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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Finally the much awaited wait is finish interludes are here a big thanks for updating inspite of your hectic schedule. 😊
Now honestly this whole update made me even more curious to know what happened that day and what will happen when they ll meet. Speaking of which they ll meet when ranveer's birthday is around the corner so is he going to have his memorable birthday or not 😉
OK so he starts blami g himself for trusting those affections and believing them to b true thats what she implied with her actions.
Did she said him servant or something in that line and also that he means nothing to her or he caught on the implied meaning of her words. 😕
So it's Ben and Sarah in that cafe starting their journey from the end. So they were all creation of his dreams something he was worried of thts why decided to put down those dreams on paper and from their he started developing interest in them exploring them it's like mixing his own subconscious and consciousness along the line perfectly and then penning it down. 😳
Did he completed caffeinated love before going to Sydney and then poor guy wanted to surprise ishani but she surprised him by breaking his heart book to would have been long forgotten. 😭
Like really ishani the engima was written by him seriously this guy' is crazy cracked 😆
Wait a minute he carried with him the final copy but where is the rough draft I mean in that he had written every way of getting I to ishani's head and making her a puppet. I remember chirag had mentioned that he got the weapon for her destruction hopefully this rough draft is not with chirag because ranveer could not trace it back.
HP is seriously something I mean he gave money to them do that they can have a house of their own you just make him a little more admirable in our eyes 😭
You know the way he said remaining self of him was killed with ritika's death I really wonder what kind of relationship they had I mean that's more complicated than ishveer 😉
From what we read in last epistles she always pushed him away when she wants he should feel the pain which she went through and because of her ignorance and ego she pushed him away also when she needed him the most I guess that night fate and their bruised ego played major part in separating them 😭 😭
OK so he is dead shell now but what will happen when he comes to k ow that the emptiness in his life which no one can fulfill was the same ishani also felt. 😲 how he will react once he knows about chirag and his deeds is most awaited thing apart from their confrontation 😉
That line of nothing but ishani I was marvellous 👏 👏 👏
He is pretending to hate her to the core I rememberd your line in which HP said that hatred is a masked love he need to revise his diary 😉 😆
Finch drama queen poor guy always get such kind of people around him but I guess he sensed ranveer's turmoil that's why did this 😛
Ranveer can go on pretending to be indifferent towards her but he just cannot stop loving her.
Ishani was so brutal rude and insane that night 😡 😡 so this was the reason he never checked upon her 😭 🤢
Don't you think that back during their estrangement phase in teenage ranveer was so busy brooding his wounds that he forgot pain of ishani well does something like this happen over her again 😊
Finch is another braimy guy he just wanted that ranveer should stop being sissy and he gave her the real deal that let it unfold how it goes but don't let it gain control over him he is quite frank and upfront on his opinion
Oh LM the was marvellous specially that last line of ranveer and your mentioning that stars fury over them but I jst want to see wheather they change the way stars look as in a fury or twinkle
Am SO SOS happy after reading it
And ya sorry I was not there yesterday many congratulations for your marriage start your marriage life in total bliss and even to your better half mm. May you always remain together
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Waiting for next.
Extremely sorry for such a long reviews but I jst can't help you know to get all my questions and thought to you




Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️



Honestly, its so hard at times because you guys wait for the Interludes so much that I'm so afraid in case something goes haywire. It's really a task to keep you all engaged with the epistles while making sure not to kill away the interest for the interludes as well. 😛😛 Haye, I'm become all senti. Chhaddo mujhe. 😆😆



Coming back to the review, well, like I said, answers in Interlude 16 of what happened that night. 😉😉 And finally someone raises the point of Ranveer's birthday being around the corner of their meeting. 😳😳 Don't worry, his birthday is going to be... unusually explosive, like always. 😈😈


Well, I've given the hint of what was the one thing that damaged it all in Interlude 5 itself. 😊😊 And yes, Caffeinated Love was born from his dreams that sparked his curiosity about the couple in his dreams. And oh yes, that surprise went down the drain, really. 😭😭 As to his book on Ishaani, well, that's Ranveer for you. 😎😎



Take away another 300 points just for your theory on the rough draft of the book. 👍🏼👍🏼 You'll get your answer in the next interlude. 😃😃 Oh yes, HP here was definitely a gem of a person. 🥺🥺 Sigh, good men die young. ☯️☯️ As to Ranveer and Ritika's relationship, don't worry, you'll understand what I meant by it when the time comes. 😳😳



Oh my... take another 500 points for the analysis! 👏👏 You're on a roll today, girl. As to what will happen to him when he comes to know the truth... let's see whether Chiru baby can mend what he broke in the first place. 🤔🤔 Hehe, there's a reason why I mentioned that line in the epistle. 😉😉 As to Finch, he was being Ranveer's voice-of-reason. 😛😛



Another 100 points for this analysis as well. Like I've been hinting several times, Book 3 is the mould for their actual character sketches since this is the time when we actually learn about how we react to things, events, circumstances, etc. 😊😊 And almost all the chapters of Book 3 have a direct impact or connection with the future chapters in some way or the other.



And 50 points for actually speaking out Finchs's POV in one sentence. 🤣🤣 This is actually what he wanted to tell Ranveer - to stop being a sissy and face her head-on. 🤪🤪 Oh yes, Finch is very to-the-face, and Ranveer needs that, warna baat uske dimaag mein jaata hi nahi. 🥱🥱 As to the line about the stars, I'm glad that you liked that. 😳😳



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next part soon! ❤️❤️ And please don't apologize, I love the long reviews!



Ps. Thank you so much! ☺️☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM,
I'M really sorry for late reply dear bcoz i'm busy in my study & examination...sorry
Just read 6 chapter it's really so deep...and marvellous... and all chapter full of unspoken things...excellent
So finally ranveer ishani ka face up hone wala hai exciting...poor boy he think that ishani still married with chirkut baby but when he know that truth her happiness reach nine of the cloud...
Now wating for ishveer faceup...
And sorry for such a small reply yaar my ideat phone hacking and i'm not properly type any word and also my net connection weak chal rha hai bar bar error kar rha hai so i m really sorry...
And bigg thanks for sending me pm..




Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And please don't worry, concentrate upon your exams and your studies; I hope both of them are going well. 😳😳



Coming to the review, like I said, the F2F will happen after Book 4 for I'm afraid that you'll have to wait a little longer for that. 😕😕 But yes, he's right now under a lot of misconceptions that will cause new explosions of dynamics when they are revealed. 😉😉



Thank you so much once again and don't apologize, it's alright! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloomfield




Hehe, like I told Poplu, legit point. 😉😉 And no using this line with me because I've used it on too many people to get away with things *coughs* talking in class *coughs* 🤣🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Aha, the Interludes!

Ahem, so I was waiting for this for the past one and a half weeks now and I am excited for the next few events which are going to turn out to be the biggest of all the surprises. Sigh, too good, LM. Too good. ☺️☺️

So Poplu earned points for the right guess regarding the couple in the cafeteria. 👏👏

The Interlude starts with him closing his diary and questioning himself on how could he imagine that she would love him. Unhealed Wounds. 🥱🥱 Poor guy, the torment he is suffering from is just too bad. Loneliness is such a bad feeling, you know. And poor guy has no one by his side today to take care and share his pensive thoughts. Feeling very bad for Ranveer. 😭😭

Like I know how much he has suffered and I want him to get back with Ishani, at least...talking terms. But not after his conversation with Finch. He is such a strong guy 😛😛 God, I felt Finch was right. Why should Ranveer showcase himself as a f**ked up lover? No, he shouldn't. Not after what she did to him.😡😡

His book about Ishani literally killed me from inside. 🥺🥺 How much he knows about her and still, he is not able to showcase it to her. 302 pages about her is something 😎😎 Doing thesis work about Ishani is no joke. 😆😆 One has to really work for i. BUt for Ranveer, it was just a cakewalk since he knows everything about her. 😛😛

And finally, our old RV is back. That 'The party's over. We've got loads to do' says it all 😳😳 Now I cannot wait for their confrontation even after knowing the fact that I have to wait😆😆

Loads of love
Aarushi




Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️



The interludes, yes... everybody's been waiting for it with so much gusto that you guys nearly gave me cold feet. 😕😕 But after the response, I'm pretty relieved now. 😳😳 Coming to the review, yes, he's broken, unhealed and he's hurting... bad, now that he's revisited the past. 😭😭 The loneliness was bound to make him begin to crack some time or the other.



Erm, what do you mean 'but not after his conversation with Finch'? 🤔🤔 Like as in he shouldn't get on talking terms also with Ishaani? 😳😳 Hehe, you're seeing one side of the coin again. Let me flip it and then we'll get back on this. 😆😆 And no, Ranveer knows better than to show her a raw and wounded side of him to her after what they've been through. Life has atleast taught him so much. 😛😛



There's... a lot more than meets the eyes with the book, but you'll get your answer in the next interlude. I wouldn't say that writing a thesis was a cakewalk for Ranveer because it takes years and years of experience to work upon before penning it down. 🤓🤓 Stupid fellow... if he only knew that he was creating the weapon that... never mind, no spoilers. 😈😈



I loved writing that line. ☺️☺️ The cold, husky baritone just struck right in my head and I knew that this was it. Thank you so much once again! 😃😃



Loads of love,
LM ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Poplu, is that your new username? Don't tell me you forgot your password again. 🤣


Ps. If it's really you, (which I'm a 99% sure), don't you think you're too young for the tequila shots? 😉😉 #TequilaShots
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue





Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗I'm so, so happy that you liked it!⭐️⭐️



Honestly, its so hard at times because you guys wait for the Interludes so much that I'm so afraid in case something goes haywire. It's really a task to keep you all engaged with the epistles while making sure not to kill away the interest for the interludes as well.😛😛Haye, I'm become all senti. Chhaddo mujhe.😆😆



Coming back to the review, well, like I said, answers in Interlude 16 of what happened that night.😉😉And finally someone raises the point of Ranveer's birthday being around the corner of their meeting.😳😳Don't worry, his birthday is going to be... unusually explosive, like always.😈😈


Well, I've given the hint of what was the one thing that damaged it all in Interlude 5 itself.😊😊And yes, Caffeinated Love was born from his dreams that sparked his curiosity about the couple in his dreams.And oh yes, that surprise went down the drain, really.😭😭As to his book on Ishaani, well, that's Ranveer for you.😎😎



Take away another 300 points just for your theory on the rough draft of the book.👍🏼👍🏼You'll get your answer in the next interlude.😃😃Oh yes, HP here was definitely a gem of a person.🥺🥺Sigh, good men die young.☯️☯️As to Ranveer and Ritika's relationship, don't worry, you'll understand what I meant by it when the time comes.😳😳



Oh my... take another 500 points for the analysis!👏👏You're on a roll today, girl. As to what will happen to him when he comes to know the truth... let's see whether Chiru baby can mend what he broke in the first place.🤔🤔Hehe, there's a reason why I mentioned that line in the epistle.😉😉As to Finch, he was being Ranveer's voice-of-reason.😛😛



Another 100 points for this analysis as well. Like I've been hinting several times, Book 3 is the mould for their actual character sketches since this is the time when we actually learn about how we react to things, events, circumstances, etc.😊😊And almost all the chapters of Book 3 have a direct impact or connection with the future chapters in some way or the other.



And 50 points for actually speaking out Finchs's POV in one sentence.🤣🤣This is actually what he wanted to tell Ranveer - to stop being a sissy and face her head-on.🤪🤪Oh yes, Finch is very to-the-face, and Ranveer needs that, warna baat uske dimaag mein jaata hi nahi.🥱🥱As to the line about the stars, I'm glad that you liked that.😳😳



Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next part soon!❤️❤️And please don't apologize, I love the long reviews!



Ps. Thank you so much!☺️☺️


O my my I get 950 points 😃 😳 😳 I have I guess collected few thousand by now
OK I just cannot imagine what will happen when this Mr perfect perfect pretender gets to knwo that the tool for her entire lifetime destruction was his handiwork now speaking of which he was the reason that ishani got involved in entire fiasco also so guilt is going to rain in Mumbai around October. 😭
But chirag beta chupne ki jagah dhun le ab to 😡
OK so thts the thing ranveer always when hurt by ishani puts his wounds completely forgetting what it did to ishani because they both get hurted by their own action 😲
Now you agin left a hint chirag need to mend what he broke I mean seriously what's this new thing 😕
I am getting all the guilty loving sadism here in this ff and you seriously put a lot of effort in trying out each and every suspense action and hint dropping session on us and emerge victorious 👏 👏 chiru baba utlized thesis to perfect turn her mind in wrong direction but he forgot that not much longer because there is something which comes naturally to ranveer and none of the line can phrase it
O this wait for the interludes is now getting more interesting m loving it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py


O my my I get 950 points 😃 😳 😳 I have I guess collected few thousand by now
OK I just cannot imagine what will happen when this Mr perfect perfect pretender gets to knwo that the tool for her entire lifetime destruction was his handiwork now speaking of which he was the reason that ishani got involved in entire fiasco also so guilt is going to rain in Mumbai around October. 😭
But chirag beta chupne ki jagah dhun le ab to 😡
OK so thts the thing ranveer always when hurt by ishani puts his wounds completely forgetting what it did to ishani because they both get hurted by their own action 😲
Now you agin left a hint chirag need to mend what he broke I mean seriously what's this new thing 😕
I am getting all the guilty loving sadism here in this ff and you seriously put a lot of effort in trying out each and every suspense action and hint dropping session on us and emerge victorious 👏 👏 chiru baba utlized thesis to perfect turn her mind in wrong direction but he forgot that not much longer because there is something which comes naturally to ranveer and none of the line can phrase it
O this wait for the interludes is now getting more interesting m loving it




Hehe, I get very benevolent with points when I'm happy. 😆😆 And oh yes, even I'm curious to see how he's going to react when he comes to know that indirectly, he handed Chirag the biggest weapon in a gift-wrapped box. 😈😈 Oh yes, guilt and a lot more if definitely going to rain in October. 😕😕



Chirag ke chupne ke din aa hi gaye ab toh. 😉😉 Hehe, as to what I mean by that, you'll come to know again when the time comes. 😳😳 I'm well-versed with the Mystery/Suspense genre by now so I know how to swerve my way around that. But I'm glad that you're enjoying this. ⭐️⭐️



Oh yes... Chirag can use all the tricks of the trade and may have been temporarily victorious, but there's one thing he could never replicate - Ranveer's essence. ❤️❤️ I'll be coming to this in the next interlude. 😛😛



I just hope that you like whatever I have in mind. 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Poplu, is that your new username? Don't tell me you forgot your password again. 🤣


Ps. If it's really you, (which I'm a 99% sure), don't you think you're too young for the tequila shots? 😉😉 #TequilaShots


Yes. And no. 😉😆


PS. I am too young. But I didn't get the username Hangover. 😕😕 So, I used up Tequila Shots. Ah, you hastagged it! 😲😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the points. :D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue




Aaru told me that you were rather surprised with my saying yes. Tabhi mujhe kuch gadbad laga. 🤣🤣 And don't worry about the reviews, even I have to review on yours yet. 😭😭



I was like" Does LM have a twin sister who wrote yes"🤣 I swear I almost got a heartbreak and did not think u said yes and that Aaru lives in another world🤣 Thanks for understanding❤️ Dearie , I owe you 100 reviews , you are lucky you dont need to give me that many reviews🤣 Dont worry at all about the review😳😳

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