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Posted: 3 years ago
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bahut hi aha👏 ye sab hume serial mei nhi milega so hum isse hi maanlete hain😳🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Very well written 👏

Could actually image the entire scene play out in front of me.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tumne dil khush kar diyaaaa! Keeping all the characters true to form... kaash.. kaash... kaash.. but humein toh jali hui tadke waali daal milni hain..

Thanks for writing this down... 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow hope we get something similar but for sure we will get only tadka tadka tadka...but just loved your take on the track...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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My biggest shock reading this was ACP Laxmi behaving professionally for a change😆

I could actually see the whole scene playing out in my mind Zasha, such a heart-warming piece. Thank you🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you for the tag.

I wish we get something like this in the show too 😍❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwesome Zasha🤗🤗 very well written


kaash yehi script hota❤️ would love to see a simple scene like this play out for a change than tadka tadka tadka!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you for the tag 🤗.

Wow just wow. Itz what we also want .. as always Raghav pallavi together.. Caring and loving each other. Pata nhi how the episode will be 😔.. so stressed out. I hope Sab sahi ho

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks Prez for tagging me for this one as well🤗


I loveed loveed it & ek secret bataun toh aaj ka Episode mujhe kaafi Accha laga in comparison to all the Episodes since the Track started. Must be cos everyone acted in character today instead of me feeling like I'm watching some other show entirely 🙈


Loved the way you continued this as usual. Matlab MHRW mein Petition sign karwana hai ab toh mujhe...Tum please replace kardo innke saare writers ko.....The fact that you tried to showcase Sunny actually turning out to be a useful help along with Laxmi helps them look human instead of how they're unnecessarily evil right now😳....And I love the Meetup of Pallavi & Raghav at the Reception👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsPrez

The precap has created an uproar amongst the audience. So, I thought of writing this.

Wrote this literally within minutes. This is how I wish the precap had played out.

I am considering Esha is absolutely sober while hugging Raghav.

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Raghav's anger boiled like volcano hearing Esha's words. He took hold of her arms which were wrapped around his torso and then jerked her arms out of his hold which made stumble backwards.

"How dare you!" He roared. "Tumhare se thoda sharafat se baat kya karliya tumko laga tum mere se chipak sakta hain?"

"Raghav, I know tumne Pallavi se shaadi ki hain but I still love you." Esha tried to reason.

"Exactly... Pallavi is my wife and I love her. Suna tumne? Ekbar phirse kehta hoon, issbar dhyaan se sunna..." He said calmly. "I love Pallavi." He emphasised on each and every word. "Ardhamainda?"

Sparing her a final glare, he stormed out of the room.
"Raghav!" Esha called after him.

Fuming in uncontrollable anger, he reached the hotel lobby.

"Ma'am, guest ka naam kya hain?" He heard the receptionist ask someone.

"Raghav Rao." Answered the voice he had been dreading to hear for the past few hours.

"Pallavi..." He breathed before turning around and seeing the love of his wife standing a couple of feet away from him, asking about him to the receptionist.

He had crossed half the distance in a couple of strides when her eyes fell on him.She sprinted towards him and engulfed him in a tight hug.

"Ra...Ragh... Tum thik ho na?" She choked on her words, tightening her hold around him.

"Main thik hain par..." He broke the hug but held her gently by the arms. "Par tum yaha kaise aya?"

"Vo...kal..." she managed to speak in between her heavy breathes.

"Achcha, relax. Yaha pe aao. Pehle thoda shant hojao." He said while guiding her towards the nearest sofa and making her sit.

He watched closely while she tried to normalize her breathing.

Soon enough, she clasped his right hand with both of hers and said, ''Subah humari baat adhoori reh gayi, phir strike ki news mili aur tumse baat nehi ho paa rahi thi. Main bohot darr gayi thi, Raghav... Mann mein bure bure khayal aarahe the. Kal raat ko jhagde ke waqt jo tumne wapas na ane ki baat kahi thi, woh hi barbar mujhe yaad aaraha tha. Jhagda ho ya jo bhi...promise karo phir kabhi aisi baat nehi bologe?"

This wasn't the first time Pallavi had shown concern for him, after all she loved him, but every time she did that made him fall in love with her all over again.

He cupped her face with his free hand and brought her closer to plant a lingering kiss on her forehead. "Sorry... Sorry. Sorry. Jitna bolun utna kam hain but I am really very sorry, Pallavi. Main hi bina baat ke jhagda karta hain. Ab se nehi karega. Tum jo bolega, jaise bolega, main waisaich karega!"

She smiled. When she raised her hand to hold it over his on her cheek, he noticed a red cut mark on her arm and he went berserk.

"Pallavi,'' he stretched her arm to its full length to take a closer look, ''Yeh kaise hua?''

Before she could reply, he was already yelling at the hotel staff. ''Aye, receptionist. Jaldi se first aid box lao! FAST!''

"Raghav, relax. Yeh kuch bhi nehi hain, bas chhoti si chot hain.'' It was her failed attempt of calming him down.

"Pallavi, I love you so so much! Chot chhoti ho ya badi, tum janta hain na main tumko pain mein nehi dekh sakta? Ek poora mahina bhi nehi hua uss hadse ka aur aaj tumko phirse chot lag gaya." He turned to the reception again, "First aid box kaha hain! Idhar jaldi lao." He yelled again.

The receptionist ran towards Raghav and handed him his ordered item. He hastily searched for the required medication and immediately started treating her wound.

Meanwhile, Sunny, who had accompanied Pallavi to Warangal, stood nearby and witnessed the reunion of these lovebirds for the nth time.
"Wah, bhai! Kya love-story hain." He was whispering to himself while watching Raghav treat Pallavi's minor cut mark. "Aas-paas koi hidden camera hain kya jo innhe shoot kar raha hain?" He looked around but only found hotel staff standing around Raghav, probably to be ready when he yells for anything again. "Kaun kahega ki kuch mahino pehle tak yeh dono jaani dushman the? Aisi prem kahaniyan toh sirf movies mein hi dekhne ko milti hain.''

Little did Sunny know that his blabbering was overheard by Esha, who had followed Raghav after he had stormed off. She scowled and went back the way she came.

After applying ointment on Pallavi's wound, Raghav made her drink some water.

Then finally he asked, "Strike mein tum yaha tak kaise aya?"

''Farhad kisi kam mein busy tha aur Kirti mujhe akele nehi ane de rahi thi, iss liye Sunny ko bhej diya.'' She pointed where Sunny was standing.

"Saale sahab! Dekhiye maine phirse aap tota-maina ko milwa diya na." Sunny wiggled his eyebrows and gave a wide smile.

Raghav simply glared at him in response.

"Lekin police kisi civilian ko ane nehi de rahi thi. Tab ACP Laxmi ne humari madat ki.'' Pallavi pointed at her.

Upon seeing Pallavi, Raghav hadn't gotten the time to look around to acknowledge Sunny and Laxmi's presence until now. When Laxmi came in his view, he got up to stand in front of her. Immediately, Pallavi held his hand and signalled him to control his anger. He sighed looking at her and then turned to face Laxmi.

''Thank you, Pallavi ki madat karne ke liye." Raghav's tone was gentle due to Pallavi's request. ''Lekin yeh matt sochna ki main bhoola hain tumne jo Pallavi ke saath kiya tha.''

Laxmi nodded her head, guiltily. ''Ab strikes band hochuke hain toh hum wapas jane ke liye ravana ho sakte hain.''

''Okay...'' Raghav nodded and extended his hand to Pallavi, ''Ghar chale?''

She took his hand to stand up and then they proceeded towards their home.

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Don't know what tomorrow's episode will bring for us but hope everyone will like this OS at least😳

About the title, it's totally random. I couldn't think of any name😆 But sometimes the way Raghav looks at Pallavi makes me feel like he is thinking, "Kaise Mujhe Tum Milgayi". From that I named this OS as such😃

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Other MHRW works:

FF: All Over Again

TS: Roaring Love

OS: Raat Khatam, Baat Khatam

OS: Never Say Never

TS: Raos ki Laxmi

Tumne mujhe tag kiya aur mujhe woh mila hi nahi 😭😭

Bas aisi hi sair rahi thi Forum pe aur yeh dekha. Sorry Zasha😒😭

Coming to the story, it was really great 🥳🥳

For once I want Raghav to tell Esha that he loves Pallavi 😳

The way he said mein tumhe pain mein nahi dekh saktha ❤️ But he is at the fore front to hurt her Kyun chillana fir kyun sorry kehna. Arghhh isko mein 😡

I hope it plays out your way 🤞 but I know it won't coz Tadka 😡😡

Thanks for this and tag ❤️❤️❤️

Keep Writing 🥳 Tum bohottt acha likhti ho❤️❤️

The title is 😍

Apologies for the late comments 🥺🥺

Edited by missFiesty_69 - 3 years ago

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