Raghvi FF : Fragile Hearts ( Ch-10/Pg-24) 30 Oct - Page 10

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is beautiful❤❤❤. Loved it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#92

I like the progression of their relationship. Is there some sinister about the ex- husband? Great update. 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Still lost deep in her thoughts she touched his shoulder lightly and smoothened out his shirt with her feather hands as she leaned a little closer. The entirety of his focus, every inch of his being, was consumed in that oval-sized point of contact, where her hand shared its warmth with his shoulder. - Loved how you took Pallavi's Saree Pinning scene from the show & kinda reversed it with Raghav's shirt😎


Absolutely Delightful update - Both of them giving time to each other & understanding why they would have certain insecurities, Pallavi also trying from her end cos she believes she can be free around him❤️

I really like the way you can explain about what's going on in the mind of characters


Why do I feel the next chapter u're gonna give me a heart-attack with that Hike of theirs?😔

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Posted: 4 years ago
#94

loving every chapter

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Posted: 4 years ago
#95

Read all 5 parts in one go! Amazing story and an amazing flow of events!!! ❤️

I like this Raghav and love this Pallavi even more. I’m interested in finding out what prompted him to insist on marrying her, I want to believe it was love at first sight...?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#96

As I said here I am with all the chapters read and my views

This Ff is progressively amazing

Love it

I am loving how everything is being said and unfold in RaghVi’s story

Pls do update soon

Much love

Jen

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Posted: 4 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

I am so sorry for not reading your other updates

I am actually tied up with work and I am just back

Will reserve for now

I will read them all together and will comment until then tc dr

As it suits you love. Will be waiting for your feedback. ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

It was a beautiful update! 😍

They had their first mutual hug!!🤗

Well done and keep up the great work!!

Thank you so much love.
I'm glad you're liking it so far.
keep reading ❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago
#99

Thank you so much for your feedback 🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it🥰❤️

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