#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 82

MM you are back
its been ages dear everybody left this forum except few.
dont worry your better half can never be angry upon you and if you will apologise this sweetly she wont stand a chance.😆😆😆

please be frequent here atleast till these FF are going on

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Hehe, finally I'm up to date with the comments so I can get back to working on the chapters now. 😃😃

oh dear its really tough for you to write and review inspite of being on vacation so even if you are late we will not mind.

Regarding last chapter well it was really sad and with Elvish's OS it added more to the sad part by the time i started writing review of it.

Take care and enjoy your vacation.

LOTS OF LOVE

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

MM you are back
its been ages dear everybody left this forum except few.
dont worry your better half can never be angry upon you and if you will apologise this sweetly she wont stand a chance.😆😆😆

please be frequent here atleast till these FF are going on

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Hey dear🤗 I am glad there is someone here 🤗 I was so surprised when Elvish told me😆😆sssh☺️😆

I will 😛 I am to afraid Elvish will come after me with her chappals😆

yup dear i am here specially because of LM and EH.

oh you are so sweet everyone will come with chocolates and flowers nothing else.

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

yup dear i am here specially because of LM and EH.

oh you are so sweet everyone will come with chocolates and flowers nothing else.

Hey girl.. this time bit fast but still chapter 16 & 17.. 😊

So beginning from chapter 16, beginning of intoxication.. wow.. what a chapter..😳 return of our cute overwhelmed puppy (yes, this is what I call him in that episode & so here also😉) first his dance with eyes closed and Ishani getting lost in his sight.. haye.. kya scene hoga na.. but how can she miss such an opportunity so ladki kud padi maidan me..😆 and then fun began.. how cutely babies were dancing & singing.. & his tantrums were also just adorable.. ❤️

but in between all this fun came serious parts also.. how much pain he has in his heart.. 😔 intoxication brought out his true feelings.. the way he wants to come out from his pain but still afraid was heartbreaking.. how much damage that night did..💔 and not only to him but her also.. her guilt is heavier & just adding to pain.. 🥺 but u did that part beautifully.. the way u presented their feelings was so impactful.. as I always say u r a master in writing such things.. 👏

but now coming back to babies and to the kid in him.. Ishani taking him back to room & he turning all mental.. the way Ishani was pulling him & he fighting against her 😆, falling on ground and ready for karate 😆, haye.. that part was just adorbs.. 😳 😳 although managing him must not be easy but sunny's strength always helps & finally under the shower, funny thing was him trying to fear her but results were reversed..😆 and this part.. ""Argh, turn it off! TURN IT OFF!" he yelled in plea as he tried to get away from the flow of the water but somehow seemed to keep bumping into the wall instead." this is my favorite.. playing the entire scene in my mind & this scene just turned cuteness overload..🤗 Ishani should've recorded this,him bumping into wall again & again.. 🤣 🤣 mahino tak ranveer ko blackmail karne ke kaam ata.. 😉

amd then temperature start rising.. ranveer was not at all goint those paths, thodi der naach kood ke so jata sharafat se but she instigated him..😲 but still ranveer was full under his shareef mode, zipper se aage nahi badhta vo but she had some other plans haan.. 😳 again smirking & making fun of him.. ab kab tak control karta so he played along but things went far.. may b too far.. what an electrifying moment.. from hugs to kisses to ahem ahem.. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ what an awesome description.. LM u stole the show with this.. the way u build up entire scene with each line and the words u chose.. 👏it just blew my mind.. it was so hot yet so moderate..👏 I just loved the language.. u amazingly described it.. I mean writing such passionate moment with so sane words is just outstanding.. 👍🏼 how u do that girl.. 😲

moving on to moment of realization.. he woke up at the right time.. dekha as I said in last review ke kaha tak he can dare is still gray aur vahi hua..😆 although achcha hi hua coz somehow it brought kadvi yaad of flower scene of the show jo aaj tak I wonder why they made him forgot.. but here his words.. "I cannot cross that boundary because... well, it's you,".. haye hamara sata savitra ranveer.. but it also made me laugh coz the reason he gave that "it's you" was insufficient.. baby u can't with anyone, in fact kisi aur ke sath to bilkul nahi 🤣 🤣.. but he really looks so more inviting in messier hair..☺️ ranveer ka to fir bhi theek hai, don't know how Ishani controlled.. and now to u even described his flavourful taste (which I forgot in previous review) with lemon, honey, vanilla, patchouli rose and final touch of petrichor ☺️, girl definitely deserves kudos for her self control.. 😳

and now moving to next one, 16 was cute and hot but 17 was completely laugh riot.. the moment he woke up and Ishani came to him with lemonade I started laughing 🤣, how mischievously Ishani played with him & his reaction to her replies 🤣, baby ki full watt laga di..😈 & she changed his clothes😲.. first thing is good that he didn't slept with wet clothes all night coz unlike the show, practically the person will definitely land in hospital with pneumonia in morning😕 but second thing was she changed his clothes..😳 ahem ahem.. shower, all wet and unconscious, ab pata nahi may be lights were off & till how many layers of clothing she went only she (or u) can tell 🤪, no m not asking but again kudos to her control.. 🤓

ranveer was full on like "haye main lut gaya, barbaad ho gaya types"🤣 what can the poor soul do, ek to according to her everything happened upar se he don't remember it, sahi me he was behaving like "mian to kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi raha" 🤣the way he felt ashamed and ran from her was just lovely..😳 the reason why we all love him so so so much.. ❤️his respect for the women he so madly loves..Ishani had to assure him, thank God she revealed truth otherwise he was like getting cardiac arrest.. but his next reply "I never wanted this to be a drunken haze between us. It's something I want to remember every moment... every single bit of... the day it does happen between us, if it ever does," it was a surprise😲, as dv said, definitely left the question of century behind that why he was more dukhi..😉 😉

but chalo after all this moments of peace but before that again a dhamaka entry.. Disha.. all grown up and so sane.. how peaceful it feels to see her happy with Ishani, both sisters there for each other..⭐️ but biggest shock came for her itself, ranveer or RV or owner of RV empire.. and their past was as expected not so pleasant 🤢, your owns betraying u at the moment of truth but girls definitely moulded it in better way for themselves 👏 👏.. but some things never change haan, Disha still has her eyes on him 😆.. but her approach was logical here, I mean if I can't own u doesn't mean I can't see u & more than that what can I do if u r HOT GOODS 😎.. & the gyaan she gave to Ishani was cool although she didn't need any now 😳, she is already set on the path & quite fast.. but seriously ranveer ka bura din tha.. both sisters one by one bajaofied his band achche se.. 🤣 🤣

After all this mess finally a real good news.. Babies got the deal.. party time..🥳 LM these two chapters were just amazing.. a complete energy dose..🤡 u did marvelous work in both..👏 from emotions to passion to fun, everything was present & this completed legacy just sealed the beauty..👍🏼 brilliant work.. 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Hola senorita❤️❤️

So sholly for not replying in ages😕🤓 I left IF cause i thought everyone left ,untill I talked with Elvish on fb and she told me there is still life her😆😛

So the bad student who left the class in the middle is back😛😛 I have read all the chapters in this one week and LM they have been both beautiful and heartbreaking ones❤️ You write beautiful I have said it 100 times, and I will say it again and again your wrting touches the heart

No one can write IshVeer like you and Elvish Thank you for giving this FF😳😳😳

The last update was hfhdsbwefdsjsbhfdhdsf amazing😳 i dont have any words for your wrting😆😛 Usually I dont shut up easily with my bakwaas😆 but you writing always leaves me speechless😆😉

Keep writing like you do😳😳

Ps. Dont kill me for coming so late😆 better late than never😛 I got a little nostalgic while writng the review😭😭 I missed reading your writing and give reviews😭😭 I will stop crying now😆

Loads of love

Anjali❤️

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

MM you are back
its been ages dear everybody left this forum except few.
dont worry your better half can never be angry upon you and if you will apologise this sweetly she wont stand a chance.😆😆😆

please be frequent here atleast till these FF are going on

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

oh dear its really tough for you to write and review inspite of being on vacation so even if you are late we will not mind.

Regarding last chapter well it was really sad and with Elvish's OS it added more to the sad part by the time i started writing review of it.

Take care and enjoy your vacation.

LOTS OF LOVE

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Hey dear🤗 I am glad there is someone here 🤗 I was so surprised when Elvish told me😆😆sssh☺️😆

I will 😛 I am to afraid Elvish will come after me with her chappals😆