Content Removed

😭 😭 no words didi.
Just waiting fr pandavas ... nd their reaction.

Originally posted by: Mohiniapearl

😭 😭 no words didi.
Just waiting fr pandavas ... nd their reaction.

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This one was very to-the-point and of the type I like! You portrayed Kunti's conflicting feelings very well!

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This was extraordinary! For Yudhishthir it was the greatest shock of his life, and he must have been shattered inwardly by this!

Yes, I have tried to show his shock and also his sorrow that such an act has happened from him. He says that neither the death of Abhimanyu nor the death of all Panchali's sons affected him thus and frankly, that doesn't make much sense unless the guilt is factored in.

You have correctly portrayed Yudhi's guilt. He is famous for guilt feelings 😆 But I think he had enough reason to be angry if we remember Karna's words to Draupadi in dyuta sabha. I respect this person who had the ability to forgive Karna for those words just after knowing that Karna was his brother. Yes he was hurt maximum after this. But I thank you for not mentioning the curse. It cannot be found in all versions and I don't know if it is very authentic or not. And I liked the part where he thinks that he did not fight his brother knowingly 😊 this is indeed my Yudhi 😳
One question, that touching on shoulder part is mentioned as if Karna was making himself pure (as I can remember). Is it true?

Originally posted by: Urmila11

You have correctly portrayed Yudhi's guilt. He is famous for guilt feelings 😆 But I think he had enough reason to be angry if we remember Karna's words to Draupadi in dyuta sabha. I respect this person who had the ability to forgive Karna for those words just after knowing that Karna was his brother. Yes he was hurt maximum after this. But I thank you for not mentioning the curse. It cannot be found in all versions and I don't know if it is very authentic or not. And I liked the part where he thinks that he did not fight his brother knowingly 😊 this is indeed my Yudhi 😳
One question, that touching on shoulder part is mentioned as if Karna was making himself pure (as I can remember). Is it true?

I do not really remember about that touching of shoulder part. 😳 Actually, I wrote this almost five years back. 😃. But glad you liked it.

An excellent piece of writing didi!!!
The helplessness, the pain and yes guilt... we cant measure how disheartful he must had felt. For me among all the pandavas, I guess he must have been the one who was in maximum shock. All the others disliked him coz of many reasons. But he disliked him only because of those insulting words for panchali. He always forgave him when he joined dury n company and spoke ill for him(yudi). But got hurt whenever he harmed arjun or draupadi.
The rememberance of feet and that of smile was so beautiful ! Thank you for no scene of curse. I guess this would only have happened. He, who worshiped his mother would have understood her not cursed (when I saw no curse scene in starbharat I thought they skipped it, but now I guess it wasn't there only).
Waiting for next one... 😊

Originally posted by: Mohiniapearl

An excellent piece of writing didi!!!
The helplessness, the pain and yes guilt... we cant measure how disheartful he must had felt. For me among all the pandavas, I guess he must have been the one who was in maximum shock. All the others disliked him coz of many reasons. But he disliked him only because of those insulting words for panchali. He always forgave him when he joined dury n company and spoke ill for him(yudi). But got hurt whenever he harmed arjun or draupadi.
The rememberance of feet and that of smile was so beautiful ! Thank you for no scene of curse. I guess this would only have happened. He, who worshiped his mother would have understood her not cursed (when I saw no curse scene in starbharat I thought they skipped it, but now I guess it wasn't there only).
Waiting for next one... 😊

Thank you. I too do not believe he ever cursed his mother. On a lighter note, even if he did, it wasn't very effective, was it? Women are still better at keeping secrets than men!!! 😉