FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 54

Aaaaa Raghav finding out the truth about Mandar will be an interesting turn.

This time around I hope Raghav will know Pallavi gave the blood unlike in the show!

It's okay even if the chapter is short as long as you give your daily dose of story, I'll be glad 🤣

Also hope you had a great break, take care ❤️

Originally posted by: Apukar

AWESOME! I like this Pallavi more, practical one. And I am loving the development of the relationship between Raghav and Pallavi. No exaggerated misunderstandings, just raw and true feelings. Excited to see what happens next! 😊

Yes, Sister---you put it so well. Focus on the feelings not on the "exaggerated misunderstandings". Thank you for your interest in the tale.

Originally posted by: Bee222

Oh, oh, oh! A maha update! Thank you!

1. I love that Pallavi wants to help out Kirti even while cancelling her agreement with Raghav ❤️

2. I love that she's wearing an old t-shirt and trackpants at home, instead of sarees all the time. I'm dying to see Shivangi in casual wear in the show! Thank you for fulfilling that wish in written form 😳

3. Raghav came! He looked at her lips! He smelled her hair! Ahhhh!

4. He said "make room" like it was nothing, like he was simply ordering someone in his own territory. That was hot ☺️

5. That question he asked, it also applies on him, doesn't it? Even he knows he wants more now, but the circumstances are constraining him. He asks Pallavi what her Baji Rao would say, but what he really wants to know is his own Baji Rao's opinion on the matter 😏

Loved this update! Keep making him pop in like that please 😆

Loved your point-form comments. That is totally me.

And I love what you suggest in No. 5: Also---I wonder---is there a part of him that came over to resolve her problems. But then he hesitated because he has not authority here. She has to ask for his help before he can give it. And she didn't ask, so he smelled her hair and left. We see from his history with Kirti, Gorilla, Farhad---that he protects those he cares about. His visit---was it curiosity or was it a protective instinct. Hmm...

Your No.4 is just such a wonderful observation. You are right---he says it with a sense of haq.

OH! And once again, he leaves his jacket behind.

If this is the rate at which he gives out his jackets, his tailor must keep very busy.

hehe

wow its nice raghav is digging into mandaar

pallavi is gonna help amma and raghav again will be bold over

please do continue

bye sumi

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Yes, Sister---my first tales were IPKKND fan-fiction. In fact, I'm going to be sharing one again in June for the 10th Anniversary to the serial.

And---what you say above is so true. My dislike for Baba borders on the pathological. In this past episode I even have that moment when Pallavi is wondering how much Baba contributed to Mandhar's actions. That is pretty dark stuff.

Oh---thank you for mentioning about him visiting her home to check out how she is. I wanted to establish that in this episode that if he needs to find her, chances are she may be at the bottom of the garden, which is hidden from sight. And now that he knows about the back gate---he can come and go without anyone noticing ;-)

So my guess was right😎 ! I agree about what you say about Baba & stand on the same position.

Rightttt, RR'll come & go as he pleases & that's something nice established

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Yes, Sister---I loved that he checked in on her. After reading your comment, it occurred to me that she must have felt rather lonely and lost sitting there in the garden alone. Her aspirations for DSE taken away. Her realisation that all that talk of "it's your shop" was just talk. Sigh.

You mention Sanju---who is that again? Am I forgetting someone?

Sorry Sanki got auto corrected as sanju 🙈

Ah so pallu will donate blood to RR Amma

Waiting for him to know all of Mandhar truth

Love this dynamic if Krishna and pallu

Love your narration and the extra sweet touch of places in hyderabad..makes it so cool to relate..

No..no..no why did you leave it there😭

That was dramatic ik but i wanted it to continue so badly. I really liked the new character--the detective aka Vivek--

It will be priceless to when Raghav come to know the truth..and i really liked the bond between Vivek and Raghav.

Also Pallavi is going to donate blood anonymously would be the next question?

Waiting for next update

🥳congtras on the new prof pic

I loved shy pallu ☺️

Cant wait to the hospital drama 😆