#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 81

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Dv and Matsh, I've unreserved my posts on Pages 97 and 104 respectively. 😛😛 I'll get to all of the comments for this chapter tomorrow since I'm travelling right now so do please bear with me. 😳😳

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

Breath taking update sissy...both Ranveer & Ishani r now trying to lead a normal life leaving the sickening past behind... Monica did a perfect job by making Ishani realize that everything is possible if u have a strong will...happy to c that both Ranveer & Ishani had a cute moment... Looking forward to it...hope u r hale & hearty sissy...b safe & sound

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

This update made me really sad 😭 😭 I 've cried reading this from very beginning. I don't know what more to say for now as I don't know what and how I'm feeling.

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi LM
Sorry for not replying often 😛
I have read all the updates dear
nice updates dear😉😉😉
your writing skill that always made be see your work with a Aww expression
now Ishveer are trying to forget the past and trying to be normal
Monica's character is superb
want to see more updates from you
keep updating dear 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hope you are good and enjoying your vacation.
Honestly this chapter left me a little sad i was prepared for it but still for more than one reason and you know so.😭😭

monica and finch i mean does oxford has a psychological study and sanity class for free they both seems to be master in that. that nostalgia about HP and the amount of love that ranveer can show. So this was obvious that she would have never looked at ishani had it not been their troubled past and the extent she went for him and the way she is in awe of her ability was really good.

Their conversation was more like giving voice to all the unsaid emotions and changes in their life which were nevr voiced ot as some remain hidden in pages of diary and some in their pain and tears. Their decision and ritika also deciding toburn in that fire is really amazing first time i have really admired ritika for what she did. moreover it was a glimpse of ritika which they showed in the serial in start just marrying for friendship which they changed into a pillow mummy serial killer. she made herself burn just to help him in healing and made a world for him.

She knows the plight of ritika of living in a relationship and hoping for something which have been shrouded with uncertainty and also knowing the suffering of s loveless marriage.Month long honeymoon 🥱🥱 it helpd them reconnect with each other and help each other survive in this world. He always was scared of only onething that is being abandoned and all he got in the life is only that. I can understand why he kept limited ties with his parents he never wanted to loose the only dear thing left in his life and separated himself for greater good.

monica not only eased out her pain she also advised her to let go of her own pain which she is afraid. i like the fact that despite being meeting with her first time she did something which no one ever can do made her see what the reality is where they stand and how they are supposed to over come it these lawyer and psychologist are so good at putting forth their point. This Finch and family is so loving 😳😳😳
Both are running against time and have to help each other and themselves as well to overcome the grief of lifetime.

Ranveer is closing in but it's just that he is too attached to pain to let it go and its fighting just like that drowning ranveer to come to surface.😭
okay its not only her even he cannot forget that thing but he is remembering it not fantasizing it thats the only difference. he has come to realise that everything he wanted is right in front of him yet he is not able to accept and that moment is poking him to accept their relationship. it was perfectly described.

first time he entered after all these years and the memories made him only smile and the description was amazing just awesome. He enrolled she is such a boss in his life. Ishveer conversation left me a little disturbed😭😭 she doesn't believe in the institution of marriage and i won't blame her after facing this many things you are bound to feel like that. But i am hopeful because its the pain which is the prime emotion and is doing the talking but may be time can change. I can see open ending thing portrayed really well. But her justification was also right they don't need an institution to justify their relationship they are way above that.

And here comes the million dollar question of all the what if. if ritika had never died away and the way she supported his decision and justified it really ishani was outstanding in that part she beat him in that conversation outrightly.👏👏 i love this girl for her love to ranveer its much more than anyone can think and she can never put him in any dilemma.

in this whole chapter ishani was outstanding whether questioning her own decision of second chance which broke her illusion from years that ranveer will be with her or justifying her respect for ritika. she was more guilty and jealous of the fact that she wasn't with ranveer when he needed her the most rather of the fact that ritika was married to him.

finally the kiss was aptly described and it was really painful just like the way the kissed first time in her cabin it was more of their wounded soul rather than their loving self which was assuring each other may be all wasn't lost something can change. the justification of their proximity was really outstanding 👏👏 it said the kind of relationship they share way beyond the norms and methods something always said for true love it sees no boundaries right or wrong it sees only the moment and the person nothing else make sense and nothing matters.

this boy is mad really she can never let him die and away from her. she isn't denying marriage only this is a question of other day right now they just need each other. period. and the beaches and star gazing what else you can ask for and ranveer seriously created a heaven

this chapter and everything you described in it simply blew my mind it had complete work of your those unsaid thoughts wishes finally getting a voice his fears and everything the tussle of his heart everything got a voice. You always said that their relationship was never in a zone but this chapter proved it that their relationship is in grey where nothing good bad logical illogical matters only these two people matters. this will be my lamest reply but dear trust me i so loved this chapter that thinking going in much detail will spoil the beauty of this craft. it was most painfully beautiful chapter dear it was soothing yet hurting. i am so in love with your writing.

thnx for pm
waiting for next

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

take your time dear and enjoy your vacation 😊😊