[Crazy for You ❤️] - Ch.6 p14 Mayank Proposing - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Hey Prii, great VM 👏👏

I very liked ur 1st part, lovely introduction of all 😳
I appreciated ur effort to put different colours for everyone 👏
I like the fact Dodo isnt Diya's bro 😆
Samrat is already fida 😃 Seems like Mayank will take some more time 😊
Do continue soon 😉
Keep up the great work 😳



hey hun..
aww thanks soo much hun..
it was my pleasure.
lolz.. yh it sounds like Diya is i love with Dodo..lol
oh yeah its totally opposite yaar..
lolz.. will PM u soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ksdbstjodi

Hey Pri...just caught up wid ur FF...amazing...👏👏

it was too gud😳...loved the way u rite...plz update soon..😃
n if possible do PM me..
Love,
Riddhima..😳



hey Ridz thanks alot.
Sure will PM u asap!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Chapter 2

Its Saturday morning, warm and sunny, Nupur woke up and saw Gunjun sitting outside on the bench. Nupur went out and Uday was standing watching her as well. Uday told Nupur, I think something is bugging Gunjun. Maybe she is missing mom and dad? Nupur, maybe but I think its something else. Uday, I am going to tell you something but you cannot tell Gunjun at all. Nupur, ooo tell me. I won't tell her I promise. Uday says, "Well, Samrat fell in love with Gunjun at college." Really, omg that's great news. Atleast she will forget her old love replied Nupur.

Nupur: Brings over tea and breakfast to Gunjun and sits next to her. Good Morning Gunjun.

Gunjun: Good Morning! Nupur, "I am really sorry for yelling at you yesterday at lunch in front of everyone."

Nupur: Hey, no need to say sorry. I understand. Changing cities, places & colleges changes everything. The best thing to do is forget whatever happened in your past.

Gunjun: But, he is my life. After the attack I will never forget this moment I had with him. He risked his life for me.

Nupur: Jaan, he was your life. Not anymore. Forget everything.

Gunjun: How can you say this all? He is and always will be my life? No will take over his spot.

** You all must be wondering who this lucky guy is in Gunjun's past love? **

After Diya comes and leaves with Nupur for shopping, Gunjun tells Uday that she's going to the park to chill her mind. Just as when she walks out, Samrat come and sees Uday watching Gunjun leaving from the window.


Samrat: Hi Uday, What's up? Why do you look all worried and scared?

Uday: Hi Samrat. It's nothing like that.

Samrat: Oh come on, tell me? What's going on?

Uday: Nothing. Forget it. Why are you here?

Samrat: Ok. Umm did Nupur & Diya leave for shopping? I was thinking to hangout with Gunjun, I mean show her around our amazing city.

Uday: Sorry yaar, you just missed her. She went to the park to chill her mind.

Samrat: Oh ok, then I'll catch her there.

Uday: Alright, see ya.

Song comes in when Samrat sees Gunjun sitting under the tree with her hands and head against her legs.

(Dil toh udne laga, ye kya hone laga
Ye kaun sa mod hai_
Dheere dheere, chori chori
kaise kaise meethhe meethhe sapne sanjota hai dil)
Dil toh udne laga, ye kya hone laga

Lehre meri aaghosh mein, kaise rahoon main hosh mein
Dhadkan mein hai, kaisi jalan, bas mein nahin, kyun mera man
Naya naya dard hai, nayi nayi pyaas hai
Naye armaan hai, naye ehsaas hai
Ye kaun sa mod hai
Dheere dheere, chori chori, kaise kaise meethhe meethhe sapne sanjota hai dil
Dil toh udne laga, ye kya hone laga

Halchal machi kyun aaj hai, kaisi meri parvaaz hai
Paagal hawa rangeen safar, manzil se hoon main bekhabar
Jawaan jawaan ye sama, huwa woh badgumaan
Labon ke darmiyaan, khuli khuli daastaan
Ye kaun sa mod hai
Dheere dheere, chori chori, kaise kaise meethhe meethhe sapne sanjota hai dil
Dil toh udne laga, ye kya hone laga
Ye kaun sa mod hai
Dheere dheere, chori chori, kaise kaise meethhe meethhe sapne sanjota hai dil
Dil toh udne laga, ye kya hone laga


This Song is from: TUM Film 2004


Samrat: Hi Gunjun. How are you?

Gunjun: Hi. I am good. You?

Samrat: Same here. Why are you sitting here alone? Didn't you want to go to shopping with Diya & Nupur?

Gunjun: Umm' I just miss my parents and back home. I miss my friends. I didn't feel like going.

Samrat: Oh, Do you mind if I sit down next you and we get to know each other?

Gunjun: Sure, but just letting you know, I hate fakers!

Samrat: Alright, then let's start out with our friendship. (Samrat takes out his hands for a friendship).

Gunjun: Sorry, I don't become friends so easily.

Watch the lovely scene between Gunjun & Samrat!

----------------* Will be continued soon * ------------------

Enjoy!

xoxox

Priyanka (Prii)

Edited by x-Prii-x - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

*Reserved*

*Editted*
Yay me the first one to comemnt..
Wow pri...amazing part🤗..a small one but yet full of suspence😲😆..lol..anyways hmm...wonder who's the guy..cant wait to no watz gonno happen next..!!!😍
amazing update..👍🏼

Do update it soon..and plz try n rite a bigger part..
Love,
Riddhima..😳
Edited by ksdbstjodi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
awesummmmmmmmm yaaar!!!!
luvvving this part....
pls do include sum mayur scenes in the nxt chapt.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ksdbstjodi

*Reserved*

*Editted*
Yay me the first one to comemnt..
Wow pri...amazing part🤗..a small one but yet full of suspence😲😆..lol..anyways hmm...wonder who's the guy..cant wait to no watz gonno happen next..!!!😍
amazing update..👍🏼

Do update it soon..and plz try n rite a bigger part..
Love,
Riddhima..😳



thanx soo much Ridz..
will continue on Monday!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
wow ..prii ...beautiful update ....finally nupur know tht sammy love gunjan .....wow yaar ..song is ..relli catching...n sammy finding chance ...like chance pe dance mare......wow dis .....sammy na ....anyways ....gunjan way of siitting .....sachi gud .....n gunjan ..pehla pyaar in attack ..but wen sammy know this wat may happen yaar ??? ..chalo lemme see...wat may happen ..nyways ...gunjan saying mein itni asani se dost nahin bantio .n she hate fakers ..wow ..yaar loved the part ....wanna see soem romantic moments ......me enjoyed the parts
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: hip-hop

wow ..prii ...beautiful update ....finally nupur know tht sammy love gunjan .....wow yaar ..song is ..relli catching...n sammy finding chance ...like chance pe dance mare......wow dis .....sammy na ....anyways ....gunjan way of siitting .....sachi gud .....n gunjan ..pehla pyaar in attack ..but wen sammy know this wat may happen yaar ??? ..chalo lemme see...wat may happen ..nyways ...gunjan saying mein itni asani se dost nahin bantio .n she hate fakers ..wow ..yaar loved the part ....wanna see soem romantic moments ......me enjoyed the parts



lolz thanks Sara.
u prolly thinkin who is her past lover..?
lolz.. im so exicited to tell guys and see ur faces when u guys find out..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
bataaa na yaar me very excited to know who is her past lover ..koi namoona toh nahin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
Haii Prii!!
Kya FF hai!! 👏
Loved It yaar! Cant wait to read more! 🤗

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