Raghvi FF : Fragile Hearts ( Ch-10/Pg-24) 30 Oct - Page 12

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was so romantic--the teasing thing reminded me of the gym session of RaghVi

Btw where were you when we were writing the Multi-author Drabble for 100 episode celebration--we really wanted someone to take RaghVi on a date--but all the writers had sucessfully evaded writing one

the whole picnic and hike was described beautifully

loved it

and your last sentence---is the twist coming?? and Pallavi was in for a revenge--she sure does have a change of heart now

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was so romantic--the teasing thing reminded me of the gym session of RaghVi

Btw where were you when we were writing the Multi-author Drabble for 100 episode celebration--we really wanted someone to take RaghVi on a date--but all the writers had sucessfully evaded writing one

the whole picnic and hike was described beautifully

loved it

and your last sentence---is the twist coming?? and Pallavi was in for a revenge--she sure does have a change of heart now

Thank you so much Reem ❤️💫

The gym session is what kind of inspired me to write this scene.
I wasn't really aware of anything about a Multi Author Drabble, I would've loved to write one. Although I made this account a long time back but I don't wasn't active much, until last month.

Thanks again for the feedback! What do you think Pallavi had a change of heart or no? 😉 and remember, Revenge maybe wicked but it's natural, it may seem as the sweetest morsel now 😬

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was beautiful❤

You write so well and specially that sunset part, I've been left craving for more like a greedy person now.

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

wow this is a very lovely chapter

u know what I loved the trip, so enjoyable, I loved RaghVi here, amazing it was

and the cute fights, the teasing everything, was perfect beyond words, awesome dr

I glad that you updated today, Will wait for your net chapter

much love

Jen

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was both sensual and shows the fun dynamics of this couple in the story. Looking forward to the turns the story takes. 😀

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Posted: 4 years ago

Mind blowing update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Morphedwings

Thank you so much Reem ❤️💫

The gym session is what kind of inspired me to write this scene.
I wasn't really aware of anything about a Multi Author Drabble, I would've loved to write one. Although I made this account a long time back but I don't wasn't active much, until last month.

Thanks again for the feedback! What do you think Pallavi had a change of heart or no? 😉 and remember, Revenge maybe wicked but it's natural, it may seem as the sweetest morsel now 😬

She didnt but the emotions of revenge are suppressed right now under the attraction

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was so beautiful❤❤❤. Loved it

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Posted: 4 years ago

HAWT! HAWT! Superhotttt Update!🔥

Why ain't you on our 18+ thread already😆


How do I sleep after reading this☺️

I liked the hike & also it's participants😉 .....Brace for Impact. Please don't tell me, Pallavi's gonna throw him off or something. I'm pretty sure that isn't what you have planned😲


Thanks for giving us an extended version of the Gym Scene in a new setup. Atleast you aren't cruel & didn't tease us but gave a proper RaghVi scene unlike the CVs🤗

Loved the way you setup the whole theme here kaafi❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ahh! This was such a treat to read! Loved it ❤️

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