#2 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 22

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

Here comes my review. First let me do what I wanted to from the time I read your latest update! 😆😆

*throws confetti all around*

I'm in seventh heaven right now! Almost all my assumptions on Ranveer's and Ishaani's dreams are true! 😃😃 Ishaani's dreams are ghastly. But tell me, she was running with stilletos on?! 😛😛

Clothes in dreams make a statement about how we want people to perceive us, right? 😕😕 Changing what you wear may reflect a lifestyle change. So, Ranveer has changed a lot on the exterior from the time of the inception of his peculiar dreams. 😊😊 Back then, he was vulnerable too. Nudity in dreams tells about vulnerability. But now it's a lot different. And the thing is, he still remains the boy he was somewhere deep inside. <3 😳😳

Chase dreams help us to understand that we may not be addressing something in our lives that requires our attention. 😛😛 Ishaani is not realising that there is something brewing already! There is something, right? 😕😕 I can feel there is. I don't know. I might be wrong too. 😕😕

And Ranveer dies so brutally in her dream! But I feel that this is not prophetic. Maybe or maybe not. Death of a... say... a loved one represents change (?) and is not a psychic prediction of any kind. 😕😕 If you are intending to do this in the future, LM! 😉😉 You will surely get threats from your fans. 😆😆

Even in Ishaani's dream, Ranveer is so handsome. 😉😉 More attractive looking, haan? *grins evilly* And he has to save her! 😭😭 The saviour Ranveer. If at all there would be Love Awards (silly me), Ranveer and Ishaani would get The Best Sacrificial King and Queen awards respectively. 😆😆 But they would also be the Romeo and Juliet of the modern times... 😳😳 *day-dreams*

Can't they cut down on their sacrifices for each other? Ishaani calls him a first-class dunce, but isn't she almost the same? 😕😕Actually, Ishaani's POV in the diary has become a lot mature from the time of 20s epistle. That's a good transition. ⭐️⭐️

And LM, I can't really know if we are long-lost sisters? 😆😆 Why are we so same? 😉😉 Picking out unusual things, understanding dreams' symbolism (you way more than me, but we do understand), ranting on Naina (the YJHD one)... many more. 😕😳 *hugs* So, MM is your fiancee and I'm your estranged sister.😉😉 But dekho, MM ne mujhe uski side rehne ke liye pata liya! 😆😆

Jokes apart, this was an awesome update. ⭐️⭐️ Now I have to rush. I've taken quite a long break from studies. :P Bye. 😊😊

Love,

Effulgent <3

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And throw all the confetti you want, you've solved nearly the whole dream. 🥳🥳

Yeah, she was running with them on, she has no choice. 😆😆 And no, the symbolism with clothes here is different. 😛😛 Vulnerability is a small part of it, but if you realize, he was much more vulnerable now than when he was 10. 😕😕 So keep digging on that. As to Ishaani's dream, its entirely different. No symbolisms here. 😉😉

As to the threats, I'm forever getting them. 🤣🤣 But well, I've given it all in this chapter. All the figuring out is on the readers now. 😈😈 And yeah, Ishaani has to spare time for more details like how he looked. 🤪🤪 And yeah, Best Saviour and Best self-Sacrificer will certainly go to them hands down. Idiots.

As to the change in Ishaani's POVs, that's again intentional. 😃😃 She's got two sides to her - one that enjoys beinga child and pain-in-the-ass to Ranveer, and the other that is much more mature for her age and can shoulder responsibilities far more than she is adept for. And for her, it's a harmonious existence between those two sides that keep stepping up from time-to-time. 😳😳

Hehe, we are really similar to one other. 😎😎 And koi nahi, saali aadhi gharwaali hi sahi. 👍🏼👍🏼 Now go back to studying! 😳😳

Thank you so much once again and I'll update the next part soon! ❤️❤️

Love,

LM

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

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I'll dig deeper with it then! 👍🏼👍🏼 And the Ishaani explanation is apt. ⭐️⭐️ Update the next one soon. I want the interludes. 😭😭 Interludes! 😭😭 But do study as well. Exams are fast approaching. 😛😛

Love,

Effulgent

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Originally posted by: Pluviophile

Res (for the intriguing one-liners till now [prediction ones]) :)

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This was...SCARY!

I mean...how on earth are you getting such ideas? I mean, HOW? A big bow for you, LM! A very BIG bow! *Claps* This was the best so far, I swear! From the beginning till the end, I was sitting at the edge of the chair and reading the lines! You made it really tough for me to search for words now! Proud to have such a mentor! :') :')

Well, after reading about their conversation, I am scared now (for real) as even I have got some weird dreams which turned out to be true sometimes. We gotta talk about this sometime :/ :/ I am scared. :/ :/

And now, Ishani topped her class! Wohoo! That's great and Ranveer's performance was also appreciative, keeping in mind about his accident. And the description about Love and Ishani's dreams: It was as if you were mocking at us xD xD Anyway, the description was awesome, in my opinion. I wanted to ask you about the thanking part while giving the review of this Epistle, but then! You gave it a question :P :P And Book-3 is going to be even more- expecting the unexpected! You have got me hooked into this FF of yours, LM! I swear!

And here comes the news of the day: Ranveer just got up on his own! *Celebrates* :D :D I am so happy for him and hoping that things get better soon. :) :)

Loads and loads of love,
AV

Ps. Ishani's dreams and Ranveer's Love: Is it going to be the climax? *Stop thinking too much, dumbo!*

Double Ps. *Copy-Pasting from FFN.* <3

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️

The dream hints I'll spilled all across the chapter because I knew this was the right time to bring up the elements of the dream, so that the readers can understand what's the whole deal with the dreams and can get a little extra insight into it. 😃😃

Yes, dreams are a product of the subconscious. 😛😛And Ishaani's therapies are always the best. 🤣🤣 And yeah, he did score a rather decent score, considering the whole chaos around his exams and his accident. 😳😳

Coming to the dreams, Love is obviously a part of Ranveer, but what she symbolises is where the trick lies. 😉😉As to his being naked, its not exactly a symbol of vulnerability only, but its got another prime symbolism as well. 🤔🤔 But yes, the part about being emotionally balanced is absolutelycorrect. But there is again another point to it. 😆😆You must really want to hit me now.

Coming to Ishaani's dreams, no, they are of a different natureentirely, so there isn't any symbolism in her dream. The mist, however, is there because its an event that leads on to the next, and since she can't or doesn't know what it is, the mist is there. 😕😕Er wait, what did you read in the chapter thatgave you the reason of her self-harm? 😲😲

And yeah, Ranveer needs to stop stressing out so much. As to Ishaani's conflict of mind, I'm glad that you liked it so much. 😎😎As to the next book, don't worry at all. It will be an enjoyable book to read hopefully. And coming to the ring bands, I've given the hint of the rings once before as well. 😛😛

Thank you so much once again and I'm really, really happy that you have been liking whatever I have been putting up so far. ❤️❤️ And please don't apologize, I really, really enjoy and love your reviews.

OK so I am halfway may be through everything
No dear I just want to throw orchids to you because how interesting chapter you have written
I got your reference but this time an keeping my lips sealed and fingers crossed let's see is it worth or not
U r so charming with your writing dear that I cannot express in words
Thnx for giving such interesting story
Need to ask you something I while reading again your chapter that's my habbit you know I came across a line in strt about thingswith no fairy ending and an inglorious farewell well m fearing something hope its not true

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

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"You're a smart boy, Ranveer. I'm sure you'll figure it out.

He still didn't figure it out. It was Ishaani who did that by jotting it down on paper. But we still wholly don't know who Love is. 😕

We don't talk longer than what we did the first time, but everytime, she asks me a question about a topic or emotion that is most personal to me. Each time, it makes me feel aware about how vulnerable and naked I am in front of her and it's from where my dream turns into frightening nightmare.

This is not a one-liner. But still. Vulnerable. I am getting a clue now. Love can read his mind as well as some one else can. 😉

It was as though my deepest fear had come true - I was abandoned for good.

Ishaani's deepest fear. Being abandoned. How must've the poor girl felt when her parents died one after the other? How must she have felt when Chirag left her? When her so-called family abandoned her. 😭

Try as I much, I can't lie, you see. I'm a terrible liar.

Is she now? 😡

Trust me, Ranveer's expression was a million-dollar one. Never had I seen him look so pale, aghast and in shock all at once with his mouth agape (okay, it happened just once before but I don't want to remember that).

When was this expression on his face before this? I can't seem to remember. :/

I know him more than anybody does, and I swear, if anyone... anyone hurts my friend that way, I'll kill that person with my bare hands.

Ishaani darling, kill yourself please. 😆 LM, you told someone in response to their review that this will pop up in the interludes. I'm waiting. 😊 But will it be this set of interludes or the far away ones?

I'll keep updating it whenever I see something fishy in the words. :)

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Originally posted by: Bloomfield

This was...SCARY!

I mean...how on earth are you getting such ideas? I mean, HOW? A big bow for you, LM! A very BIG bow! *Claps* This was the best so far, I swear! From the beginning till the end, I was sitting at the edge of the chair and reading the lines! You made it really tough for me to search for words now! Proud to have such a mentor! :') :')

Well, after reading about their conversation, I am scared now (for real) as even I have got some weird dreams which turned out to be true sometimes. We gotta talk about this sometime :/ :/ I am scared. :/ :/

And now, Ishani topped her class! Wohoo! That's great and Ranveer's performance was also appreciative, keeping in mind about his accident. And the description about Love and Ishani's dreams: It was as if you were mocking at us xD xD Anyway, the description was awesome, in my opinion. I wanted to ask you about the thanking part while giving the review of this Epistle, but then! You gave it a question :P :P And Book-3 is going to be even more- expecting the unexpected! You have got me hooked into this FF of yours, LM! I swear!

And here comes the news of the day: Ranveer just got up on his own! *Celebrates* :D :D I am so happy for him and hoping that things get better soon. :) :)

Loads and loads of love,
AV

Ps. Ishani's dreams and Ranveer's Love: Is it going to be the climax? *Stop thinking too much, dumbo!*

Double Ps. *Copy-Pasting from FFN.* <3

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