The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~

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Disha

@disha141094

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Posted: 16 years ago

#831

PD shud really read ur FF by hook or by crook....lolz......ur FF iz d best

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Ynaiita

@ynaiita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#832

awesome yaar!!!that was to gud!!!!!!plz plz plzzzzzzzzzz continue asap!!!

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#833

the update is outstanding and thanku for the part i hope u continue with it anyways
i loved the part of samrat nad his palm history wow nice mayur was superb

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#834

@Sanah..Yeah. Sajan patch up is on the cards.. thanks for reading!! 😊

@Maria..Thanks a lot sweety.. happy u liked it..!!

@Senny..Hey thanks so much.. means a lot to me.. :)

@Disha..Song sequence cumin up in d next update.. wid every1 included..
Lol, I hope she does read it sumtime..;) Thanks a lot Dishu.

@Ynaiita..Thanks a bunch.. 😊

@Pragya.. finally u made an entry ;) happy u liked it.. thanks a lot Pragya. 😃

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Ayesha

@ayeshaD

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#835

TGIF!

Gosh! Debbs! Yeh kya tha? Can Mayank & Nupur get any cuter than this?! awwwwwwwwww......you always bring out the best in them!

As usual, your update blew me away...each and every scene was 👏

Have you ever thought of writing a book?!

Anyway, mayyu-mom interaction was soooo adorable! 😳 Hoping to see more of the duo in future. And by God!....Radz' Mr.Right's entry was fab! hehe....Cant waittt to read what'll happen when they'll come face to face! She is one lucky girl! 😉

I was really looking forward to Samrat-the-fortune-teller....and the scene when he's reading Nupur's hand was one of my favourite scenes from the update! She is sucha cutiepie! No wonder Mayank's madly in love with her! Oh ohhhhh totally forgot about the scene before this- When Nupur and Gunjan are getting reading for the wedding......That was also a highpoint....I absolutely LOVED the contrasting emotions of the sisters 😊

and last but not least......the ending☺️

Thanks for putting in Tumhi Dekho Na....🤗 The song matched the situation perfectly! 😍

Thanks a gazillionnnn for this update! 🤗

Love ya!

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RapChick101

@RapChick101

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#836

lovely part debby di.....ur fantasctic..........plz cont. soon nd I so want to know he samrat ab kya kya karega...........nyways didi is out of town nd she'll be back on monday so will tell her to read it......

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#837

another fantastic updatee !!
well doneee !!
very very enjoyable readd..
i loveeee mayank-mummy scencesss !!!!! she's such a sweethearttt
and samrat as the forutne tellerrr... suits him perfectly rightt..
i love ur dialougess .. when dia threatens DoDo to lock him up in the bathroom . i cracked up laughingg
u r an amazing writter.. u r especailly very good at dialougess and not to mention the great imaginationsss...
Your FF is the best of the bunch !! :):) 😊