Saga of two burned hearts.....An ArDi SS(Chapter 26 up!) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Awesome chapter😃
What is your name?
Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
wow amazing updates
u really have a way with words. the description is very well written right from prologue to part 3.

awsum job. keep it up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome chapter😃

What is your name?


tnx, nonie di ( i hope that can call u that😛) will continue soon... my name is aanvi. u can call me anu, anny, aavi, aanvi, anything!!! (plz choose one which u like!😆)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wow amazing updates

u really have a way with words. the description is very well written right from prologue to part 3.

awsum job. keep it up.



TNX FOR ALL UR LOVELY COMMENTS...😳 THIS WAS MY VERY FIRST TRY... SO I POURED OUT EVERYTHING THAT I HAD IN MY MIND...PEOPLE SAY RIGHT, THE BEST DESCRIPTION IS UR HEART'S DESCRIPTION... PLZ ENCOURAGE ME WITH U ALL'S LOVELY COMMENTS...😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER TWO:
BORN FROM FIRE...
Her eyes were as curious as his father, king Drupada to see his daughter. But confusions came in her mind; questions arose. In a normal event, if anyone had got into that flame, then the entire place would turn upside down. "Why everyone is so quite? Why? For whom am I? Who AM I?" Many questions arose in her mind. Suddenly a divine voice was heard, as if Creator Himself was answering her questions. "This girl,created for namesake of her father's desire to be Arjun's father-in-law, is the luck of Aryavart. She is equal to Laxmi, Saraswati, and Parvati in this earth. As she is dark, God named her Krishnaa, born from fire, she is yagyaseni, lucky for Panchal, she is Panchali. For her ever youthfulness, she is Nityayuvani. For her fragrance- she is Yajojanagandha. As she is grand-daughter of Prishata, she is Parsati. For her father, she will be known as DRAUPADI... O' mankind, she is bestowed to u all as good luck,as yagya is for good luck;keep her safe-remember, she is born for from the very same yagya in which Sati sacrificed herself; because, if she is played, she will flame as Sati flamed...

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"Wow! Born out of fire! "exclaimed Nakul. Pandavs have been roaming around the forest again after leaving Hidimba and her son. Again soltitude life began... They were going with some Brahmins and Rishis.Those who attended King Drupada's Yagya, had seen the miracle had immediately told their near ones and friends; and those friends thier friends. as a result, soon after birth of Draupadi, it had spread all around Panchal and its neighbouring places. that's why they were narrating the birth to pandavas. Rishis continued, " Yes, O' youthful one. She is as beautiful as 'Sandhya Kaal', she glowed as a sparkling glitter. Her eyes are as Mata Laxmi. Her hair are luscious, like a dark blue ocean.And her fragrance, her fragrance can't be found anywhere, O' youths. Those are of blue lotuses... She can't be described, youth." " Wow, she has blue lotus fragrance... He must be the lucky one who will get her..." says and sighs Bheem. " But Rishi Maharaaj, what's her name?" " Why are YOU so excited, bhrata Bheem!!! Bhrata, don't grow your expectations!!! She is a chosen beauty... That fragile flower will not look good beside YOUR elephant structure, MAHARAAJ VRIKODAR!!!!" teased Nakul. " Will you lock your mouth yourself Nakul, or i will break your neck!!! " okay, okay... Clam down..." " We got to know everything, can't we know her name? This is not excitement, this is called... this called... umm..." "curiosity, Bhrata Bheem." the most quite Sahadev had opend his mouth. " yes, yes, CURIOSITY, Nakul, this is called curiosity. we can surely know her name also."" sure, you can know her name, Bheem.", said yudhisthira. " Please, continue your narration, Brahmin." " Her name is on her father Drupad, her name is Draupadi..."

"Draupadi!!!" Arjun had that same thrilling feeling hearing her name which he ha when that flame passed. That name was itself electrifying. " What is all these! Why i am feeling something which i didn't felt before!! What is happening to me?"

Tried to make as big as possible... Plz keep encouraging me!!!! hope you liked it!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
lovely update!! :D i just love the way you write!! you are doing an amazing job 👏
but really sorry i don't think the chapter was long enough because Dil maange more... 😆 so plz update soon!!
Edited by Mahiima16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Well I commented before getting your PM ;)
Edited by Mahiima16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
amazing update
the narration of draupadi's beauty was brilliantly written.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Amazing update dear ! Loved the way you described Draupadi and loved the fun convo between the Pandavs and wow Arjun is feeling something ☺️
Continue soon .
Ps update was long but not long enough to fill our hearts and ArDi plates 😆
Love
Sam
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

lovely update!! :D i just love the way you write!! you are doing an amazing job 👏
but really sorry i don't think the chapter was long enough because Dil maange more... 😆 so plz update soon!!


thanks!!!!! dil maange more... hehehe😆 i know an ArDian's dil... hehehe... keep waiting, like the way you waited during SB for breaking two feet rule...😆( i didn't mean u need to wait life long, just a few days!!! let me grab the track, and you will get bigger!!! P.s don't think i am ghost that knows everything... i know everyone of us strives for THAAT!!!!!!😉)

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