The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~ - Page 83

Awww Debby that was SUCH a great update yaar!! Totally blown away by your writing!! Seriously it had everything humour, romance,great story...first the starting was just....all I can say is awww i had a huge smile and mushy feeling inside me....and then the mom-mayuu part was too cute love the way you should mom teasing mayuu it was too realistic!! And it was really cool how you showed the Radz window and then her prince charming scene! Very filmy but yet super effective and captivating yaar! And then the palm reading I was laughing so hard at Mayu's sarcastic comments!! "Hotel ki booking abhi se kara lena!!"😆😆 He would totally say that!! I could just picture him with his sarcastic smile saying that 😍 And then the song in the end was a perfect way to end!! I am going to sleep and dream well tonight thanks to you!! Ok bahaut ho gayee meri bakwas ab tak to tu tang aa gayi ho gi so I'll be quiet but before I go I have to say I love your FF yaar continue soon ok? 🤗

wow...great update...nupur is too innocent..

Plzzzzzz update soon! Can't wait for Sajan part!!!!!!!

Too good Debby, Kya update tha
Just loved the Mayur scenes and Samrat is a very interesting palmist use toh sab pata hai 😆. Sajan ka patch up bhi kara do and waiting to make Radz meet her Prince Charming
And update soon
Love ya

@Mayur
Hey.. u r a swthrt.. thanks so much Ruchi..!! 🤗

@Sheri
Thanks so much.. glad u liked it.. 😳

@Pallavi
Hehe.. yeah Radz' love story begins on a filmy note.. since she's a lively character, I wanted it to be tht way.. so glad u liked that part also!
U knw what.. imagining Mayank's adorable expressions is what helps find words..he is that cute. 😳
Thanks so much Pallavi.. it means a lot to me.. Sweet dreams. 🤗

@Kiran, Shrishti.. thanks so much guys!!

@Tina.. Lol ya Sam is a different palmist.. ;) Thanks dear.. love u too!

wow...!!!

wow...........amazinf update debby.................