Raghvi FF : Fragile Hearts ( Ch-10/Pg-24) 30 Oct - Page 11

Originally posted by: ReemShah

this was a beautiful and smooth update

their 1st hug and Raghav and Pallavi opening up and talking to each other

this was written really well

Thank you sweetheart.
I am glad you're liking it so far.
Things are smooth as of now but new twists will be introduced soon😉❤️

Originally posted by: Avneel07

This is beautiful❤❤❤. Loved it.

Thank you so much Avneel.

I'm glad you're liking it. ✨❤️

Originally posted by: bips_freedom

Nice chapter...

Thank you so much sweetheart. ❤️✨

Originally posted by: chat_3

I like the progression of their relationship. Is there some sinister about the ex- husband? Great update. 👍🏼

Thank you so much for your feedback love.

There may or may not be something sinister. I won't be revealing anything 😉❤️ Read to know. 💕

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Still lost deep in her thoughts she touched his shoulder lightly and smoothened out his shirt with her feather hands as she leaned a little closer. The entirety of his focus, every inch of his being, was consumed in that oval-sized point of contact, where her hand shared its warmth with his shoulder. - Loved how you took Pallavi's Saree Pinning scene from the show & kinda reversed it with Raghav's shirt😎

Absolutely Delightful update - Both of them giving time to each other & understanding why they would have certain insecurities, Pallavi also trying from her end cos she believes she can be free around him❤️

I really like the way you can explain about what's going on in the mind of characters

Why do I feel the next chapter u're gonna give me a heart-attack with that Hike of theirs?😔

Hey Sweetheart! 💕

Just wanted to let you know that your feedback's literally make my day and I love you for that.

Can't thank you enough. Dedicating the next chapter to you.

And no heart attacks with the hike, it's going to bring them closer 😉

Keep reading ❤️

Originally posted by: lturlapati

loving every chapter

Thank you so much ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Jia21

Awesome!

Thanks a ton!❤️✨

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Read all 5 parts in one go! Amazing story and an amazing flow of events!!! ❤️

I like this Raghav and love this Pallavi even more. I’m interested in finding out what prompted him to insist on marrying her, I want to believe it was love at first sight...?

Thank you so much love.
I am glad I was able to hook you up to the story.
The reason why Raghav was so adamant to marry Pallavi will be revealed soon enough but what I can clear is that it was sure love but not at first sight.
Keep reading ❤️✨

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

As I said here I am with all the chapters read and my views

This Ff is progressively amazing

Love it

I am loving how everything is being said and unfold in RaghVi’s story

Pls do update soon

Much love

Jen

Thank you so much Rose! 💕✨

I am glad you're liking the progress so far.
Keep reading. Will update soon! ❤️💫