acting advice/feedback needed please

Hi All
Im an aspiring actress and I wanted some critical feedback on a monologue I did.

It's quite rushed and quality is a bit poor as it's taken on my phone. But anyhow i still want your opinion. Be honest. Good points/bad points. It's a Shakespeare play so you might not understand what im saying.

Go on www.youtube.com/hmodel1
The name is Lady Macbeth. It's a short clip so wont take a lot of your time

Thank you

Hannah