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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey guys,I think u would like this poem .not my best work but tell me if u like dit or not


REMEMBER
Remember the time we spent together
Oh,how I wish those days could last forever
Remember the endless talks and fights we had
Just thinking of them makes me both happy and sad

I remember clearly the time when u were unwell
And how u used to help me the endless times I fell
No matter what happens,our love will stay in my mind
And in my eyes,like stars it will shine

Remember when I told u "I think u don't luv me anymore"
That time I felt I was in an ocean and couldn't find the shore
I saw the doubt u had in your eyes
Which were clouded with a sky of lies

And now I long for being with u,
These days i look into your eyes for some clue,
For I thought our love would stay forever,
Remember the time when we were together

Hope u guys liked it
Luv
geet
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tinai thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was really koolšŸ‘šŸ‘

Nannu thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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HEY RADIO.....

ru online???šŸ˜†
mera_zahaan thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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šŸ‘šŸ‘wow! that was so goodšŸ‘
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow too good its really nice thanks for sharring dear
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Posted: 20 years ago
#6

hey Geet that was really cute !😊

asianpride05 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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That's a nice poem...Great work
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Posted: 20 years ago
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its very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! did a great job😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Very touching....... You are TOO Good!!! šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

Keep it up!
Amreen
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow!cool....😊nice job..

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