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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
@lrl_01
I hope so too..DMG & MJHT make a cute combo..thanks ya!
@Anu, Iqbals4ever
Thanks a ton guys!
@Amber
Thanx sweetie..and dont worry..today's parts will have lots of Mayur..promise!
@Shafoo, Meera2
Thanks a lot..glad u liked it so far. Will surely update more 2 day!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Cut to: Nupur - Backstage
Poor Nupur is now really nervous. There's less than a half hour to go for her dance and Mayank has still
not come. After spending a few more minutes fidgeting, she decides to cancel the whole thing.

Nupur(to herself): Mujhe nahi lagta ab Mayank ayega. Akele stage par jaake mazaak banne se behtar hai
ke main jaayu hi nahi. (frowns) Ek mauka mila tha sabko impress karne ka, wo bhi gaya paani me. Yeh
Mayank bhi na...khadoos kahi ka! Ek toh karela, upar se neem chadha!

(She goes out of the room, amidst whispers, and finds Dia and Annie still smiling over their latest triumph)

Nupur: Dia! Wo main..
Dia: Nupur, tum? Dance ke liye ready nahi hui?
Nupur: actually Dia..wo Mayank nahi aaya.
Dia: Kya? Aakhir tumse bhag hi gaya woh! (She cant believe her luck..both the Morena sisters in hot water!)
Nupur: arey ab kya batau Dia. Khaer wo sab chodo. Main dance se withdraw karne aayi thi.
Dia: withdraw? Babes, yeh tumhare Morena ka local celebration nahi hai..Excel college ka talent parade
hai. Yaha sab choreographed hai aur tumhari wajah se sabko problem ho jaayegi.
Nupur: lekin Dia..
Dia: sorry doll. Dance toh tumhe karna hi hoga. Akele ho toh kya hua? Tum kisi se kam thode hi ho.

(Annie and Dia share a secret smile, while Nupur nods in exasperation and goes back to the participants'
room.)

Cut to: Audi Stage
The enthusiastic anchor is all upbeat about the events so far. But the next one promises to be more innocent, much more special.

Anchor: Ex-c-e-l College!! Are you guys enjoying yourself? (The crowd responds with a loud cheer)
Yeah..so am I! Toh ab jo apke saamne aa rahi hai wo hai thodi si sharmili, thodi si nazuk par uski awaz me hai wo baat jo aap ko deewana kar degi! Please welcome on the stage - Gunjan Bhushan!

(The Sanjeevani team gives a wild applause and the rest follow. Uday stares on openmouthed and Benji
snaps his mouth shut. All Dia and team can do is look on with a hunted expression. Dia lashes out at Chacko who ducks to save himself.)


And and guys..hold on! Unke saath aa rahe hai woh jinke bina yeh college me hai no masti, no dosti. Sabke dilo ki dhadkan - Sa-Sam- Yeah you got it right gals! Its none other than Samrat! (The cheering gets louder and louder..and so does Dia's anger..it intensifies as much as an active volcano. Gunjan and Samrat are about to step on the stage when Gunjan faces another round of anxiety.)

Gunjan: Samrat! itne saare log kyun aa gaye?
Samrat: do pyar karne walo ko dekhne!
Gunjan: kya?
Samrat: haan. Tumhari awaz aur mera guitar! Tum kya samjhi? Ab chale?

(He holds her hand and they both come on the stage. Gunjan doesnt really feel scared anymore as she sees her friends in the audience waving at her and Samrat is by her side, making her feel secure and comfortable. It is a very different Gunjan from the one who cried her way out of the audition stage. Gunjan very softly begins to sing a beautiful melody from Zindagii Rocks - "Humko choone paas aaiye"..and Samrat's guitar strumming is just in key..Together they sound and look perfect and the audience is enthralled.

Gunjan: humko chhoone paas aaiye, rag rag bharne paas aaiye,
ek pal ko.. paas aakar.. kuch dil ko behlaakar
ho kuch baatein armaan hai, gam sab de de aisa hai..
hum pe takaluff ho kuch silsila nikle, aap agar paas aaiye
doobe bhanvar mein yun, jaane kahaan nikle, aap agar paas aaiye
itni si.. bas.. mehfil ho
aap iss.. dil mein.. shaamil ho
tham jaaye, raat aadhi.. badh jaaye, baat aadhi..

As her song comes to a close, there is a huge applause from the audience and even request for an
encore..As Gunjan smiles as she never has before, Samrat looks on proud and happy. He comes closer to her, puts an arm around her shoulder and says..
"You were brilliant..maine kaha tha na!"

(Dia looks on at all these gestures, is totally dejected and goes out of the auditorium.)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Cut to: Excel College - Rustam and his partner
The two men are still carrying what they entered the college with and go into what looks like a little used college room. They quickly sit down and fiddle with the thing. After a while they seem to be done with the job, stand up and look pleased with themselves.

Rustam: so partner? Maine kaha tha na daaye haath ka khel hai?
Man 2: Daaye ke baaye?
Rustam: arey jiska bhi ho yar. Kaam ho gaya na bas!
Man 2: Haan ab chal bhai se jaake maal le aate hai.
Rustam: haan to chalunga hi na. Yaha ruk kar Diwali thode hi dekhni hai?
(They giggle and rush out faster than they had come in.)

Cut to: Gunjan - among the audience
Everyone is congratulating her and saying how much they loved the performance. For once Samrat is letting her have her moment and is looking at it all from a distance, with Benji beside him.

Ridzi: Gunjan, mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ke tum itna acha gaati ho!
Rahul: Nupur kabhi kisi ko bolne toh deti nahi, gaane kya degi?
Muskaan: oye Nupur ka partner aa gaya kya Gunjan? Jab main milne gayi thi tab tak toh nahi aaya tha.

(Gunjan starts worrying about Nupur and prays that Mayank reaches her before the dance. After a few more performances - which include Uday's desperate attempts to be cool and he goes on till the audience booes him out of the stage - it is the turn of the couple dance.)


Cut to: Audi Stage

Anchor: Acha guys zara socho. Agar duniya me pyar na ho toh duniya me ho hi kya? Arey pyar! Wohi jo yaha ki sab ladkiyan mujhse karti hai! (Weird audience reactions follow) Acha acha..thik hai..thik hai. Toh main keh raha tha ke pyar se hai duniya, aur pyar se hai - Dance baby!
Hamara agla event hai is show ka ek aur highpoint - Couple Dancing! So here we go!

(Four couples come up on the stage, in their decided dance moves, making a lovely sight. The fourth couple however is incomplete. Its Nupur alone who stands out as an odd one out on the stage! She is very conscious of herself and very nervous. )


The music begins - it is the same salsa beat on which she had rehearsed so much with Mayank. As soon as the first note of the music ends, we hear a much louder noise from just behind the stage - It is a bomb blast! The stage gets fuller with smoke and fire even as the noise dies down. There is panic all over and people start rushing out. The stage is all black and nothing can be seen..Nupur and the other couples are lost in the depths of the smoke, injured..or dead?

Cut to: Mayank in an auto
Our adorable nerd wears a mixed expression. His heart wanted him to go for the dance all along but his mind refused permission. Now he has finally applied a lesson Nupur taught him - listen to your heart!

Cut to: College Gate
Mayank has just entered the college and notices the commotion all over. There is smoke coming from the audi and people are rushing about. He suddenly spots CJ and stops her.

Mayank: CJ?? Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?
CJ: Mayank! Itni der se kaha the tum? Pata hai yaha bomb blast hua hai. Just behind the stage..aur Nupur tab stage par thi. God knows kya hua uska.

(Mayank is too shocked to respond and runs with all his life towards the audi.)


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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
oh God Hope Nupur is fine plz continue more,its v.nice
debby thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
@lrl_01, tanya

Thanx a lot! 😊
debby thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Coming up tomorrow:

Fortunately, so many doctors were present in the audience. But will they be in time to save everyone?
Will Nupur be alryt? And how will Mayank react to the whole situation?

Find out all that and more in the next update!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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YOu knw wat debby....u r awesum..!!!...Amazing update...wonderfully written...

one BIG hug for u for sucha superb...fantastic update🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
what a twist! amazing parts cont soon plz!!!!!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
nice part i am wondring will mayank save nupar i think it is rustam and his brother our friend did the bomb lost.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
Please continue soon
I can't wait to read more
I wonder what happens to nupur
Write a REALLY LONG PART
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😲

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