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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Yeh lo, I keep saying thank you and you keep saying sorry. 😡😡 Ho gaya hisaab barabar. 😉😉 And nobody can hate you, you are so cute! 😳😳 And yes, you've only missed one epistle and two interludes, so it's alright. 😆😆
Hawww, bas bas, my family is giving me suspicious looks now. 🤣🤣 I love you too as well, Cherie! ❤️❤️ Loads and loads of hugs to you as well. 🤗🤗
Ps. I really pity the people who ever dare to flirt with me. Khair nahi hai ab unki. 🤪🤪


First of all , Good morning beautiful🤗 Wish you a beautiful day😳

Okey meri hone wali bride ap ki khushi ke liye aaj se no thank u and no sorry , only shank u and shorry😉😆 Awww really ? Can u ask Aarushi and VC28 tif they agree on this 😆 Cause I dont even know where to start with there updates , I guess one day I just sit down and read averything and write reviews😛 shank u for understanding🤗

Shorry , i dont want to creat a bad impression on my hone wala sasural na😆🤪 Do you have any idea how many times i have gotten that look😆 My mom even said "honey is everything u want to tell me ?" I bursted out laughing and so did she😆 I have no idea what that mean

Ofc you love me , or else would u have said yes to marry me🤪 Just joking , I love you too❤️❤️

What a great start of the day , by getting your love and hugs

PS:"I am just protective of whats mine"😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Katniss07

In all this i forgot to appreciate your work 😛 BRILLIANT job LM !!! 👏 ⭐️ 🤗

The moment when Ishani called HP Papa my eyes were brimmed up ...aww...I was a beautiful beautiful moment ❤️

Also when Ranveer was happy seeing his loved ones happy ,the words "This is our Ranveer" automatically left my mouth ❤️ ( maybe the end of his weird dreams was this only , the dream in which he subconsciously trying to find the true meaning on love , Love = self-sacrifice , & self-sacrifice = Love 🥺 which was also visible in his behaviour when ishani woke up in Epistle . 19 wala incident )

And your diwali description was beyond words , you write so so well 🤗 it was radiating your brilliance *applauds* 👏👏

Finally the moment ishani poured her heart out post diwali of how no body will love her as she is illegitimate , i was left crying 😭😭 poor girl was so happy & her happiness shattered badly with this one cruel blow 🥺

The interludes were also perfect 😉 left so many qns. pooping in my mind , RV businessman , Oh cool 😎 , btw who's the girl ?? maybe who observed Ishveer from childhood and came to know that Caffeinated love is their story 😕 ...maybe its gauri ...

This suave RV always makes me swoon over him ...the way he talked to is manager ☺️ the way all the students were stunned by his speech ☺️ the funny way in which he woke up ☺️ the way he looked at the pics ☺️ just each & every single thing about him , droolworthy munda ☺️ ☺️

Then comes our stern & bossy Ishani Prakeh 😎😎 the way she talked to Rishi & Puneet was awesome ⭐️ , but apart that her loneliness stung me hard poor girl has no one by her side , parents died , & these Parekhs left her 😡😡 what kind of people are they 🤢 , a shitty husband calling her 'chicken giving golden egg' it is chirkut indeed 🤢 , thank god he divorced her , i'm wondering how she might have come out of the poverty phase

By the way is some ego clash between Ishveer is on the way 😎 maybe due to business ( Mr. Finch).God i can't even guess whats i store for us , good going my "Master of suspense" 😉 😆

PS : your & MM conversations are so so ☺️ 🤣 jhakaas jodi 😉



Thank you , thank you☺️☺️🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
unres on page 89 I think😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Oh Katniss, you are honestly such a dear! 🤗🤗 Ranveer's pen name has nothing got to do with Mathematics. 😆😆 Alright, I'll ease you up loads. Just go back to your review on Page 90-91 and see my response in it, or atleast the first line of the Ps. 😉😉 I could not have made it more simpler. 😳😳
As to the points you've raised, yes 70% of your points raised have some validity with the storyline throughout the FF (or as much as the blocks have set in so far). I'm telling you, you'll make a brilliant Sherlock. 😃😃
And no, none of these points have anything got to do with the author's name. 😛😛 And don't apologize to me, you should be proud of yourself. You've made the maximum amount of breakthrough with the story. ⭐️⭐️
Ps. Special point: The dedication of R.V. doesn't indicate the old Ranveer. 😊😊


That mathematics thing was just to pass time , since yesterday whenever i get bored from revisions i start doing this pagalpanti XD

And on my first comment you replied that it was an interesting theory , that unscrambling crap 😳
but if it is so then it is related to Ishani's name only right ??😕😕 but as far as i know a pen name is used by the author to hide his / her true identity or if it is co-authored by someone or some other personal or professional reasons 🤔 um...wait ...Ian Hake-Parish ( Ishani Harshad Parekh )
which means its co-authored by Ishani or Harshad , oh what the heck ( my stupidity has no limits isn't it ? ) no no this can't be it , leave , but now you have enticed me to find the pen name mystery before you reveal it 😈 😈, i'll keep trying ...

By the way the- Ranveer's book getting rejected by 34 publishing houses , then getting approved by one just cuz of chief editors son and turning out to be a blockbuster - seems similar to that of J.K . Rowling's struggle for HP , haina 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you loved the updates so far! ⭐️⭐️
Yeah, that scene was very emotional for me to write as well. 😭😭 And Ranveer is just like that, always makes our heart melt with his kindness and innocence. 😳😳 As to his dreams, it's got a lot of complexity to it, something I'll be unraveling slowly as the updates go by. 😛😛 But I like the derivation you've removed because in case of Epistles 19 and 20, this stands true. 👍🏼👍🏼
The Diwali part was another risk and I'm happy that it paid off. ☺️☺️ And dear, you praise me much more than necessary. As to Ishaani's outburst, I did feel a lot for the poor girl. The interludes, on the other hands, have been the most fun I've had so far. Yes, RV is now a businessman. 😎😎 As to the girl, well, it's again much simpler than that. 😛😛
The suave, charismatic RV can always make anyone swoon upon him with his attitude. ❤️❤️ That's why writing about him is so much fun. 😳😳 And all the points you've made are what I wanted to portray RV as. ☺️☺️
And coming to Ishaani, writing about her like that is something I've enjoyed thoroughly as well because this side of hers has never been explored (except for the shitty track in the show 🤢🤢). And yes, the poor girl has had a hard life in these six years. 😕😕 And you've again guessed it right, it's our dear, beloved Chirag.
That will still come much later into the story, but I'd love to see the sparks fly. 🤣🤣 But it won't necessarily be an ego-clash though, it'll be fun. 😈😈 And this new term of being "The Master of Suspense" frightens me. 🤔🤔 I try my level best to gets the readers hooked to the story, and I'm happy that it's working so far. 😃😃
Ps. We love the PDA. 🤪🤪


Hey , we all love you a lot dear 🤗 you are an amazing writer ⭐️⭐️

It's very tough to make the readers feel what you feel while writing and you've mastered it so very well 😃 I am really eager to know about the secret of his dreams too , it is obvious that the lady is just an emotion love as ranveer said and that his dreams occur as he wanted to find its true meaning but what really was the significance of his dreams is something i'm really looking forward to 👍🏼

And that girl ...well lets see who's it , cuz she's giving me strange vibes 😕😕

Oh yeah ! i knew it was chiru 😉 kamina insaan 🤢🤢

And don't tense , be cool ...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456



Thank you , thank you☺️☺️🤣


W-E-L-C-O-M-E ☺️ 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
del. 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow LM,
This is beyond my imagination. ...
It is marvellous, outstanding, beautiful, breathtaking, magical and emotional.

It is simply amazing. So much pain Ranveer has to endure but he was so calm to engulf everything and at the end make things calm...

I don't know how many times I've read this chapter dear but anytime I read I can't seem to get enough. ..it is "damn good "(this is what I say in my daily activities when I come across something wonderful).

The expressions used is unexplainable. ... it's pure...

All in all ...difficult to find words...PHENOMENAL 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice and great chapter.
Congooo for completing 100 pages😳

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