#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 43

Originally posted by: harisha39

Lm the epi is awesome...
Loved it...
It is rocking as usual...
How r u???
Take care...

Originally posted by: harisha39

I am also waiting to know what is gonna happen next...
So please post the next epi as soon as possible please...

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Honestly this chapter was definitely an arcade of surprises and i just noticed that along with balancing every emotion you balanced mysteries and revelations too open ended caffeinated love, no second chance. Sadistic pleasure i guess in doing this.😈
Haye mera chota sa dil so much pain😭
These two need to change their dictionaries because it cause them more harm than good- like ishani get so badly affected by coward that she makes the worst decision in such a situation i admit she achieved so much because of it but it also made her love away from hers. As to ranveer he has to get a revised version of his dictionary where there are second chance, forgiveness, love equally important as pain, despair,heartbreak and servant are.
he has been in dark, pain so much that even the immense love and hope doesn't appeal to him as this happens many time that people start thinking that pain was a better companion then love its always there and thats why they dont leave it easily. Dont let dark fade away by catching light. Same is with ranveer even though she is ready for the amendments he isn't or he is too afraid.
Disha😲 cambridge😲 and comes to meet ishani twice😲😲😲 *faints* too much for me. On a lighter note after her so called clan rejected her this was expected both for disha and baa.😈 Now she wouldn't even dare to drool upon ranveer because no one can do that except ishani😆😆
Seriously her cousins need to be a little benevolent upon the girl they should be reprimanded of it and if it happened because of chirag then i suggest him instead of becoming jagga jasoos with his apple camera he should do charity works so that his end isn't going to be so harsh.
Amba boutique well don't tell me she would be having collection of those subtle soothing colours and simple jewellery in her boutique the kind she wore in serial🤪
Does he knows about their last encounter i mean their parting one he will kill chirag twice now if he gets to know that.😡
what a master plan boy he came to show everyone including ishani what they lost when they left him and little he knew that what he is actually going to get then😎 this was the best part in whole planning of RV till date.👏 and how innocently he was asking finch about the owner of parekh empire in that tennis match seriously everything till date was happening as per his plans his master plan👏👏
Honestly this was the most decent and subtle and simple takeover till date in history of business i guess🤣🤣 although the price for it was much more than expected😕
He helped her to stand 😭 i love this guy so much more he can never leave a chance to show his love and loyality even if the world blames him otherwise how much more he will do always protecting her and being her shield no wonder ishani's nightmares kill her because she know the length he capable of going to and this gives me hope that things may take time but they aren't lost altogether.😉😉
And this girl till ths date all the trouble she took all the pain she went through just to give him back his thing because when she started neither was she banking upon his love neither the fact that he will ever forgive her.😭😭😭 What a complex character you have written LM you can love and hate them equally for their deed i am super impressed with it👏 and their conversation from the deal made more sense now and the equations and situations also.
She has allergy with desi tharra and now i understood why you were telling about what she ends up doing. in a sense it was necessary because he need to kill someone distinctly to let his own self resurface again and this time i hope its the cold heartless girl giving birth to a new girl with a life and love and warmth.😉
Ishani in inebriated state can never do a good and i love her in that way😆😆😆
He will never forget this night bomb pe bomb and scarring him🤣 and her dream well
She just can't get over of him and their kisses that's what she thinks dirty mind🤪 finally some honest and meaningfull conversations and he is right she needs to stop catching him becharo ko turn on karke chod deti hai🤣
Ahem Ahem where this thing is heading to i mean he is your perfect prefect so he is bound to be best in everything
I so so loved their last part of conversation she speaking what his heart says and he denying everything on the instructions of his mind. His love was always like that too much self destructive to be revived again and her was to much exploding to let go of the him again.match made in heaven😊😊
and ishani's reply for the scalpel was the best till date i so loved it it was just amazing and that last line which only universe can summarize caught my fancy that was most mysteriously hidden sentence from you.👏👏
why dont anyone let him sleep thsi girl jabse entry li hai nind uda di hai
her reply he will understand only after seeing her die in front of his eyes something needed to make his heart feel again and thats really scarry because he has already seen her in blood and he have his own set of nightmares now😭 and even epi-pen isn't going to work because well she has lost the will to leave specially after her all except one task of revenge is achieved and he has snatched away little hope she had with her. now its the same scenario of dreams love dying and he need to save.
It was so interesting dear i so loved had it been an episode in serial its TRP would have been the best given that you left in midway 😡
please do update the next one soon
thnx for pm
waiting for next.

PS i am so hopeful now after reading their drunkards confession she 1-2 minutes interlude they can't take their mind of then what will happen now. M buzzing with positivity now😉😉😉

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

hope is all needed everywhere now for characters and for the readers as well.

Originally posted by: Tintish

Yeah,,,loads of surprises to take...!!!!!😕🤔😳

Originally posted by: srp_roy

Well LM, I am really very sorry I couldn't post my review of the previous chapter, I read that chapter, the day you had posted only but was a little bit busy so couldn't reply. I am a bit busy now also but a question is bubbling within me which I want to ask. In Caffeinated Love, one of the quotations used in the book, "I want you to remember something for as long as you are alive. I may not live in myself any longer after a few days, but I live in you. ". And in one chapter you told that Ben pushed Sarah away from himself for his own good, so in short is the book somewhat like this, Ben pushed Sarah due to some kind of deadly illness, and when he recovered he wished Sarah back in his life. And you said that the crux of the endings of both the books will be same, so are you planning an open ending for Untold Stories also, where the readers are let to interpret whether Ranveer accepts Ishani or not in their own way.
Sorry for this late reply.
Will give a detailed review afterwards.
Pleassse update soon

Originally posted by: srp_roy

LM in this chapter you told that Disha and Ishani grew closer after their parents demise. But in one of the interludes you told that Disha didn't allow Ishani in her hostel after Chiraag's betrayal, then how come they both grow close? And, please update fast

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM... 😊

was waiting for interludes like hell & now u updated, m late.. bt going into d sequence, last 4 epistles.. So first lets talk about that.. 😊

Epistle 97 and 98 are sheer example of ur awesome writing..👏 first ranveer's heart break... d way u described his turmoil really made my heart sink... 😭 d way he was fighting and dealing or I shall say trying to deal with reality and his broken dreams was so so painful... Finally all his foreboding came true.. and he can't even get happy for her, that Chirag is already giving him bad vibes but his confusion is killing him more and more.. 😔

And talkin about next, there's no relief for Ishani also.. just when she is getting some happiness the doom falls on her... loosing Harshad... God... 💔 what can b more torturous for her... here also u described her brilliantly...⭐️ one can cry with her... just like Ranveer nothing is left for her also... Ranveer ko she voluntarily pushed apart and harshad's loss she can't recover, left with only an illusion in d form of Chirag who is just waiting to bite her at the earliest opportunity...

in both these chapters u brought d perfect sadistic out.. I mean they are just so much real... this book was already a torture but these two chapters was altogether different.. d good thing was this chapter somewhat bought back old essence of Ishveer when Ishani just loosened herself in ranveer's embrace and biggest relief was her forgetting chirag.. ⭐️ for a change she finally came out of her lovesick phase and find her solace at right place... that was good.. it again established that she always wanted him only, just got conned by wrong person..😡 such realizations will hopefully be useful in future.. but have to say just wanted to give both a big hug after reading these two... u are brilliant LM... 👍🏼 👍🏼

and now moving onto d last two.. why Ranveer why... 😒 why didn't he just slept quietly for some time to regain his senses before confronting that 🤬 🤬 🤬.. why he said what he said... he himself gave Chirag the final weapon of their destruction which he used in his best interest...🤢 but Ishani was kinda surprise in last chapter.. her trust on ranveer startled me..👏 d way she was behaving in last few chapters as if Chirag is her world, I was expecting her to believe him over ranveer but she did surprised me... d way she blindly trusted ranveer was a pure relief to our tormented hearts...⭐️ ⭐️ but ranveer had already done the deed and Chirag knew he can't lie to her and by this he killed both... 🥺 knowing the end, I can't say I was jumping in joy with last one but it was definitely a little breather.. and I loved d beautiful adjectives she used on Chirag...😉 good girl... 👍🏼

in this entire book these last 4 chapters are those to remember, after d entire book finally it revolved around Ishveer and their trust and support for each other, and u also did brilliant job there... Claps for u... 👏 👏

And now moving to the interludes... 😉

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Now coming to the interludes...

these two were dhamaka... Totally dhamaka... Lots n lots of information... 😲

first Ishani with her thoughts and plans.. she got back all paintings except one, most important one, sadly for Chirag, this painting's story will paint a new kahani of him which he'll never forget... 😈 waiting for the big day but no hurries.. current track is more than welcome😉, after book 5 a big dose of Ishveer is needed.. but d way she has her revenge plan in front of her eyes is too good..👏 shows how much necessary it is for her and claps fot that.. that leech really deserve hell...🤬 and between all dis her way of entering ranveer's room and even her home during sealing was 🤣 🤣 🤣 ... maybe her techniques will be useful in future also.. 😉 😉

and other side is ranveer... bechara.. was awaken all night, was about to have itni khushi vali moment but piyush & Ishani's artistry & he got thullu..😡 I was expecting that at least there will be meeting with little revelations but no.. ranveer ki phuti kismat.. and among all this again his foreboding.. u know it's getting dangerous, it's always gives him d expected result, kabhi achcha nahi hota but bura hamesha hota hai.. antaryami ho gaya hai ranveer to..😆

bt chalo now moving on to his plan.. kya idea lagaya hai... 😃 he went to apologize..😆 he know that Ishani knows how shareef he is so he was confident on his plan, don't know if it made any sense but still..🤔... n Ishani's reply.. "Why are you apologizing for something I initiated, Mr. RV?"👍🏼 she must've added one more line.. "don't worry u'll get used to it soon"🤣.. vahin plan fail ho jata..🤣 but finally she is trapped.. And what is going on in between..😳 glances, attractions, difficult to control urges, have to say babies r going out of control.. 🤡

but now moving to the serious part.. revelation of truth in wrong way.. but something like this was bound to happen, Ishani was so much unwilling and he was so much adamant so results were bound to be harsh.. but her outburst was crazy..😲 bechari ko pata hi nahi kya bol rahi hai, 6 saal ki sari bhadas 1 baar me nikal di n as usual again all his fault..🤢 poor poor poor him.. what on earth he is supposed to do.. had he not accepted her command that night he would've tagged as fraud opportunist servant for life and now he did she is giving him all this nonsense.. and he is much more mahaan, he accepted it that all was his fault and along with her condition is dukhi for this also.. both are big big idiots.. just keep proving it again and again...

and hereafter things turned ugly..👎🏼 she realized what she said but d way she is using to deal with it was crazy.. she crossed her limits of insanity.. had ranveer not came on time things could've been disastrous coz we all know what Ishani is capable of doing in her deranged form..😲 but d way u described the entire scenario was phenomenal.. ⭐️ ⭐️ when he saw her in bathroom with blood all over and still spreading wherever she touches must've been life sucking.. even imagining all that looks scary..😵 kudos to u for making this so alive.. 👏 and after all his futile attempts of taming her, finally d long awaited slap... haye... but it made her all d more pagal n he got instant return.. 😆 again poor him, I mean how many times Ishani dhoyofied him but he never said anything n he does once aur Ishani pagal ho gai..😆 quite unfair.. by d way why he never forgets to free himself from his additional clothes before going to her definitely needs attention.. 🤓

and at the end after all this.. him healing her with his final line.. "There was no choice - it would always be her upon him."God... Ranveeerrr.. 🤗 what is he made of.. as I always say he is born for Ishani... chahe haat kate.,chanta pade or he drowns in forests, Ishani's painful hiss and everything is pushed back, and her current words held a complete shock story so ranveer ko to bahar ana hi tha.. finally bringing her out from her own dark pits and giving the much needed solace.. good for her coz her condition is also not less pitiable.. 😔 with all d heart breaks she had that added burden of guilt which is making her more & more difficult to live, so her lunacy is justified.. 🥺 and finally after all this two dead souls seeing a little light.. end part was beautifully calm..👏 loved it.. it feels so good to see them with other, sharing mutual pain and solace.. 😊

this last interlude was the craziest.. u deserves claps for every line.. d way u brought out their feelings and emotions is commendable ⭐️, and I loved the way u showed fight between their alter selves in these two chapters, how they keep pushing ranveer and Ishani behind but it Keep breaking the barrier with every another emotion was wow.. 👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼

memorable work here girl..👏 now going to read next book.. u keep updating.. 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: mafaaza12

Surprise after surprise👏with in chap😛.

Nice chap. I hope nothing should hppn to ishaani. they both known abt each other without others knowledge in these years. Parekh empire fell into his hand without single try. He stunned through each revelations. This shows how much harshad trusts ranveer👏.

Pls try to avoid alcohol in ur writing. Its humble request 😊