#3 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 70

Hey LM...😊 first of all apologies for being this late and now coming to update... Epistle 65... 😊

So Ishveer and their never ending miseries... our dukhi babies...😆 Ishani locked in house for telling the truth, Ranveer with his preparations for hospital, Ishani not allowed to go abroad, Baa's routine torture on Ranveer, his thesis paper burden and then other boys behind Ishani with him going all insane over it... but this line , how do I explain to her that she's no longer the thirteen-year old chubby and nerdy girl with the braces and the two plaits who puberty had exploited in the worst way possible with an unexpected spurt of pimples at all the wrong occasions? 😲 OMG... all her flaws in one line... close observations I must say... 😆 😆

Ranveer already has so many burdens upon him... he has to fulfill his duties and maintain the trust others has entrusted upon him... but what with this Baa...🤬 🤬 🤬 lady... but u know his wish to become a big man so that he can ask for her hand in marriage.. it was so logical 👍🏼 but don't know why my first thought was ke kya hai yar, kanhi to Ishani se aage bhad... 😆and his wish to say enough is enough.. well these words are just not meant for him... whether he is 20, 30 or anything... see how he is following her wish even in present...😉 and physical atttraction not being a problem for him... here he's nave... Ishani ke alava kahi aur dhyan lagata to pata chalta na ke kya ho raha hai... 🤣

And one thing here is that him knowing the difference between what she says and what she actually means... but as he said it still get exasperated at times and I think it got too too exasperated on that night where actually she didn't knew what she said... curiosity increased... 🤓

Now coming to 2^nd part... the first line of the chapter gave the hint and I was all ROFL by that itself but on the contrary things did started on a decent note... he was set only for horror movie and ishani peeped in... ok... although the aura u created was little different... chilly night, dark room, 2 people and one blanket... mahol to kuch aur hi ban raha tha...😉 😉 but chalo normal movie started and there was peace until that scary scene started and Ishani jumped on him n he is dead... yaha tak bthi theek hai, ek baar jhel lia but she don't want to leave... God... kya ho raha hai ladke ke sath... Ishu why r u so nave... and his condition was like temperature rising and rising and begging her to leave before he explode... see these extreme experiences laid his roots of self control so how can we expect something else from him... 🤣 🤣but his love is above all yar... he know he can't have her and so he don't even think about it.. 👏 first he want to be an equal and right now know his limits but how innocently Ishani is trying to break him with all her will...😆 have to say that baa's torture is nothing in front of this... 🤣

and now the second bomb on him... sunny leone... although it did came as a saving grace, atleast ishani left him n whole scenario is changed within second but still... bura hua bechare ke sath...🤣 his dark secret revealed to her in such an unexpected way and he accepted it... I was thinking that he'll play wrong CD... thank God this didn't happen varna to Ishani jaan hi le leti...now atleast he have excuse of mistake... here again his knowledge of her came as a saving grace... even she have fascination for such stuff... varna to ek taraf sunny leone n doosri taraf sunny deol... Ranveer ka achche se band bajta...😆 and the best line... concept remain the same'... so true...😉 Ishani ki bolti bandn she leaves, rare moment... 👏

awesome update it was and the most perfect title... 👏... keep updating... 🤗

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM,
I'm really sorry for late reply dear..!!
Just read three epistle its was a wonderful mostly last two update u write these two chapter was so perfectly u describe every moment btw two of them...it was amazed..!!
Again a terrace romance btw them and they're dance its was so beautiful..
Now i cnt wait dear update soon
And sorry for such a small reply
Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM...😊 first of all apologies for being this late and now coming to update... Epistle 65... 😊

So Ishveer and their never ending miseries... our dukhi babies...😆 Ishani locked in house for telling the truth, Ranveer with his preparations for hospital, Ishani not allowed to go abroad, Baa's routine torture on Ranveer, his thesis paper burden and then other boys behind Ishani with him going all insane over it... but this line , how do I explain to her that she's no longer the thirteen-year old chubby and nerdy girl with the braces and the two plaits who puberty had exploited in the worst way possible with an unexpected spurt of pimples at all the wrong occasions? 😲 OMG... all her flaws in one line... close observations I must say... 😆 😆

Ranveer already has so many burdens upon him... he has to fulfill his duties and maintain the trust others has entrusted upon him... but what with this Baa...🤬 🤬 🤬 lady... but u know his wish to become a big man so that he can ask for her hand in marriage.. it was so logical 👍🏼 but don't know why my first thought was ke kya hai yar, kanhi to Ishani se aage bhad... 😆and his wish to say enough is enough.. well these words are just not meant for him... whether he is 20, 30 or anything... see how he is following her wish even in present...😉 and physical atttraction not being a problem for him... here he's nave... Ishani ke alava kahi aur dhyan lagata to pata chalta na ke kya ho raha hai... 🤣

And one thing here is that him knowing the difference between what she says and what she actually means... but as he said it still get exasperated at times and I think it got too too exasperated on that night where actually she didn't knew what she said... curiosity increased... 🤓

Now coming to 2^nd part... the first line of the chapter gave the hint and I was all ROFL by that itself but on the contrary things did started on a decent note... he was set only for horror movie and ishani peeped in... ok... although the aura u created was little different... chilly night, dark room, 2 people and one blanket... mahol to kuch aur hi ban raha tha...😉 😉 but chalo normal movie started and there was peace until that scary scene started and Ishani jumped on him n he is dead... yaha tak bthi theek hai, ek baar jhel lia but she don't want to leave... God... kya ho raha hai ladke ke sath... Ishu why r u so nave... and his condition was like temperature rising and rising and begging her to leave before he explode... see these extreme experiences laid his roots of self control so how can we expect something else from him... 🤣 🤣but his love is above all yar... he know he can't have her and so he don't even think about it.. 👏 first he want to be an equal and right now know his limits but how innocently Ishani is trying to break him with all her will...😆 have to say that baa's torture is nothing in front of this... 🤣

and now the second bomb on him... sunny leone... although it did came as a saving grace, atleast ishani left him n whole scenario is changed within second but still... bura hua bechare ke sath...🤣 his dark secret revealed to her in such an unexpected way and he accepted it... I was thinking that he'll play wrong CD... thank God this didn't happen varna to Ishani jaan hi le leti...now atleast he have excuse of mistake... here again his knowledge of her came as a saving grace... even she have fascination for such stuff... varna to ek taraf sunny leone n doosri taraf sunny deol... Ranveer ka achche se band bajta...😆 and the best line... concept remain the same'... so true...😉 Ishani ki bolti bandn she leaves, rare moment... 👏

awesome update it was and the most perfect title... 👏... keep updating... 🤗

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

I really loved the last two updates so much. <3 Awesome job on that.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Now my fervent prayer (😆): INTERLUDES!! When are you coming?

See, I am not pressurising or bullying (🤣) you. Just hyper. 🤪

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Wee, I am back. The reviews are going to be shorter from now on, till the end. So apologies!!!! </333

Now both the Epistles were real bliss and you never know how much was I blushing. My sister added her customary dialogue, too. :P :P The entire date thing was so cute and well written. I don't have to say the latter part, still :P Now then, I cannot wait for the Interludes. :P :P DDLJ...kisses, dance (I loved the song) and what not! Yeah, pizza too! :P :P Love!!! <333

Love you loads!

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Oh my God! 🤣🤣 One more time someone asks me about them now and I think I'll cry. 🤣🤣 Just kidding, it's all hormones playing up. But um, back to the point - patience, my sweet child. We're halfway through and there's news coming up. 😉😉