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I totally adored this chapter.. Tis has just become close to my heart.. So beautifully written and I could picture the entire scene infront of my eyes.. Do update the next part and do PM me..

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

You made me cry, Devika!! So beautifully written!!! And every emotion was so well described that I could feel it playing in my mind!!! Awesome,dear!!! I loved the Dharm ke aansh Pitashri Vidur's love to Aryaputra Yudhishtir!!! I so loved it!! And even Pitamah's part was overwhelming for me!!

Thank you so much Jiji 😊 glad that you liked it so much 😊 yes pitashri Vidur & Aaryaputra Yudhishthir are complimentary to each other 😃 dono hi Dharma ke ansh hain na!

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh

Diii

I had a wide smile while reading this update 😃

Pitamah named them pandavas 😃

i felt like i was watching the entire thing happening infront of my eyes 👏

yudi's encounter with Pitamah & Vidur had my eyes filled with tears...they had so much love for yudi

dhrit had always been the same...poor yudi he yearned for love from his kaka which wasnt showered upon him

Thank you so much sister 🤗 feeling blessed that you liked it so much 😊
Yes both Pitamaha & Vidur kaka loved him very much but jyesth pita Dhritarashtra he knew only how to blackmail innocent Yudhi emotionally 😡
Keep reading 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!

Originally posted by: vaishali09

Hey Urmi,

Nice update.

I liked the song and so apt, particularly for a person who is away from home.

Loved the interactions of Yudhi with his family members. His feelings upon meeting each one.

Pitamah named them Pandavas.

But the best part for me was your description for the palace and the sarcasm. That's what I like in your

writing.

U always bring something unusual and beautiful thing in your writing.

Keep up the good work.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank you very much dear 😊 yes that song is very suitable for this situation.
Yudhi was a family man always so his feelings regarding family members is an important matter 😊 I felt that his peaceful nature would feel suffocated to see that palace's extreme wealthy appearance, that's why I showed it.
Keep reading 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!

Originally posted by: Yashomati

Wohaao Urmi di pandavs arrival was very beautifully written. Superb and Rabindranath tagore's translation was too good.👏

Yes yes we must not discuss that chapter inyour peaceful thread. i am sure Krishna would guide you through out to justify Yudhi's character! He really deserves all the respect. My best wishes with you😊

Thank you so much dear sister 😊 glad that you liked it 😊
Krishna always blesses a noble intention so I have complete faith on Him 😃 thanks for you wishes dear 😊 a devotee's wish is like a blessing for me 😊 keep reading! Jai Shri Krishna!

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

Another brilliant update!!
Loved Tagore's lines...so apt for this chapter
You have captured the love of Bheesma for his grandsons so well and the blind king's hesitation...very nicely shown
And Yudi's words at the end...that is exactly what he would have said in that situation I think!!

Thank you so much 😊 yes those song lines are suitable here 😊
Bhishma's love is one of the things which made Pandavas' lives easy, otherwise HP would became a hell for them 😭 Dhritarashtra's black side is yet to come.
Yes, it's Yudhi's basic nature, & I'm glad that you have understood him 😊 keep reading 😊

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Semadi, You're Truly A Saint ! You Described Everything So Beautifully ! i Felt Like Yudishthir Has Written This All Himself, Through You, Devi Devike !

Proteeti, this is the best comment I have received here so far 😊 you are so sweet dear 😊 I am an ordinary person but I wish if I were a saint, then only I would have deserved saint Dharmaraj as my lord 😳 thank you so much dear, & loved the new name, Devi Devika 😃

Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99

oh my god,this was so emotional, and finally he is here...I mean the place where he belongs..it was extremely well written,I really liked the part between Yudhishthir- Vidur,I always cherished their bonding and I am so glad you showed it .Will wait for your updates :))

Regards

Muskan :)

Thank you so much Muskan 😊 glad that you liked it 😊 & yes Vidur-Yudhi's bond is like Bhishma-Arjun's bond, very pure & lovely 😊 I too cherish it. Vidur was the best person in HP who understood him. Keep reading 😊

Originally posted by: veeranu

I totally adored this chapter.. Tis has just become close to my heart.. So beautifully written and I could picture the entire scene infront of my eyes.. Do update the next part and do PM me..

Thank you for reading & commenting 😊 I am glad that you liked it 😊 have you read the previous chapters as well? I sent PMs to you. Keep reading 😊

Are Wah!!...what an update!!.,UrmilaDi...very touching n worthwhile one.👏👏..my heart experienced both joy n sorrow simultaneouly while reading this part...Yudhishthir's thoughts about the royal palace...so true...could feel his feelings...