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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 WOW!!
You are an incredible writer!!
Beautifully written os!
Outstanding!
stay blessed dear :)
you have an amazing talent!
👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm really happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️
I really miss updating NC too, but I've learnt to live without it now. 😛😛 The OS' are a good change for me. Works quick enough on a simple idea, and I keep getting so many of them. 😆😆 This OS was something I've been meaning to write ever since I saw that episode, but somehow, I couldn't manage to do so up until now.
Their whole convo was surprisingly very tricky for me to write, although I usually don't have that much trouble with them. 😕😕 Must be the idiocy of the show getting to me. 🤢🤢 And yes, Ishaani will always be a sensible woman in my stories, even though that is a major off-character trait as compared to the show one. 😒 😒
Seriously, you guys never fail to make me blush now, do you? ☺️☺️ And I don't know about being the best, but I do want to publish a novel one day. 😳😳



Yeah, LM...you ahve too..After all,all good things must come to an end right??😊

OS' are good to write as ideas come fast...and for writers like you, there's no need even to think for ideas😳😳

Yeah, you'll be one of the best writers...I have full faith n confidence in you LM...

PS: PL. TELL ME WHEN U PUBLISH, CUZ I HAVE TO READ IT, AT ANY COST😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishveerian




actually buddy now i want you to write a FF but story different honi chahea na thori si. new villian new characters har FF men chirika ko evil parh parh ke thak gai hun.😛

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I don't know about writing an FF given the time constraints I have, but I do have a very risky idea for an OS. TongueTongue I'll be working on it post my exams, and lets see how that works out. 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranveerishani78

Hats off dear... Really its fantastic thanks a lot for pm... Amazing OS ... Their convo was beautifully written... Lots of hug 👍🏼

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Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so glad that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshnipillai

👏 WOW!!

You are an incredible writer!!
Beautifully written os!
Outstanding!
stay blessed dear :)
you have an amazing talent!
👏👏👏
😊

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishveer4eva



Yeah, LM...you ahve too..After all,all good things must come to an end right??😊

OS' are good to write as ideas come fast...and for writers like you, there's no need even to think for ideas😳😳

Yeah, you'll be one of the best writers...I have full faith n confidence in you LM...

PS: PL. TELL ME WHEN U PUBLISH, CUZ I HAVE TO READ IT, AT ANY COST😳😳

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Yep, all good things certainly have to come to an end. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed It is only when that happens that you moved ahead and discover better. 😛😛
Yes, I must admit that ideas come to me pretty fast. Penning it down and converting it into a passable story is where all the trouble arises. 😆😆
And don't worry, I will tell you. 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful 👏
Ishani is like a powerful women 😳 it was much mature conversation 😳 and the whole scenario was a good idea of yours
Yours lover ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: angela_khushi

Beautiful 👏
Ishani is like a powerful women 😳 it was much mature conversation 😳 and the whole scenario was a good idea of yours
Yours lover ❤️




Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it so much. ⭐️⭐️ And yes, it is about time that Ishaani is shown to be a powerful and independent woman rather than the idiot the CVs make her look like.



Love you loads as well! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue





Thank you so much, sweetie!🤗🤗I'm so happy that you liked it so much.⭐️⭐️And yes, it is about time that Ishaani is shown to be a powerful and independent woman rather than the idiot the CVs make her look like.



Love you loads as well!❤️

I am glad you care so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm..realized that I am too late here... Well just read now... I am gathering words to form my sentences..hmm.. ha ha... u always have this effect on me... the entire scenario that u recreated in this OS -it was just magnificent & very deep... To be honest I actually did not like that suicide plot in the episode at all... It just made Ranveer look like more coward & foolish rather than showing his despair ... But dear I just loved this OS.. You showed us an entire different scenario in the same plot , a very meaningful & powerful... I must say a very matured writing... I am not gonna talk about ur writing skills now as I know I will just keep going.. ha ha..the way u have penned their inner desperations ,confusions & all of those emotions was just brilliant... It was quite natural yet a complex scene... & there was a lot of wit even in this serious story... Very skillfully handled...I really liked that..it reduces the heaviness...& Ishani's portrayal was the highlight for me...& Ranveer..i can't forget him yaar... he he...seriously dear I cant but keep admiring u for that...

& I always wanted to ask u how do u write so beautifully... I mean how the characters behave in a particular situation ,how they approach to a problem & their way of thinking - it's really amazing & very understandable... & very realistic... It also explains how much u understand the characters & their reactions in a certain situation... very impressed with u sweetie... I have learnt a lot from these ffs & from u too... 😳😳

Well... it was yet another brilliant piece of work from you..In the first place I really wanna thank u from the bottom of my heart for writing it.. u know it just relaxes me..& as u know I am no longer watching the show it just reminds me of their beautiful story & why I got addicted to them...May God bless u dear...I just pray u keep writing like this always & u deserve all sort of recognition & appreciation ...u have a long way to go...⭐️⭐️😳😳

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