatta…she felt butterflies in her stomach…her heart leapt up…..)

GUNJAN-samrat..yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?

SAMRAT-shayad tumhara dupatta chahta nahin ki tum jayo(he was being so filmy,but he was loving it)

He came and stood infront of Gunjan…who had again closed her eyes…he was admiring her beauty…no girl had ever been so pretty for him…no girl was so innocent n sweet..no one looked so delicate…was dis love at first sight?he slapped himself hard on the head, smiled at himself, untangled d dupatta n left it hanging on her shoulder…turned n walked away..

GUNJAN opened her eyes…..she was too lost for words…she did not know how to react…it happened all of a sudden,but felt as if an eternity had passed…such a small n stupid incident had left such a huge impact on her…she realized she was still shivering…with 40 degree temperature…her mushy girly heart told her he wasn't flirting…..her practical topper mind told her to grow up….

BACK AT HOME

NUPUR-chai patti khatam hai,doodh nahin pada,bread bhi aadhi hai…yeh Gunjan bhi na..bta ke nahin jaa sakti thi?kitni bhookh lagi hai…bazaar jaana padega…

At the market, nupur notices a woman, in her mid forties, arguing with the shopkeeper…the way she was shouting, Nupur was reminded of herself..

WOMAN-bhaiyya aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain..pichle dus minute mein aapse laal mirchi nahin dhoondi gayi…aura b aap keh rahe hain that ande khatam hai…aur upar se is magazine ke chaalis rupaye?raddi mein padi magazine maine utha kya li,aap toh sir par chadh gaye…bade kaamchor ho aap log toh..

NUPUR couldnot hold herself any longer…she wanted to fyt to..after all,she loved debates n arguments,specially when she knew she would win easily..

NUPUR-kya hua aunty..koi pareshhani..

WOMAN-dekho naa beta,kitne kaamchor log hain…adhi cheezein rakhte nahin,aur upar se loot maar rakhi hai..

NUPUR-kyun bhaiyya?supermarket k naam par footpath ki dukaan khol rakhi hai kya?aur magazine ke chaalis rupaye..main yeh magazine har hafte padhti hun..aur yeh 35 rupaye ki hai..ullu banate ho?consumer court phone karu?

Shopkeeper got so scared..he gave d magazine for free..

NUPUR and the WOMAN come out,laughing

WOMAN-waah beta…mazaa agaya..us dukaandar kit oh hawa khisak gayi..ur so clever..

NUPUR-aunty..in badmaashon ke saath aisa he hona chahiye..

WOMAN-beta tumhara naam kya hai?pehle tumhein yahaan kahin dekha nahin..u look new..

NUPUR-m Nupur…actually humne last week he shift kia hai..me n my younger sisiter…main excel ki student hoo..kal he join kiya..

WOMAN-m Shalini…mera beta bhi excel ka student hai..his name is Mayank…

NUPUR-ill meet him in college..accha aunty apko koi jagah pta hai jahaan samose mile?mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai by god!

SHALINI-pta hai na..mera ghar..aao chalo..dono milke samose khaate hain..

NUPUR_chaliye aunty!

It was late in d evening…Nupur n shalini were still chatting..they discussed tv programs,movies,nupur n gunjans bachpan ki stories,mayank,his childhood…

NUPUR-BYgod aunty!mazaa he agaya..itne acche samose toh maine kahin nahin khaye..thanku soo much..par aunty mujhe chalna chahiye…gunjan mera wait kar rahi hogi

SHALINI-beta thodi der ruk jaati toh mayu se bhi mil leti..

NUPUR-nahin aunty,fir kabhi…aur kal college mein bhi toh mil he sakte hai na..main chalti hu..she touched her feet..n went off

SHALINI-kitni pyaari bacchi hai…natkhat si..kaash mere mayu ko bhi aisi he ladki mile…jo uski life mein thodi masti bhar de…

in the evening both the sisters were discussing about their day...

gunjan narrated the whole incident to nupur,n she was furious..is dia ki toh main...she had said...gunjan also told her about mayank,n how he helped her...

NUPUR-wah gunjan..aaj kal toh maynak he mayank...aaj main uski mummy se mili aur humne khoob gappe mari,tu college mein usse mili..lagta hai ab kal jakar usse milna he padega...

ON THE OTHER HAND

SHALINI-mayu...aaj main tumhari college ki ek student se mili..badi pyaari ladki hai..Nupur..new admission hai shayad..

MAYANK-kya?aap Nupur se mile?pehle kyun nahin btaya?

SHALINI-arrey hadh ho gayi...kal college mein milena,woh kahin nahin ja rahi..

MAYANK-haan ma..kal jakar uuse milna he padega...sorry bhi toh kehna hai..

hey soooooo chweet

hi thr!! 😛 i've just joined this forum... n i went thru ur FF... i've got jus 3 words.. I LOVE IT... so keep it coming... 😆whass ur name???

hey thats so sweet... m shruti..n thanks guys...ur appreciation keeps me going...

aww simply amazing updates yaar......i love d way u rite.......continue soon....oh nd since uve had sum majan scenes hav sum fr sanu also...ok?

ya sure...ill keep that in mind.....this is one long ff sweety....a lot of unexpected things would happen......😉