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Posted: 9 years ago
unres🤗
hi dear LM🤗🤗
How ru ? I hope you are fine😳😳

I really enjoyed the way ,this couple is reacting ,wow they are so sweet yaar😳😳

I am just urging that ,I would get to see such a scene with this divine couple adoring it more and more ease,simply loved it 👏👏👏

I was laughing as ,I was reading ,enjoyed their smartness and their lovely intimacy is grasping me 😃😃

Awesome update 😳😳

Pls update soon😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG, beautiful writing. These last two chapters were such a bliss. Enjoyed every word and every sentence, it's amazing. Loved their date, he is such a perfect man, she is so lucky and she is a beauty, so they are both very lucky. can't wait to read more...

Thanks for updating it so fast, you are so good.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi LM

As usual a lovely chapter😛😛😛
I like the way they both are reacting 😉😉😉😉
especially this chapter is really a bliss to read👏👏👏👏

I loved the complete chapter and the way you have narrated it 😊😊😊😊
He is really a great and cute man they are really made for each other😳😳😳

keep updating 😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dearie can a day end at more happiest note than this am I dreaming two updates in a day [:D/] 🥳
Well I come out from my celebration now.
OK so here comes the continuation of the so lovely date and with this my emotional review to please a warning beadr with me I am just a lot senti today.
She cries ishani 🤓 seriously no matter how much she denies but she is a typical girl when comes to emotions( m talking about back then now to its just cold facade with no emotion at all)
Well to be honest I am not an ardent fan of srk neither DDLJ ya you can give me death glares but I don't find it that romantic I mean it is little less for me and first time when I watched that movie I annoyed my bro with so many questions regarding that scene why can't he get down why can't they pull chain and many more. I know that's rude but can't help it.
So ranveer Mr.perfect perfect hotshot (o gosh how much more adjectives we are going to add for him must you make him so much droolworthy) finds in her near perfect fantasy boy do you know that's why she don't share with you that often 😆 he doesn't understand romance 🥱 give him a chance you yourself will be ashamed that how can you make such a statement well he proved her wrong beta wait for it.
O that look of ranveer standing by doorpost haye it reminded me of NC scene from the library there can be no life without you LM how much more just because I told that I feel for ishani more you are making sure I change my opinion. 😆 😆
OK he took her to terrace more surprises and that line the stars is she dumb can't she realise why she felt that prickling sensation in her heart like seriously can't she join two and two and now she is thinking why the time is running so fast well good time runs away fast 🥱
I was wondering in previous epistle where are the other half of balloons and there it comes ranveer 😳 sorry so he arranged everything On terrace just a question who is going to clear the mess what if anyone sees it just kidding.
They snap all the beautiful moments and store them all as memories 😊 😊
Then comes the one of the most delicious thing PIZZA this girl should dance now everything as per her taste and requirements. 👏 👏 👏
So they have a lovely banter over their both are trying so much to be human for few hours atleast but difficult task ahead for them they can never stop bickering. 😆 😆
That whole para of ishani drinking the sight of stars greedily and transportation to trance was awesome I like each and every word of it 👏 👏 👏
Spare her for a day with sunny word but which sunny he meant only he knows.
Well she questions who will tolerate him and answers herself no one other than her but 😭
Tie and saree both have a counter argument ready for themselves and then comes the best moment that magic moment their dance o boy what is ranveer made up of can't hw even call it a date to afraid to tell that 😳 😳 why is so chivalrous for everything 😳 😳 😳 I mean that whole awkward situation where to hold her and that reply we always find time for our loved ones was awesome even I believe in this line we can never be busy for our loved ones. 👏 👏
This song is one my the most favourite I just love this song 👏 👏
LM once again I am telling you the way you describe their hugs so intimate it leaves me all 😳 😳 I was blushing so badly can't even tell you.
O there comes the moment when they don't realise how intimate they are. She more than him and then he kissed first time oye ladke me himmat aa gayi ⭐️ 👏 that whole moment their intimacy everything was so powerfully described it was filled with love this was marvellous I mean you have written this whole moment so perfectly that it left me speechless. 👏 👏 👏
He cannot enjoy what he got ha puchna jaruri hai and another dumb she is everything is allowed for ranveer but ranveer is not allowed 😆 😆
Finally he said those awesome words how much she means to him and how obliged he is to have her always in her life through all the times and that line of ishani that he was there for her in good or bad 😭 seriously welled up my eyes that was most amazing.
Return gift 😉 can't she be more benevolent u mean cheeks pe kiss to kitni bar liya hai she herself acknowledge that 😆 😆
But honestly LM this was the most intimate date with so lovely romantic moments despite of no physical intimacy only few novelist have this power to write liek that and well I can safely count you in that 👏 👏 👏
This whole chapter was marvellous amazing fantastic am falling short of words.
Just a question how ranveer tie up now since he never knew to tie them up??? And ya with all so happy moments I am afraid is storm approaching???
Thank you so much LM am still kind of dazed stupefied with the amazing spell you cast upon me with this chapter.
I read this chapter the moment you uploaded but my tab got switched off and I had to write the whole review thrice before I am finally able to post it but it was worth because I have already read it 4 times now in fact I ll rattofy it I guess.
Thnx for pm
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
I've un-reserved my posts on Pages 91 and 92. 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

unres🤗

hi dear LM🤗🤗
How ru ? I hope you are fine😳😳

I really enjoyed the way ,this couple is reacting ,wow they are so sweet yaar😳😳

I am just urging that ,I would get to see such a scene with this divine couple adoring it more and more ease,simply loved it 👏👏👏

I was laughing as ,I was reading ,enjoyed their smartness and their lovely intimacy is grasping me 😃😃

Awesome update 😳😳

Pls update soon😉😉




Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️ I'm doing alright and I hope that you are doing well too. 😳😳



Coming to the review, they're such a dear together, no? And I'm glad that you found what you were looking for in terms of a scene like this. 😃😃 These two chapters have been a lot of fun for me to write as well. 😛😛



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next chapter soon! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: robal

OMG, beautiful writing. These last two chapters were such a bliss. Enjoyed every word and every sentence, it's amazing. Loved their date, he is such a perfect man, she is so lucky and she is a beauty, so they are both very lucky. can't wait to read more...

Thanks for updating it so fast, you are so good.




Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️


I'm so relieved that you enjoyed the chapters so much. 😳😳 Yes, Ranveer is the perfect man every girl dreams of having in their life. 😃😃 And Ishaani is truly lucky to have him. 😛😛



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi LM

As usual a lovely chapter😛😛😛
I like the way they both are reacting 😉
especially this chapter is really a bliss to read👏

I loved the complete chapter and the way you have narrated it 😊
He is really a great and cute man they are really made for each other😳😳😳

keep updating 😉😉





Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked both of them. ⭐️⭐️ I was just worried about how these two chapters were going to turn out but I'm glad that you liked their reactions. 😳😳 Oh yes, the two of them are truly just made for each other. 😛😛



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
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Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi dearie can a day end at more happiest note than this am I dreaming two updates in a day [:D/] 🥳
Well I come out from my celebration now.
OK so here comes the continuation of the so lovely date and with this my emotional review to please a warning beadr with me I am just a lot senti today.
She cries ishani 🤓 seriously no matter how much she denies but she is a typical girl when comes to emotions( m talking about back then now to its just cold facade with no emotion at all)
Well to be honest I am not an ardent fan of srk neither DDLJ ya you can give me death glares but I don't find it that romantic I mean it is little less for me and first time when I watched that movie I annoyed my bro with so many questions regarding that scene why can't he get down why can't they pull chain and many more. I know that's rude but can't help it.
So ranveer Mr.perfect perfect hotshot (o gosh how much more adjectives we are going to add for him must you make him so much droolworthy) finds in her near perfect fantasy boy do you know that's why she don't share with you that often 😆 he doesn't understand romance 🥱 give him a chance you yourself will be ashamed that how can you make such a statement well he proved her wrong beta wait for it.
O that look of ranveer standing by doorpost haye it reminded me of NC scene from the library there can be no life without you LM how much more just because I told that I feel for ishani more you are making sure I change my opinion. 😆 😆
OK he took her to terrace more surprises and that line the stars is she dumb can't she realise why she felt that prickling sensation in her heart like seriously can't she join two and two and now she is thinking why the time is running so fast well good time runs away fast 🥱
I was wondering in previous epistle where are the other half of balloons and there it comes ranveer 😳 sorry so he arranged everything On terrace just a question who is going to clear the mess what if anyone sees it just kidding.
They snap all the beautiful moments and store them all as memories 😊 😊
Then comes the one of the most delicious thing PIZZA this girl should dance now everything as per her taste and requirements. 👏 👏 👏
So they have a lovely banter over their both are trying so much to be human for few hours atleast but difficult task ahead for them they can never stop bickering. 😆 😆
That whole para of ishani drinking the sight of stars greedily and transportation to trance was awesome I like each and every word of it 👏 👏 👏
Spare her for a day with sunny word but which sunny he meant only he knows.
Well she questions who will tolerate him and answers herself no one other than her but 😭
Tie and saree both have a counter argument ready for themselves and then comes the best moment that magic moment their dance o boy what is ranveer made up of can't hw even call it a date to afraid to tell that 😳 😳 why is so chivalrous for everything 😳 😳 😳 I mean that whole awkward situation where to hold her and that reply we always find time for our loved ones was awesome even I believe in this line we can never be busy for our loved ones. 👏 👏
This song is one my the most favourite I just love this song 👏 👏
LM once again I am telling you the way you describe their hugs so intimate it leaves me all 😳 😳 I was blushing so badly can't even tell you.
O there comes the moment when they don't realise how intimate they are. She more than him and then he kissed first time oye ladke me himmat aa gayi ⭐️ 👏 that whole moment their intimacy everything was so powerfully described it was filled with love this was marvellous I mean you have written this whole moment so perfectly that it left me speechless. 👏 👏 👏
He cannot enjoy what he got ha puchna jaruri hai and another dumb she is everything is allowed for ranveer but ranveer is not allowed 😆 😆
Finally he said those awesome words how much she means to him and how obliged he is to have her always in her life through all the times and that line of ishani that he was there for her in good or bad 😭 seriously welled up my eyes that was most amazing.
Return gift 😉 can't she be more benevolent u mean cheeks pe kiss to kitni bar liya hai she herself acknowledge that 😆 😆
But honestly LM this was the most intimate date with so lovely romantic moments despite of no physical intimacy only few novelist have this power to write liek that and well I can safely count you in that 👏 👏 👏
This whole chapter was marvellous amazing fantastic am falling short of words.
Just a question how ranveer tie up now since he never knew to tie them up??? And ya with all so happy moments I am afraid is storm approaching???
Thank you so much LM am still kind of dazed stupefied with the amazing spell you cast upon me with this chapter.
I read this chapter the moment you uploaded but my tab got switched off and I had to write the whole review thrice before I am finally able to post it but it was worth because I have already read it 4 times now in fact I ll rattofy it I guess.
Thnx for pm
Waiting for next




Thank you so much, love! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you loved the chapter so much. ⭐️⭐️ And I wasn't intending on posting both the updates on the same day, but since you said you were having a rough day, I decided to post it for you. 😳😳 So there isn't any need to say sorry for the long and senti reply because I love them. 😛😛



Coming to the review, hehe, don't worry. 😉😉 I like SRK and Kajol's acting in DDLJ but even I find it a bit overrated. 🤣🤣 That's why I chose Ranveer to voice my thought out on this. 😆😆 And hehe, Ishaani just has to talk crap to defend herself, but Ranveer proved her wrong without even saying anything much. 😎😎



Sometimes, you really leave me awestruck about how much you remember from NC. Yes, when I was writing the doorpost part, it did remind me of the 13th chapter of NC with them playing 'magic of the aura' in the library until Martha intruded upon their little moment. And the line in question about there being no life without you was Chapter 20 I think, about the first aid rules one. 😊😊 Sigh, I miss writing NC at times... 😭😭



Ah, moving out from my nostalgia, hawww, I'm doing nothing like that. 😈😈 Like I told you earlier too, the fact that you feel for Ishaani more than Ranveer means that I've done the impossible. But she's just plain stupid... can't do the math of what her heart is yelling out to her. Hehe, the balloons had to find their way on the terrace. And regarding your point, don't worry, the next epistle will answer your question. 👍🏼👍🏼



Oh yeah, everything is as per Ishaani's requirements and yes, no matter what happens, those two can never stop bickering with each other. 🤓🤓 I'm glad that you liked her whole trance with the stars though. 😃😃 And as to her being Sunny, well the poor girl isn't going to be spared from that. 🥱🥱 As to their saree and tie moment, well... ☺️☺️



The poor boy is too mortified to think of it as an official date, really. 😵😵 But yes, the line he tells Ishaani about finding time for your loved ones is something that I strongly believe as well. 😊😊 I heard the song just recently and I loved the lyrics so much that I knew I had to use it over here. And writing this whole scene has made me blush so stupidly, I embarrassed myself. ☺️☺️



Hehe, that poor fellow cannot even kiss her cheek without feeling guilty about it. And yes, the two of them finally spoke what was in their hearts for once, well she more than him. 😉😉 How I wish she would have been a little more "considerate" about the Valentine's Day gift for him, but alas... cheek kiss se hi kaam chala lo ab. 🥺🥺



This whole chapter was more about the emotional intimacy the both of them share with each other after eleven years of friendship with that ease and comfort that doesn't need them to even be lovers, but just friends, and I'm glad that I could do justice to that over here. Seriously girl, every time you praise me like this, I feel so humbled that you put so much store in my writing and have that faith in me. 🤗🤗



Coming to your last question, I wouldn't say there's a storm coming like the previous books, but you can call it a storm nonetheless because the crux of the story will now come to play - Ranveer leaving for Sydney. 🤔🤔 So yes, there's certainly going to be friction along with an old friend coming to bid her final farewell. ☯️☯️



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next part soon! ❤️❤️



Ps. Four times? 😲😲 Haila... ☺️☺️ And that tab of yours is a real nightmare... 😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii LM,
I'm really sorry for late reply dear..!!
Just read three epistle its was a wonderful mostly last two update u write these two chapter was so perfectly u describe every moment btw two of them...it was amazed..!!
Again a terrace romance btw them and they're dance its was so beautiful..
Now i cnt wait dear update soon
And sorry for such a small reply
Thanks for pm..

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