Saga of two burned hearts.....An ArDi SS(Chapter 26 up!)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice introduction😊

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MsChanadlerBong

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This OS seems amazing dear !

Do continue soon . This chap was very little . Please try to write more .😳

Ps please make this story a happy one .

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: naturelover33

Tnx for theappreciation, di! It was my first try, so i hope that it was as your expectations... surely, i will update!!😃

Di!? Hey plz call me Mahima or mahi I'm only 16... 😆 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Nice introduction😊

thank u! will surely write more!😃

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Originally posted by: ltelidevaralak
Good beginning .Continue soon.

tnx! plz encourage me!😊

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Originally posted by: Sonatia
It was an amazing update!! Well wr8en Anu dear(can i call u dat?)...so yagayseini z finally born...waiting eagerly for the next updt..pls dnt call me 'Di' i am only 16...so update soon haan.

thnx... u surely can call me that... can i call u mou? yeh... now u can see arjun's reaction soon! hi fives! i'm also 16! 😆can i ask something? are u a fan of harry potter??😃

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Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
This OS seems amazing dear !
Do continue soon . This chap was very little . Please try to write more .😳
Ps please make this story a happy one .

thanks! i will continue soon!! yeh, i was little... it more a teaser than a chappy... yah, of course! i don't like a saddy saddy parth-panchali; so i will make it happy one!😃 but plz continue our kalyug ff!! i am really missing it!😳

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Originally posted by: Mahiima16

Di!? Hey plz call me Mahima or mahi I'm only 16... 😆 😊

okay, okay... i won't call u that, infact i can't call u that, becuz i am also 16!!!😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER ONE: PART TWO

Questions of emotion

He sat peacefully on mother nature. He was feeling as Mata Parvati herself was tapping his back on her lap. Suddenly a flame passed through,but not to his body, to his soul... but he did not knew what is it... "was it any yaksha, or any mayavi, or any divine personality?" he questioned to himself... but no, it was not that matter... the most surprising thing is that, even the most perplexed archer of the three world, the undefeated hero was confused!! what can a mind do! Mind can only manipulate a heart; but can it deceive a soul? In case of soul, even the most perfect mind had to be confused... It was not an threatening heat; nor a affectionate one, but a passionate one; something that inflamed him, something shivering, as shiver comes to spine... it was not frightening, nor exciting; it was a thrilling divinity... but did he knew what was it?

P.s this first chapter was more a teaser than a chapter... it was only intro... picture toh abhi baaki mere dosto!!😉

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