#2 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 77

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Interlude 5 : The Mysterious Realms of a Universe

Hey beautiful 🤗🤗

I missed you shooo much 🤗 I was singing "Tadap tadap "💔 from Hum dil de chuke sanam ( as you know I am filmy 😛)

But seriously LM , I can't even apologies for being late with reviews but honestly been busy with many things 😭 Hope u can forgive this idiot 🤔

Before I start shedding tears in your thread I will go with my review 😃😃

I am writing the review her as I am to lazy for going on the first thread shorry😭

SO HERE IT GOES:

To be honest with you I don't mind that Rv was married to Ritika in your story because she has nothing in common with the show ki Ritika apart from the name. I do understand their reason for marriage and loved what kind of relationship and bond they shared.

Ranveer loved /loves Ritika and respect her. He were not in love with her and can never fall in love in someone, because many years ago he already gave his heart to a girl named Ishani. I liked the way you described what they shared, it was really beautiful written and my heart went out for Ritka what a beautiful soul she was.

Can't wait to read more from u senorita 🤗 Don't forget when you write your own book let me know😉😉, Hopefully it will come out here as well so I can buy it ❤️

Love & best wishes always

Your #1fan

I'm glad that you have such an open perspective about Ranveer and Ritika and you've got my point well enough. And you've described the situation beautifully. 😃😃 And hehe, when the day comes, I'll definitely let you know. 😉😉

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Interlude 6 : For Old Times Sake

OKEY IT IS OFFICAL MY GIRL JUST ROCK

I am singing and clapping my hands👏👏 , I so loved Ishani 's answer to Chirag Can you do me a favour and make Ishu torture Chirag 😈😈

I loved her attitude in this update and she showed Chirag who is the best 😎 👏👏Chirag is pathetic as always🤢 , and Ishani married him hmm okey🤔, So I am pretty sure he was a jerk and cheated on her and betrayed her but did he ever raise his hand on her'? Hope not

So as you must have figured I cant wait to IshVeer meet😆 , but I have feeling I will have to wait for that a while ☢️

As always brilliant job with the update darl 🤗🤗 . Also I am shorry for late reviews 😕😕But if I give to long review I know I will be done with all so that 's why I am trying to write them short and hopefully manage to review all . Hope u understand ❤️

Keep writing like you do 😳😳Cause it keeps winning hearts ❤️

Loads of love & best wishes

Cherie ❤️❤️

Well, Chirag will certainly have to pay for what he's done and payback's going to be as cold and sweet as it can get. 😈😈 And coming to Chirag, well he's a loser. 🤢🤢 As to more insight into the whole Chirag-Ishaani thing, it's all out in Interlude 8.

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Yeah, I do like to keep everyone's best interests in mind. 😳😳 And yeah, his books are all different, which is what I enjoy the most. Loads of variation. ⭐️⭐️

And the simplest way I can describe HP is that your life will not remain the same after those seven books. I was amongst those people how found HP over-hyped and people stupid for their crazy obsession before I read the books. But when I read them, neither was I the same person, nor was my life. Such is the power of the story - it entrances you in the magic it promises throughout. ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Lovemyself...

Hey LM!!!
Chapter was amazing as usual...👏
Finch... he is really funny...😛
RV... I think can't change...
So they r in India...
So... amba was the mysterious women who was calling...
Mother-son convo. Was nice...😊
Kailash still didn't changed...
& ranveer's habit to sit wid father & drink still not changed...
Ishani... so amba & kailash did not have any problem wid her... that's really good...
40 hours without sleep... its really crazy... atleast for me...I can't live without sleep...😕
So...now in this chapter also mystery remain the same...🤢
Now I really can't wait to know that what happened that night???
Which changed ranveer so much...😕
& after 3 days they will meet at least for meeting...They'll meet after so many years...so I m super excited to see reactions of both ...😳
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi LM,

You are a great writer dear you have done a good job with UNTOLD STORIES 👏👏👏
I liked all the chapter and the way you describe each and everything is good I love it 😛😛😛😛
Keep continuing and update soon dear 😉😉

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Interlude-8:

I HATE CHIRAG!

Waiting from 13 years! He should have been killed by now. Such a pervert he is! And Ishani's emotions were beautifully written though! Mujhe iss CHirag ke baare mein padke itna gussa aa rha ki I will now break anything right now (Uh, Don't worry, that's my habit. I break things if I am angry :D :D)

Anyway, coming back to the Interlude, Ishani was dumb earlier and she had realized way too late :( :( Should I be angry at her or feel pity for her? Sigh, the girl has undergone too much already and now, she is used with the same loneliness. Can't wait for their confrontation though I know when it is happening. Itna wait kaise karun? :'( "(

It would have been better if Ranveer was there in the picture. </3

This was awesome, though! I loved it!

AV

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

Tadap tadap ke is dil? You were singing that? 😆😆 And shedding tears? 😲😲 Sugar Pie, why are you so cute? 😕😕

Yo bhi cuteness hai I got it from mum

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

Review for the Interlude 8.

Girl! You are one heck of a writer. Like, seriously. Ishaani had such an unceremonious marriage? I can't believe it. First of all. I can't believe this - That we both wrote the same thing. I write short stories as you know. And I wrote one on March 2nd. (I write one short story every month to keep my writing skills nourished).

And this particular story had a women being abused by her husband. He was taking his revenge upon her for her slap which she gave him in the college. And finally after a lot of drama. They got married, she thinking that she loves him. He had fooled her and now was torturing her.

But in the end, she gets rid of him and four years later, she has made a name for herself in the field of psychology. (I love it). And she's seen burning the one last wedding card which she's lept with herslef from five years. And the story ends with saying that some marriages are definitely not made in heaven.

And see her! Ishaani got a same hell-made marriage. But she deserved it though after all her stupidness for loving a boy like Chirag. And he was the moron who hazed Ranveer? Or rather, the one who made him get hazed! Studpi fella. Didn't know that what goes around comes around. Like, all the way around. He got his company sold off! That too, to his ex-wife.

And you told that we needed to have a puking bag. Well, no worries, I wrote something similar (though, not so vulgar) in my story. So, no need a puking bag for me. And chee! He is so cheap. And I must say, Chirag is very villainish and serious in you FF. The show one was really so play-boyish and very, very foolish. (And likeable too).

I know how Ishaani must have felt. Poor girl. Was thrown out of the house with no where to go. No one in the whole world was ready to accept her. Except Piyush. Well, I love Piyish Sanghvi now. Such a humanitarian! And he was her legal counsellor. Good job. And don't worry. That didn't remind me of *Lawyer-Number-0*. Only Shwetha remembered it!

And lastly, I like this Ishaani so, so much! What an attitude towards life. "Time to win back everything that was hers." Aha! And I fear one thing. Revenge is a vicious cycle, right? One person does something wrong to the other, the other takes revenge. And the first one takes revenge. And it goes on. But Ishaani needed revenge and her cause is justified. I'm now worried that Chirag baba might keep up to his words on the phone call. I think that he'll revenge again.

On the whole, a very good job on the update, sweetie. And I'm sorry for the late review. :( Now I'm off to review the next update.

Love,

Effulgent.

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM!!
Again another mindblowing update dear
Finch know about ranveer past!he is right they don't know they madly in love with eachother and conncted with eachother soul but they not accepted it!
finally ranveer reached mumbai and they are lucky u know why? They got a cool coach (nhi toh indian train me safar karna kisi horrer nightmare se kam nhi) 😭
Ranveer meet her parents! i'm happy amba has not any issue with ishani she forget her past mistake that's she was broken her son heart! Now waiting for ranveer reaction when he know that what will do with ishani since past year ago.
Waiting for nxt & thanx for pm