IshVeer FF: La Douleur Exquise | Chapter 5 (Page 13) - Page 4

Salaam girls.

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Yes, the roller coaster ride is always the most fun to explore in any story. 😃😃 And yes, I can already see the level of dedication that the two of you have put in this FF, so we definitely had to like it. 😳😳 As to my fetish, well, US has still got its quotas pending in abundance. 😈😈

And yes, the teaser requires a special applause. 👏👏 Take your time with the next chapter, I know that it's going to be worth every penny of my expectations. 😉😉 And yes, we sadistic praanis are always blood-thirsty behind IshVeer's pain *coughs* more of Ranveer's *coughs* 🤪🤪

I'll be waiting for it. 😛😛

Hi niki...EH...

So firstly I m not the person who preferes dark story...
It's not my cup of tea as I m too sensitive for it...

Bt if I say truly I can't resist myself from reading this after teaser ...

Ok... so it was little confusing for me..
Who is the grandfather ? (Ranveer?
He can be as story is dark)

I know I have to wait for that...
😛

Description about surroundings was really amazed me ...

Little ishani...
Ohk... so she wants to hear story from grandfather that also of prince,princess & dragon...

& story begins wid mansion...
( I guess story will be a flashback...
Total my guess... don't throw anything on me for that 😉 )

Do pm me next time whenever you update...

Thnk u for pm...

Excellent prologue dear.. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

OH. MY. GOD.

How do you do this, Niki? 😲😲I'm sitting right now with my mouth agape, and I look stupid. And not just stupid because my mouth is agape, but because you've made me cry as well. 😭😭Elvish knows how difficult and rarely I ever, ever do cry for a story, so if you've managed to make me cry, take this as your first accomplishment with this story. 😊😊

This chapter touches my heart to a lot of levels, but there's one special reason why it does. 😳😳It's because of the bond that you've written between the said grandfather and granddaughter. 😃😃I was very, very close to my grandfather and I remember all those times when they'd be over for vacations or vice-versa and I'd pester him for stories and he's make up Lauren and Hardy ones for me, just on the spot because I loved listening to them so much. 😛😛This might as well be me poking and prodding and throwing tantrums at him to hear my favourite stories. 😆😆Ah... you've opened an arena of memories with this for me. Sigh, never mind... those days have long gone by.

Moving ahead, now you've introduced a very, very clever angle of how to break into the narration. 👏👏I'm thinking that you are going to keep this in the past only, with time to time inputs from little Ishaani in the present. Oh my goodness, I can already feel the excitement pumping through my veins at the thought of what's in store for us.

Before I forget, can I just take two minutes to drool upon how beautifully you've written the grandfather-granddaughter bond and how artistically real they appear to be? 👍🏼👍🏼Right from delving into the problems of an old person to the love he feels for the little child to their rapport, everything was penned so beautifully. 🤗🤗This prelude is going to hold a special place in my heart for a long, long time, Niki. ❤️❤️

I don't have a particular adjective to attribute to this update, so I'd just say that my faith and trust in the two of us for creating a relic out from the ashes of a ruined show has only gotten strenghtened after this update.⭐️⭐️Do update the next one soon! 😉😉

Loads of love,

LM

Ps. I think I'm going to have to sit with a tissue-box if I need to get my emotions back in check. 🤔🤔God, the main chapters haven't even begun and you have already reduced me into tears. 😳😳

Hey, LM! Thank you so much for the lovely compliments. Ah, grandparents leave such an impact on us, don't they? Their stories, their lessons and their affection stays with us forever and no one else can take their place in our lives. Sigh. Seriously, those days are just gone.


You've guessed it right. Grandpa is going to narrate what happened to the Prince and the Princess and what happened in their life. To tell you the truth, your expectations only make me shiver for a moment, though I'm sure you're going to love whatever is in store for you guys to read and for us to write.


Yikes! I can only say "thank you" for the rest of the post. So thank you. :D

PS. Darkness of the story is definitiely doing its work on you, isn't it? ;) I'm glad for that. xD

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

O this was so curiosity tickling update
I mean who is this was grandfather and ishani name itself gives person a adorable feel now
OK I liked the description of how he was looking around at things and his bond with his granddaughter was so beautiful
So here am just not able to conclude what I am going to read next but am sure the journey with this ff is going to b quite interesting
So he is starting with this story from saving mansion
I have not read more but I am sure you are really a talented writer am just waiting how much more amazment I am going to witness and with elvish with you it's nothing less than a blissful ff because she is a gem truly
Thnx for pm
Waiting for things to proceed next you have increased my curiosity

Hi, dv! Thank you so much. I'm glad you've liked everything about the Prologue. It was an interesting to my own self when I first read it. Ah, you guys expect so much and I don't blame you. I have full confidence in Niki. :) :) and this update isn't enough to conclude everything right now, is it? There's so much more in store which will lead to the final results. Sighs. Thank you once again, darling!

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Hi Elvish! And I'll just be reviewing the Prologue now. :D :D

None of us quit it. As I have always said, this is the most sheet fandom ever. :P And I thought that she did ecause I never saw her posts her again in 2015. And true, we didn't expect all the foolish ending. :\

True. We were mahaan pranis. Never quit completely. And Niki had stopped making posts but she was still in touch with the show. And pl let's not talk about the ending. I never saw it.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

So much mystery? So much mystery, girl(s). You two are making all of us thadap. :P And let me review it quick. (I have lots of people whose FF I'm yet to give a review; God, I'm doomed!).

So, here is the Grandpa reminiscing memories. I sense that most of them are painful. Now I understand the title of your FF completely. The heartaching longing for someone you can't have. It kind of both breaks my heart and makes me thadap for more to read. <\3 <3

Ahem... Where did I deviate from? Ah, the memories and Grandpa. Now, the little Ishaani comes and asks her beloved Grandpa for a story. The Prince, Princess and the dragon one. She is named after a person who's impacted Ranveer's... *coughs* opps, the Grandpa's life *coughs*. I am really thinking that it's Ranveer and something also tells me that this FF won't have a HEA. <\3

Then, after pestering and more reminiscing and thinking, the Grandpa tells the little girl that it all started with the mansion. Mansion. Parekh mansion (?). Also, he tells thinks that only if then Princess had recognised the Prince, the story would be different today. All this is indicating that the Grandpa is Ranveer. The granddaughter is obviously named after Ishaani. Ishaani and Ranveer really seem to not have a HEA.

And now! Now begins this gorgeous FF in true sense. Gorgeous. We will have inputs from the little Ishaani in between the narrative as LM said, maybe. And I'm REALLY looking forward to the whole stuff, right now. The whole. So, a wonderful update again! And update, soon. :)

Love,

Effulgent.

Let mystery thrive for a while and then unfold it gradually. That's fun. ;)

Thank you so much. Writing little Ishani is going to be fun as well whenever she manages to disturb her grandpa. Poor old man is going to have bit hard time in narrating everything with little Ishani questioning everything around. xD Thank you once again, Effulgent, for the lovely review. Will be updating the next chapter soon. :)

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

*Gets up from my dream*

Gosh! This prologue was worth reading! <3 <3 Nikki, (Hey! I've noticed you in the forum when I was back stalking.) and EH...You just NAILED it, girls! I am addicted to this already!

So, the teaser was well...mysterious! A portion from the guy's POV and the other from the girl's. I assume it to be our gems, right now! Those 500 (approx.?) words were enough for my senses to come back! :D :D

And then comes the Prologue! (Ahem, I guess I can expect quicker updates form EH, too ;) xD)

This guy should be Ranveer! (God, make him Ranveer! Please!) and there is his li'l grand-daughter <3 <3 and her name is Ishani! (Golden days!)

She wants a story and this guy is going to...well, I have my guesses :P :P Can you girls please update it soon so that I can sleep at peace? I am wondering what was the past! This a dark one! *Happy Tears*

Loads of Love,
AV

Hi, Arushi! Thank you so much. I'm glad you got to review this one on time. I'm sure you're feeling so relieved, are you?

Um, may I know why would you want the grandpa to be Ranveer? I'm just curious.

Haha. Every sadistic soul is feeling happy with the possibility of the dark past. XD Me too. :D

Will be updating the chapter soon! Thank you once again. :)

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Hi Niki
I need to read it again...
Its difficult to get


Is it Ranveer... Hope it gets clear soon...but it seems so,,
There is a stream of questions flowing in my mind.. But its not worthy to ask all instantly...
Little Ishani is so cute..,
And the relation b/t grandfather and and grand-daughter is above all...
Thanks Hobbit for pm

Hey, Ishveerian! Thank you for checking in. :) Ah, these questions are going to be there for a while and few will only unfold with the chapters.