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Posted: 9 years ago
OK so back with an update
It had the mix of each and everything from dreams to demons from love to fear from hope to darkness
Need to say this again am turning out to be a bhakt of your writing I mean how com u can write so well dear bewitching my mind
Strtng from it ishani's soothing words consoling ranveer and he openly sobbing in her arms is a dream to watch I must say
Then his painting was brilliant in one of the paintings he depicted his pain and in another his medicine who can release him from all the pain
Well ishani just can't stop admiring him Mr perfect but at least he let his facade of cold shell down. Falguni and harshad in this are a dream character I must say I mean I was disheartened when in show harshad bested ranveer for loving his daughter inspite of coach of love
Now comes the most awaited part that's y she came running to his room just to check upon that her nightmare are not true
O God her nightmare was really frightening I mean ranveer's dreams give him light to dark and hers put her more into darkness but why both of them are connected in their timing u mean they come and go at same time
I hope thus mystery gets solved soon otherwise I ll nag my head
O sorry for boring you with blabbermouth
But chapter was very nice
Thnx fr pm
Waiting for next update
Soory replying from phone that's why no emo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful ...you are so talented dear ⭐️ 👏 thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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No, unfortunately he won't be able to prepare for it. Don't worry, I'll be coming to that after the next update. 😊😊 As to my enmity with Maths, its not that I'm not good at it, I'm just careless and reckless when solving my paper, and that always costs me a lot. 😡😡 It's like no matter how much I try to give it my best shot, it always has to backfire. 😒😒 *Sighs*
Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 And yeah, I read those posts - I'll be replying to them over here itself. 😛😛 And yes again, it has been long since I last saw you here. 😆😆
Ps. I'm a Commerce student, currently pursuing my Bachelors in Accounting and Finance. 😉😉


Poor boy! :( And dear, use the 'keeping calm' tips Ranveer gave to Ishaani. :D


Yes, a long, long time and many things have changed. :(


Oh yeah, right. I forgot. I'd seen it on FF.net. Besides, a science student can't explain terms like 'Sensex'. Probably, they can't even comprehend it. ;) And how is commerce? Is it a good go?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Hi there, love! 🤗🤗 I'm doing alright, although I'm exhausted with the work load. 🥱🥱 How about you? I hope that you're doing well and that your exams have gone well too. ⭐️⭐️
Yeah, I read your post on Aarushi's thread as well. Well, I can't say that I blame you because we are all reeling from the heartbreak at this moment. 🥺🥺 But the thought that you will be reading my works is a soothing one. 😳😳
Coming to my journey with the show, I'd watched the show right from day one because of my grandma, although I wasn't regular till August 2014. That's when the show caught my fancy, and since then there's been no stopping with this show becoming an addiction and fantasy to me. And yes, this show has been a saviour to all of us in some way or the other. It's been nothing short to the darkest days when the news of the show shutting down hit us, and in spite of the unsatisfactory track, we all can admit that this show was something we could never part with. We have all invested too much into it emotionally that breaking away from it hurts.
I would consider this nothing short of an honour that you think so highly of what I write and how I've influenced your life. ☺️☺️ When I started upon my journey as an author, my sole motto was that if my work that touched even a single person's life and changed it for the good (just like one author changed mine), my purpose in life was served. 😛😛 But what I never banked upon was the fact that there was so much that it taught me too, about life and about myself. 😳😳
And this show gave me that medium and gave me that edge in my writing that I previously lacked. I consider myself to be a decent writer who has just warmed up to the real challenge of the art of writing, but the love and support that you people have always given me is something that's made the constant transition even more fun and amazing for me.



So thank you so much for always being there for me and yes, I would definitely love to be in touch with you. ❤️❤️ All the best to you too, sweetheart and keep shining like the way you do. ⭐️⭐️ Know that whenever you need anyone to speak to, I'll be there for you. 😃😃
Loads and loads of love,
LM 🤗❤️🤗


Don't take so much stress, LM. But I know. Univ load. I'm doing well and my pre-finals went well too. Finals in is March. :)



Grandma? How? And you've explained the 'kismat' connection between MATSH and us best! :))



Yes, it did touch me deep. And if you don't mind.. can I ask who is the author that touched your life?



And have you read 'The Great Gatsby'? It's the best English classic apart from WH! Well, WH was depressing. This is loads better. Jay Gatsby (the ML) reminds me of Ranveer everytime I read about him. His undying and unreciprocated love is so like Ranveer's just after the first leap. Rare and fortunate are those girls who get such guys in their lives. Those guys look at the girl in such a way which every girl loves to be looked at like that. But Daisy (the FL) is so mean and Catherine-like. Coquettish, cold and cruel. How I wish I had a Gatsby or Ranveer. But alas! There is none. :(



And dear, did you read 'The Interpretation of Dreams' to come up with such symbolic dreams for IshVeer? You love Psychology, right? And Sigmund Freud was one of the best psychoanalysts in history.



Before you throw something at me for ranting.. 😆😆 Stay in touch and take care.



Love,
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer


LM take that😛 ( I am showing my tounge to you😆😆)


Why are you thanking for hugs 😆😆 Shoo sweet you are 😳😳 🤗😲🤗


MM and LM, you gals are the cutest! 😳😳


As I received them from one of the sweetest person on earth. 😛😛 And mind you.. you are the sweetest. 🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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I fell for a girl crazier than me. 🤣🤣 Now shush before people run away with this PDA. There's a lot of it going around these days waise bhi.


Your PDA is a lot more cuter and romantic than someone else's. 😉😉 Why will anyone run away?
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Posted: 9 years ago
LM, I couldn't resist and reviewed this chapter! :P It's in the form a PM as my post limit was reached. Do check it out. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
WONDERFUL POST DEAR LM👏.THANK FOR PM DEAR.


Edited by ISHVEERLUVPRIYA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue



🤣And coming to that point, Harshad wouldn't have agreed to it at any cost, but then again, Ranveer is Ranveer. 😕😕He wouldn't let the house kids give up their comfort and night's sleep for keeping guard., neither would he let his Mota Babuji keep guard alone.😳😳And usually in mountainside areas, its always advised for someone to keep guard outside the tent, especially in weathers like that to watch out for any storms or wild beasts. 😳😳


As to Ishaani, well I did mention why she needed to get up at 4. 🤪🤪
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Moving on, yes the strange looks is not exactly what you are thinking - more the jealous ones to girls who are eyeing her best friend. 😎😎




And yes, that line did have a particular significance in its own dark way, something he'll follow in the future as well.




And now coming to your complains. Ticks upon the first five points - taken. Coming to the sixth point, there is a reason I've taken this route for, because this incident will make a lot of difference in how Ranveer shapes up from here. 😵😵There are a lot of links that need to fit if I am to set the relationships alike those in the show (since that's what I'm trying to channel here). 😕😕

I've already had my share of complains for being cruel upon him, so I'm really sorry about it. 💔💔As to deriving pleasure from his pain, these three updates have been the hardest upon me to write from his POV, and I'm emotionally exhausted. 🥺🥺But pain is the most integral key in this story, not just for Ranveer, but Ishaani as well, so I cannot help it. 😔😔




<div>Ps. Suggestion taken. 😛😛



thanx for explaining the reasons.. now got both of them..⭐️

as to the strange looks, I was asking about the way other girls looks at him strangely..😎 Ishaani ka to obviously we all know... use disha se Ranveer ki friendship hajam nahi ho rahi thi to aur kisi ko to bhool hi jao..🤣🤣

and what.. his quote about protecting Harshad has more to it... that too in a dark way...means it's still not over for Ranveer...😭

and sixth point here u are referring as paralyses na... that to I can see that it will change his relations with all... so will wait for your justification on it but I was also curious to know why allergy from peanuts...?? ya aise hi... just to create a little more devil side of Ishaani...😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

OK so back with an update
It had the mix of each and everything from dreams to demons from love to fear from hope to darkness
Need to say this again am turning out to be a bhakt of your writing I mean how com u can write so well dear bewitching my mind
Strtng from it ishani's soothing words consoling ranveer and he openly sobbing in her arms is a dream to watch I must say
Then his painting was brilliant in one of the paintings he depicted his pain and in another his medicine who can release him from all the pain
Well ishani just can't stop admiring him Mr perfect but at least he let his facade of cold shell down. Falguni and harshad in this are a dream character I must say I mean I was disheartened when in show harshad bested ranveer for loving his daughter inspite of coach of love
Now comes the most awaited part that's y she came running to his room just to check upon that her nightmare are not true
O God her nightmare was really frightening I mean ranveer's dreams give him light to dark and hers put her more into darkness but why both of them are connected in their timing u mean they come and go at same time
I hope thus mystery gets solved soon otherwise I ll nag my head
O sorry for boring you with blabbermouth
But chapter was very nice
Thnx fr pm
Waiting for next update
Soory replying from phone that's why no emo

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Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
Seriously, your reviews have become the source of gaining rouge in my cheeks now. ☺️☺️ And yes, there was a lot happening in this chapter, I admit. 😳😳 Coming to the start, yes Ranveer did need to rid himself of all the negativity he was going through and he did need to pour his heart out to someone. And Ishaani is always going to be the best choice for this. 😛😛
And bingo! You've described it perfectly. 👏👏 As to Falguni and Harshad, yes I've always wanted to bring out the better in them than was tapped into in the show. 😕😕 And yes, even I was disappointed with Harshad's reaction at that point of time. So, I'm not the only one who feels so. 😃😃
Yes, that's exactly why she did come to check up on him. 😒😒 And here again, you've described it perfectly regarding what the dreams do to them. 👍🏼👍🏼 As to both of them being connected in timing, Ranveer's dream about Love occured four years later, while Ishaani's has been occuring regularly since the past four years in intervals. 😊😊 It isn't too much of a mystery, although I like the theories spinning about on it already.
Thank you so much once again and I'll update the next chapter soon enough. ❤️❤️

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