#3 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 46

Yes!

Hi LM,
It's beautifully written


Sorry for getting this much time for review...
Actually I had appointment with neurologist so was busy with that on Monday,
And after that got svere headache so was unable to visit forum...

Coming to the interlude...
Though I'm failing to remember it completely,,
But one thing,
How You get these super ideas and from where..?, I mean you leave me mouth gaped every time...
So ranveer's new found dreams turned out to be his novel...
I mean an amazing idea dear..., what so ever he saw in dream he simply penned it down..,
But still, as the novel was a shadow of Ishani and Ranveer's life...,
So the two in Ranveer's dream could b wrapped up in a bow to be Ishani and Ranveer,

Aaah Ishani Paraikh: an Enigma unvield..., Ranveer's fancy...
And he did it...
Just hope Ishani may have gotten the rough copy, which Ranveer left behind and do not find on returning...,
But she might have discussed it to him, if she'd ever found that...

Finch and Ranveer's friendship..., is a kind of relief dear...
He knows it that Ranveer still loves Ishani...
I just hope he'll be doing his job in patching them up..
But it will happen itself, when they will meet and Ranveer will come across the reality...

Hey the title got cleared at the end...(if I got it rightly),
The conflict of personalities...
Ranveer on the one hand is the weakest person in the world, whose love is making him hollow...
While on the other hand he is the strongest person.. Who can suppress his pain under the shelter of work...

Now he turned to be the second one...
Let's see what will happen now..

Keep rocking

Finally the much awaited wait is finish interludes are here a big thanks for updating inspite of your hectic schedule. 😊
Now honestly this whole update made me even more curious to know what happened that day and what will happen when they ll meet. Speaking of which they ll meet when ranveer's birthday is around the corner so is he going to have his memorable birthday or not 😉
OK so he starts blami g himself for trusting those affections and believing them to b true thats what she implied with her actions.
Did she said him servant or something in that line and also that he means nothing to her or he caught on the implied meaning of her words. 😕
So it's Ben and Sarah in that cafe starting their journey from the end. So they were all creation of his dreams something he was worried of thts why decided to put down those dreams on paper and from their he started developing interest in them exploring them it's like mixing his own subconscious and consciousness along the line perfectly and then penning it down. 😳
Did he completed caffeinated love before going to Sydney and then poor guy wanted to surprise ishani but she surprised him by breaking his heart book to would have been long forgotten. 😭
Like really ishani the engima was written by him seriously this guy' is crazy cracked 😆
Wait a minute he carried with him the final copy but where is the rough draft I mean in that he had written every way of getting I to ishani's head and making her a puppet. I remember chirag had mentioned that he got the weapon for her destruction hopefully this rough draft is not with chirag because ranveer could not trace it back.
HP is seriously something I mean he gave money to them do that they can have a house of their own you just make him a little more admirable in our eyes 😭
You know the way he said remaining self of him was killed with ritika's death I really wonder what kind of relationship they had I mean that's more complicated than ishveer 😉
From what we read in last epistles she always pushed him away when she wants he should feel the pain which she went through and because of her ignorance and ego she pushed him away also when she needed him the most I guess that night fate and their bruised ego played major part in separating them 😭 😭
OK so he is dead shell now but what will happen when he comes to k ow that the emptiness in his life which no one can fulfill was the same ishani also felt. 😲 how he will react once he knows about chirag and his deeds is most awaited thing apart from their confrontation 😉
That line of nothing but ishani I was marvellous 👏 👏 👏
He is pretending to hate her to the core I rememberd your line in which HP said that hatred is a masked love he need to revise his diary 😉 😆
Finch drama queen poor guy always get such kind of people around him but I guess he sensed ranveer's turmoil that's why did this 😛
Ranveer can go on pretending to be indifferent towards her but he just cannot stop loving her.
Ishani was so brutal rude and insane that night 😡 😡 so this was the reason he never checked upon her 😭 🤢
Don't you think that back during their estrangement phase in teenage ranveer was so busy brooding his wounds that he forgot pain of ishani well does something like this happen over her again 😊
Finch is another braimy guy he just wanted that ranveer should stop being sissy and he gave her the real deal that let it unfold how it goes but don't let it gain control over him he is quite frank and upfront on his opinion
Oh LM the was marvellous specially that last line of ranveer and your mentioning that stars fury over them but I jst want to see wheather they change the way stars look as in a fury or twinkle
Am SO SOS happy after reading it
And ya sorry I was not there yesterday many congratulations for your marriage start your marriage life in total bliss and even to your better half mm. May you always remain together
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Waiting for next.
Extremely sorry for such a long reviews but I jst can't help you know to get all my questions and thought to you

Hii LM,
I'M really sorry for late reply dear bcoz i'm busy in my study & examination...sorry
Just read 6 chapter it's really so deep...and marvellous... and all chapter full of unspoken things...excellent
So finally ranveer ishani ka face up hone wala hai exciting...poor boy he think that ishani still married with chirkut baby but when he know that truth her happiness reach nine of the cloud...
Now wating for ishveer faceup...
And sorry for such a small reply yaar my ideat phone hacking and i'm not properly type any word and also my net connection weak chal rha hai bar bar error kar rha hai so i m really sorry...
And bigg thanks for sending me pm..

Aha, the Interludes!

Ahem, so I was waiting for this for the past one and a half weeks now and I am excited for the next few events which are going to turn out to be the biggest of all the surprises. Sigh, too good, LM. Too good. ☺️☺️

So Poplu earned points for the right guess regarding the couple in the cafeteria. 👏👏

The Interlude starts with him closing his diary and questioning himself on how could he imagine that she would love him. Unhealed Wounds. 🥱🥱 Poor guy, the torment he is suffering from is just too bad. Loneliness is such a bad feeling, you know. And poor guy has no one by his side today to take care and share his pensive thoughts. Feeling very bad for Ranveer. 😭😭

Like I know how much he has suffered and I want him to get back with Ishani, at least...talking terms. But not after his conversation with Finch. He is such a strong guy 😛😛 God, I felt Finch was right. Why should Ranveer showcase himself as a f**ked up lover? No, he shouldn't. Not after what she did to him.😡😡

His book about Ishani literally killed me from inside. 🥺🥺 How much he knows about her and still, he is not able to showcase it to her. 302 pages about her is something 😎😎 Doing thesis work about Ishani is no joke. 😆😆 One has to really work for i. BUt for Ranveer, it was just a cakewalk since he knows everything about her. 😛😛

And finally, our old RV is back. That 'The party's over. We've got loads to do' says it all 😳😳 Now I cannot wait for their confrontation even after knowing the fact that I have to wait😆😆

Loads of love
Aarushi

Nids darling, I've un-reserved my reply to your review on Page 61. And I'll reply to the rest of you in some time... I'm just back home from college and I'm swamped with loads to do still so please bear with me. 😳😳

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

This wasn't spamming! I mean, we were discussing something. Not useless spamming. 😃😛 Oh, but we break rules, too. 🤪🤪 So, no problem.

Haha, it's okay after all. 😊😊

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Res😳

Wifey , I was 100% sure u did not say yes about that thread🤣

Seriouse note : LM , I will try to review next weekend😕😕 I have three projects this week and a test

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Yes!

Do I get brownie points, too? I guessed it correctly. It is Ben and Sarah. *goes all puppy dog eyes*