Moments to live: An ArDi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Aanvi..

Beautiful os dear

Loved it to the core

ArDi were awesome as usual and madhav was his cute self as he is

Keep writing more

Thanks for the PM

-Manu-

Originally posted by: amritat

Beautiful read...

I am reading an Ardi OS after a long time...n feeling nostalgic.

This part of the epic is wat made me an Ardi fan in my childhood n later Draupadi fan in the later years.

This is the most sensitive part that made me cry all the time...

Although my opinions have changed...this one part still stirs me from within defying all logic...

I really liked some dialogues in your OS that I had never read before in any other OS...

The part where she says, 'I have four more to take care of by your grace'...that is something I always wanted Draupadi to tell Arjun.

I loved your portrayal of Arjun...not the typical 'Mujhe Shama kardo Panchali' but someone who repents n is also dignified.

His walking away at her harsh words n silent anger really makes him look like the real Arjun to me.

Keep up the great work...😊

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Hi, this was very cute os. Loved how u potrayed everyone and your writing style is also very beautiful. Loved how the os finished with ardi bond going through a whole incident. Madhav was very helpful to parth. It was amazing.
Bye and all the best for ur future endeavours.

Originally posted by: aanvi98

ramya, u start reading the stories in forum, u'll fall in love with ArDi...😆 u know, tht's first confusion which e1 gets. But we say, ArDi rocks! ArDi is such none can go without casting eye on thm!!😳 I need ur heartiest appreciations to continue my works!😳

Originally posted by: ramya06

If that is the case, i will surely start reading them.😳 Sure, why not, of course i will read and review them. But i want yours too.😆😛😉

Originally posted by: -Saishree-

Amazing OS anu!!! very beautifully written!!!😃

the pain, their longings for each other...everything was well portrayed!! and ofcourse the portrayal of Arjun!! nice!!

Madhav...always cute and the person who always shows right and sensible path to Arjun!!! 😃

All in one i must say a perfect union of Ardi!!

well written!!! keep it up!!👍🏼

Originally posted by: 8520NK

This was the OS you were talking about, haina Aanvi?

Well, I am glad you posted, because I loved this so much.

This was such a beautiful portrayal of both their feelings, and I really liked how Madhav worked his magic.

There were a few lines I loved, the way Draupadi expressed her innermost feelings to him and he repents, feeling exactly like I always imagined he should, feeling her real pain.

Also, the way she understands him towards the end, is lovely.

Kudos to you for penning down such a wonderful piece!👏