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matsh

@matsh

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Superb and a beautiful update LM !! 👏👏👏
Your style of writing is such a pleasure to read .. it is almost as if we can see it happening in front of our eyes with every emotion, every thought and every movement crystal clear ! Great job !

I love the way you have written out Ishani's dream. I was waiting for when you will be disclosing it.. It is so tragic and heart wrenching that I almost had the her KC scene scream in front of my eyes..

And the way she has written out all the points and questions.. many questions with no answers right now..
But it does gives hints to readers ! 😉 You have really mastered the art of keeping readers interested 😃

And finally Ranveer is up on his two feet, though the grief of not having topped the class must have made him really grumpy..

Love the last para about her struggle of to tell or not to tell.. ! It is sooo Classic Ishani but yours is much reasonable one than what we had in the show.. so I do sympathize with her since she had real reasons to keep it to herself..

And as a fair warning, I don't want you to do what I think you plan to do or at least keep getting tempted to do.. I know which direction your creative juices flow thanks to FB chats.. Here's looking at you kiddo. 😈😈 Be good. 😉

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behirlover

@behirlover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Hey hi dear m well
But after reading your updates m insane 😕
Sorry but these many hints which are all like a mesh
It's said that dreams are a part of subconscious mind nd ranveer's dream are clearly pointing towards that
First thing first I just love this ishani of yours cold water and slap therapy well only this girl can do it
😉
Now ranveer managed to get a pretty decent score 😳
Now my query session starts
Love sometimes I feel she is a part of ranveer because she always appears when he is high on emotional front whether it's sad or happy and he alwys visits him in that place depending upon his emotion which u have mentioned very well 👏 👏
Being naked is related to vulnerability he appears naked in front of love when he is vulnerable
Nd thts why she is not appearing now coz he is emotionally balanced for time beingbeing 🤓
Now coming to ishani her dreams are pointing more towards a dj vu appearance
I mean we c mist and desolated when v are ll alone and no one I there to care also running or chasing might be related to her being insecure about things or anxiety and fear and worried about something
Now she hitting ground and alley and ranveer and she both are getting injured that means that either she has lost self control or something is hurting her badly
🤓
And from this chapter I got to know why she is self harming herself
Let's see how you unfold the situation
Well ranveer should not stress himself and ishani conflict of mind was very well written
Now m waiting to see what happens next but ur warning that they are in teenage is scaring me something reckless is hppning out there
I need to mention this that there platinum band and its encryption was very beautiful but wait thae point to something else o God m going to go mad
I just wondering how much effort u would have taken yourself to give us such a wonderful chapter development ar I seriously pay you a standing ovation 👏 👏 👏
Now m eagerly waiting for next before the dreaded interludes and book3 start
Sorry for blabbermouth
Thnx fr pm
Plz bear this nonsense stuff one last time next time I ll won't
Bye

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue
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My exams are from the 14th to the 22nd of March. 😳😳

All the best! 😊😊

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue
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As to how it may unfold, I'm curious to know your POV. 😎😎 And oh yes, being a teenager is only realizing how stupid you can get at times. It has its pros as well, but eh. 🥱🥱

I'll update the next part in a while. ❤️❤️

I will post my review for this chapter. I again, can't resist. 😆😆

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Here comes my review. First let me do what I wanted to from the time I read your latest update! 😆😆

*throws confetti all around*

I'm in seventh heaven right now! Almost all my assumptions on Ranveer's and Ishaani's dreams are true! 😃😃 Ishaani's dreams are ghastly. But tell me, she was running with stilletos on?! 😛😛

Clothes in dreams make a statement about how we want people to perceive us, right? 😕😕 Changing what you wear may reflect a lifestyle change. So, Ranveer has changed a lot on the exterior from the time of the inception of his peculiar dreams. 😊😊 Back then, he was vulnerable too. Nudity in dreams tells about vulnerability. But now it's a lot different. And the thing is, he still remains the boy he was somewhere deep inside. <3 😳😳

Chase dreams help us to understand that we may not be addressing something in our lives that requires our attention. 😛😛 Ishaani is not realising that there is something brewing already! There is something, right? 😕😕 I can feel there is. I don't know. I might be wrong too. 😕😕

And Ranveer dies so brutally in her dream! But I feel that this is not prophetic. Maybe or maybe not. Death of a... say... a loved one represents change (?) and is not a psychic prediction of any kind. 😕😕 If you are intending to do this in the future, LM! 😉😉 You will surely get threats from your fans. 😆😆

Even in Ishaani's dream, Ranveer is so handsome. 😉😉 More attractive looking, haan? *grins evilly* And he has to save her! 😭😭 The saviour Ranveer. If at all there would be Love Awards (silly me), Ranveer and Ishaani would get The Best Sacrificial King and Queen awards respectively. 😆😆 But they would also be the Romeo and Juliet of the modern times... 😳😳 *day-dreams*

Can't they cut down on their sacrifices for each other? Ishaani calls him a first-class dunce, but isn't she almost the same? 😕😕Actually, Ishaani's POV in the diary has become a lot mature from the time of 20s epistle. That's a good transition. ⭐️⭐️

And LM, I can't really know if we are long-lost sisters? 😆😆 Why are we so same? 😉😉 Picking out unusual things, understanding dreams' symbolism (you way more than me, but we do understand), ranting on Naina (the YJHD one)... many more. 😕😳 *hugs* So, MM is your fiancee and I'm your estranged sister.😉😉 But dekho, MM ne mujhe uski side rehne ke liye pata liya! 😆😆

Jokes apart, this was an awesome update. ⭐️⭐️ Now I have to rush. I've taken quite a long break from studies. :P Bye. 😊😊

Love,

Effulgent <3

Edited by Pluviophile - 9 years ago

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Paige

@lifesobeautiful

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Hiii LM
Amazing update dear this is my first reply to your ff but i read u all ff i just loved it. U are incrediable u story line and imaginary mindblowing read your ff i feel i read a shakespear romantic novel . I must say u are a great writer.keep writing dear and thanks for pm and any word wrong plz forgive me

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: powergirlpriya
Hello LM
thx for pm dear.
awesome and amazing update dear👏 i really love this update dear❤️.ranveer fainally apne pairo pe khada ho gaya😳 and hope so ishani ranveer ke har question ka answer de shake .

thx for beautiful update dear 🤗

p.s:- so I first reply to your update LM🥳

Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
Ah! This is clearer than FFN! I told you everything! Nothing more to add but one question (read it ONE MORE QUESTION) Is there something special about the ring? ;)

AV

Ps. Should I copy my review from FFN?

Yeah, I told you. 😳😳 As to the rings, well, I'm not saying anything right now. Although I've thrown back hints about the rings much, much before. 😆😆

Ps. If you want to post it here, you're more than welcome. 😃😃

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: matsh
Superb and a beautiful update LM !! 👏👏👏
Your style of writing is such a pleasure to read .. it is almost as if we can see it happening in front of our eyes with every emotion, every thought and every movement crystal clear ! Great job !

I love the way you have written out Ishani's dream. I was waiting for when you will be disclosing it.. It is so tragic and heart wrenching that I almost had the her KC scene scream in front of my eyes..

And the way she has written out all the points and questions.. many questions with no answers right now..
But it does gives hints to readers ! 😉 You have really mastered the art of keeping readers interested 😃

And finally Ranveer is up on his two feet, though the grief of not having topped the class must have made him really grumpy..

Love the last para about her struggle of to tell or not to tell.. ! It is sooo Classic Ishani but yours is much reasonable one than what we had in the show.. so I do sympathize with her since she had real reasons to keep it to herself..

And as a fair warning, I don't want you to do what I think you plan to do or at least keep getting tempted to do.. I know which direction your creative juices flow thanks to FB chats.. Here's looking at you kiddo. 😈😈 Be good. 😉

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️

Yeah, two-three people did tell me that Ishaani's dream did remind them of the KC event in some way. 😛😛 That's again the kind of aura I did want to give it, so I'm glad that it did work out. 😈😈 As to her meticulous point-making, yeah, I kinda threw all my marbles on the floor with this one. 😉😉 Gives the readers a lot of time to figure things out. 😳😳

Yeah, not topping the class did make him grumpy. 🤣🤣 And we know how a grumpy Ranveer's stubbornness is. AS to the last para, yes, my Ishaani is alike the show one, but my one does have better reasoning skills. As to the warning, I'll keep that in mind. ☺️☺️

Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
Hey hi dear m well
But after reading your updates m insane 😕
Sorry but these many hints which are all like a mesh
It's said that dreams are a part of subconscious mind nd ranveer's dream are clearly pointing towards that
First thing first I just love this ishani of yours cold water and slap therapy well only this girl can do it
😉
Now ranveer managed to get a pretty decent score 😳
Now my query session starts
Love sometimes I feel she is a part of ranveer because she always appears when he is high on emotional front whether it's sad or happy and he alwys visits him in that place depending upon his emotion which u have mentioned very well 👏 👏
Being naked is related to vulnerability he appears naked in front of love when he is vulnerable
Nd thts why she is not appearing now coz he is emotionally balanced for time beingbeing 🤓
Now coming to ishani her dreams are pointing more towards a dj vu appearance
I mean we c mist and desolated when v are ll alone and no one I there to care also running or chasing might be related to her being insecure about things or anxiety and fear and worried about something
Now she hitting ground and alley and ranveer and she both are getting injured that means that either she has lost self control or something is hurting her badly
🤓
And from this chapter I got to know why she is self harming herself
Let's see how you unfold the situation
Well ranveer should not stress himself and ishani conflict of mind was very well written
Now m waiting to see what happens next but ur warning that they are in teenage is scaring me something reckless is hppning out there
I need to mention this that there platinum band and its encryption was very beautiful but wait thae point to something else o God m going to go mad
I just wondering how much effort u would have taken yourself to give us such a wonderful chapter development ar I seriously pay you a standing ovation 👏 👏 👏
Now m eagerly waiting for next before the dreaded interludes and book3 start
Sorry for blabbermouth
Thnx fr pm
Plz bear this nonsense stuff one last time next time I ll won't
Bye

Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️

The dream hints I'll spilled all across the chapter because I knew this was the right time to bring up the elements of the dream, so that the readers can understand what's the whole deal with the dreams and can get a little extra insight into it. 😃😃

Yes, dreams are a product of the subconscious. 😛😛 And Ishaani's therapies are always the best. 🤣🤣 And yeah, he did score a rather decent score, considering the whole chaos around his exams and his accident. 😳😳

Coming to the dreams, Love is obviously a part of Ranveer, but what she symbolises is where the trick lies. 😉😉 As to his being naked, its not exactly a symbol of vulnerability only, but its got another prime symbolism as well. 🤔🤔 But yes, the part about being emotionally balanced is absolutely correct. But there is again another point to it. 😆😆 You must really want to hit me now.

Coming to Ishaani's dreams, no, they are of a different nature entirely, so there isn't any symbolism in her dream. The mist, however, is there because its an event that leads on to the next, and since she can't or doesn't know what it is, the mist is there. 😕😕 Er wait, what did you read in the chapter that gave you the reason of her self-harm? 😲😲

And yeah, Ranveer needs to stop stressing out so much. As to Ishaani's conflict of mind, I'm glad that you liked it so much. 😎😎 As to the next book, don't worry at all. It will be an enjoyable book to read hopefully. And coming to the ring bands, I've given the hint of the rings once before as well. 😛😛

Thank you so much once again and I'm really, really happy that you have been liking whatever I have been putting up so far. ❤️❤️ And please don't apologize, I really, really enjoy and love your reviews.

Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago

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